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Meghna

@Meghzz

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#101

Yay!!!!!m d first one........

OK *quick confession* read d AR part first and then d Cricket part.....Both were awesome....2 gud for words...The ambience of d date u picturised was soo dreamy😳....awwwww 2 d AR part....awww 2 Riddhima.....and armaan.....OK tats Sana's department....

Thanx maitri.....*hugssss* cont soon.......

P.S. u surpassed expectations sweets......👏

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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#102

Maitri that was soooooo cuute!!!! I could picture it all really well in my head, loved it 🤗 haii esp. the part at the end when Armaan catches her flying kiss & holds it against his heart...sooo cute, soo Armaan! lol! aww greaaaat job hun!!! 🤗🤗

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#103

maitri: that was amazing... each time i would read a bit more... my heart pounded and would say thats it there they go... but my ppv thoughts would die down... coz nothing happened.. then reading further, riddhima opening his shirt buttons thats wen my brain lost it completely *MAJOR PPV THOUGHTS*... i was finding it difficult to concentrate and read, kept imagining myself instead of riddhima *ahem*.... damn it, nothing further, my ppv thoughts are cursing you... .lmao... but i must say it was amazing, couldnt be written any better... i must say armaan must have had a blast!!!!!!!!!!!! coz i really did.... i could literally hit my head on the wall.... luvd it..... any other flashbacks u want to write about for us JB's to make us all loney with ppv thoughts??? lmao

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armaanilicious

@armaanilicious

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#104

Omgg Maitruu it was soooooooooooooooooooo cute! i cud picture each and everythin! omg can u imagine Riddihma unbottoning Armaans shirt LMAO...i loved loved it...specially how both feel that he/she loves me soooooooo much after the kiss and how ridzi blows kisses on her way down...very very cute scene i want this nowww!!!

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Wentholic

@Wentholic

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Preeti_285
Maitri that was soooooo cuute!!!! I could picture it all really well in my head, loved it 🤗 haii esp. the part at the end when Armaan catches her flying kiss & holds it against his heart...sooo cute, soo Armaan! lol! aww greaaaat job hun!!! 🤗🤗

Exactly Manu... I could so imagine all that... Maitri. it's just so beautiful and romantic... *sigh*... totally lived upto our expectations girl....... just totally loved it..

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nimisha

@nimiluvkaran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#106

its was superb dear//im ur FF"s new reader..just 1 question wat is JB crew..??

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Maitri Gandhi

@maitri505

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#107

@meghzzz: thnaks sooooooooo much!!!! glad u liked it!!

@preetiiii: muahhhhhhh!! that flying kiss part is my favourite too!! love it!! can totally imagine armaan doing it!! =)

@karuuu: i want this.. something like this to happen!! *hugssssss*

@sana: my PPV princess!!! soooooo happy u liked it!!

LMFAO @ ure ppv thoughts cursing me!!

@mahezzzzz: hunieeeeee!! thnaks sooooooo much!!

PPV alert???!!!

waiting for veenzie to read it!! then all the three PPV queens of the jb crew can compete on who has more thoguhts!! lolzzz!!

@im_deibest.. (sorry dunno ure name)

JB crew is the jing bang crew of the wed.. weekly episode discussion!! lolzz!! thnaks for liking it!!

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*tiny*

@*tiny*

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#108

ohhhhhhh, what a wonderful part!!

cant express how soothing and exciting as it was , just ike the sea breeze that was gently blowing in armaan's balcony..

amazing...

could u pleeeeeeeeeeeez PM me when u update?