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Posted: 16 years ago
@Maitri: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...such a cute update.........Loved it hun and I could visualize all the scenes..

I guess Goa has done wonders on you too.............😆

I wish for those babies who sleep and do not intrupt at all.....Gosh, is that possible???lolllllllllllllllllll...

@Precap: ROFLINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGgg...can't wait for that.........

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one complaint not happy with this line
They soon changed.. lay in bed.. kissed each other good night and before they knew it, they were off to sleep!!



I am with Kariz on this one...............aree yaar, no intruptions during AR scenes and no sleeping as soon as they hit the bed...........That's creatives job Maitri..You need to add all the masala we want............lollllllllllllllllll

Love you girl...It was great.........👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey maitru meri jaan wahhhhhhhhhhhh wah kya update the yaar i am speechless d way u show their immense lv fr ech othr wonderful brilliant yaar..........i h no words thy r soooooooo happpppppppy wth ech othr nd their babiess sab pata hot hai mum pa ko kab disturb karna hota hai or kab nahi thts ws superb yaar all gathrd in thir hous nd saaw cricket wow yaar how cute yaar all bst frnds aridz lv,their cute utie nok-jhok awwwwwwwwwwwwwww chooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeet yaar ridz ws soooooooo happppppppppppppy bth wre lvly couple........romantic 1 cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont sooooooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
HEY, CONTINUE SOON...
JUST READ ALL UR PARTS....
THEY WERE AMAZING...
PLS CONTINUE SOON.... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 8:

RECAP:
All the four of them slept like such an adorable family.. Without caring about their surroundings.. Just like a satisfied.. happy family..
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The next day passed by very quickly.. Armaan was enjoying every small bit of his holiday.. But that day, he felt as if something was majorly wrong.. or majorly correct.. Riddhima kept surprising him every minute of the day.. Morning while cooking, instead of the dupatta being crossed around her body, she'd tied it around her head.. then she kept jumping and dancing all through the day.. when he got the chance, he made Riddhima sit down and talk to him.. not too serious a talk.. so he used his funny way to get her to talk..
Edited by maitri505 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

A: Riddhima, kya tumne aaj apni coffee mein mistake se alcohol toh nahi daal diya naa?? Subah se dekh raha hu.. You're acting like a small baby..

R: Jee nahi dr. armaan.. itna bhi matt sochiye.. you know i don't drink.. bas aise hi.. aaj wahi karne ka mann hain jo main karna chahti hu.. babies bhi aaj acchi tara se so rahe hain.. toh maine socha ki kyun na thodi masti kee jaaye??!! (she had the twinkle of naughtiness in her eyes) aur waise bhi.. shaadi ke pehle har baar mujhe baby baby bulate rehte the.. toh main toh tumhari baby hi hu na??

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Posted: 16 years ago

Armaan, also getting into the naughty mood, played along with her..

A: ofcourse Baby!! you're my BEST baby!! gave her a flying kiss!! hmmm.. masti.. what do you mean??

R: idhar hi baethe raho.. main 5 mins mein aayi.. aur ha.. main aaj jo bhi karne jaa rahi hu, please mujhe stop matt karna yeh sochke ki mujhe baadh mein bhura lage ga.. Please Armaan.. Today, after so long, i wnat to do something i want to do.. I know ki main selfish ban rahi hu..

A: bas.. shhh.. main samajh gaya jaan.. Aaj aapko koi nahi rokega.. Jaldi aao.. Now go im getting bahut curious..

Armaan was highly confused.. but he shrugged off that thought.. Riddhima was extremely worked up since the past few days and deserved to do what she wished.. so he let her do whatever she wanted.. Riddhima on the other hand had planned everything perfectly.. Since morning she was getting into the mood of naughty..

Edited by maitri505 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

She always had a desire to be herself and act and do things what the child in her wanted to.. But however much everyone told her that marriage shouldn't change things at all, she knew those were just kehne ki baatein.. after marriage, its shocking if the wife behaves in a kiddish manner.. But today, she didn't want to stop herself.. and didn't want Armaan to stop her either.. When she came out after 10mins.. Armaan was shocked.. beyond words.. She was looking gorgeous!! She wore a beautiful knee length champagne colour outfit with big earrings.. make up to the bare minimum.. Armaan looked at her as if some goddess was standing in front of him... His eyes were growing bigger with each second.. Riddhima just laughed.. put on tonnes of candles.. and dimmed all the lights.. and then, she put on a nice, slow tune..

R: Dr. Armaan, may i have this dance?? (she offered him her hand)

Edited by maitri505 - 16 years ago
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Armaan was tooooo stunned to react.. He'd never seen his wife like that before.. But know everything dawned unto him.. Before their marriage, she was extremely shy.. and he didn't mind it.. After their marriage, she was shy.. but not as much.. and the last time they made love, it was he who'd taken the first step, although they both had decided that they wanted to start a family.. This time, he knew she wanted to be the one to take the first step.. and he didn't stop her.. He came out of his thoughts when he found Riddhima drag him closer to her and put her arms around his neck and sway to the soft, beautiful music.. He smiled and put his arms around her waist and swayed along with her.. he could feel Riddhima's smile widen.. Riddhima moved her lips towards his chest.. She gave him a soft kiss there.. She didn't know why.. but kissing him on the chest always made her.. and him feel special.. She herself didn't know why, but whenever they had "their moment" she loved starting it with that kiss on his chest.. It got back beautiful memories..

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Armaan smiled and kissed her bare shoulder and then her neck.. Riddhima was getting pangs and chills.. His breath on her always made her feel that way.. But today, she'd decided and didn't want to not do it.. She too kissed his ear lobe and then bit it playfully...

A: ouch!! Riddhima.. Kya kar rahi ho??

R: kya?? it was out of passion..

A: Passion??

As much as he loved it, he knew if she didn't stop, his right ear lobe would be numb for life.. before he said anything, riddhima herself pulled him and took him over to the sofa... She literally pushed him on the sofa, and then sat on his lap, sideways, with her arms around his neck..

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R: Ha, lover boy.. passion.. uss word ka matlab pata hain?? (she said in such a seductive tone, that armaan too got into the mood that instant.. well, thats what she wanted!)

A: accha, toh ab main tumhe passion ka matlab mere tareeke se batata hu.. lover girl!!

R: accha.. toh batao.. im waiting.. STILL waiting..

suddenly she let out a groan, which she did not regret this time.. Armaan kept giving her gentle pecks on back of her neck.. Riddhima was enjoying every bit of it when she suddenly felt armaan getting up, with her in his arms, gazing into her soulfull eyes.. he made their way into the bedroom and closed the door behind him...
PS: Note below Yachna's comment!!
Edited by maitri505 - 16 years ago

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