Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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Niyati Joshi

@noyonika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#951

hey bheegi!!
read both parts 2day....actually my exams are starting from this month so i cant online tht often now...but today i was determined to and in much need of a break..lol!! and thank god i read it when u had updated the next part....i dont think i cud have survived the cliffhanger....i swear!!!!

what a twist..i guess after DYM and this part, u shud be called the 'queen' of twists..lol....u sure know how to get us to the edge of our seats...lol!! the parts were extremely interesting....the whole 'real reality show' thing is amazing!!! i cant believe simone!!!! forget angad, i guess all of us readers too were expecting an ailing, frail simone....and she turns up smoking!!! u know, i was half-expecting kripa to rebuke simone for smoking inspite of being ill....i mean i still dint get it tht this must all be a drama....

and poor angad....i really dont want to see his heart broken....he is sooo in love with kripa!!!! plus, valentine's day is just round the corner!!!! u cant do this to them...lol...

as usual i'm curious to know what happens next....my god....everywhere there r such twists happening....DMG's got AR separating coz of shashank n here coz of simon n the gang...

do put the next part up soon!! please...really wanna know what happens next...:)

love,
Niyati..

P.S.: the 'Josh Abraham' name somehow really cracked me up...good going...!!!

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#952

thanks for the pm di

great part

but i have a feelin that simone will ruin things between ak and may lie to him since kripa might just not do what she wanted

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tehreem

@tehreemm

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#953

oh god thts soo unfair to angad like seriously hw can simone do such a thing she is ver heartless thax god some sense came into kripa's mind. Now i just hope nothing goes wrong continue soon

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
Amazing part
finally kripa has made her decision it seems that the dance has helped clear her feelings towards angad.Im glad angad never proposed in front of everyone becuase he may have suffered a heart break.The scene between rhea and kripa was very touching ,and when rhea said simone aunty i actually thought angad heard that.Simone always comes in the way even know she reached angad before kripa.

Thanks dear. U know kripa might have actually said YES had angad managed to propose right after the dance but let's see if it's too late or not😉

[quote=nehasfan]AWESOME PART!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

i jus hope Simone doesn't mess up anything n kripa jus listens 2 her heart

i m gettin scared 2 read d nxt part😔[/quote]

thanks nehasfan😊 well kripa is willing to listen to her heart but will angad after his convo with simone?😕

[quote=sonihinnu]hey bheegi no i actually like AR more coz i actually watch dmg but i never watched kyph lol but i guess i became a fan of them after reading ur ffs maybe they are more passionate thats y i like ther ffs more:P and also maybe because iveactually emt neha bamb lol
jaaon kahan song is from the movie billu barber....
btw i saw slumdog millionaire and luck by chance...i thought they both were boring lol i only watched luck by chance coz ranbir had a special appearance lmao[/quote]

thanks Hinnu. I love dthe jaaoon kahan song...i'll def use it😃 U didn't like SDM? It's a great movie yaar, very well made altho I agree it's made for the west rather than the east. I really want to see luck by chance as i love Koko and Farhan akhtar😃

[quote=mahi4u]hey di

wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was a grt prt 👏

cont super soooooooonnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru[/quote]

thanks mahru😊...TC too

[quote=sheetal00]i have a question does rhea know simone's whole scheme of revenge from Angad? [/quote]

No Rhea doesn't! She has just been told to act so she can get a part in Simone's movie. 😕

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#955

Originally posted by: ShelDev
Hello Bheegi:

Another excellent update....so finally Angad meets the Simone....wonder what will happen next...😲

Kripa is fighting her feelings for Angad....she obviously feels bad about it all. I just wonder how Angad will react when he comes to know about this "reality show" game played on him...😭...Poor Rhea what's gonna happen to her....

Please update soon & thanks for the PM...😆

Shel

Thanks shel...well the next part will come as a shock for a number of our characters for sure😕 wait and see😃

[quote=sweet_mittal]hey di last parts were awesome and great

can't believe it was simone who plan all this to make angad suffer and that too now when he is really became good

i hope kripa listen to her heart can't do anything against angad

so rhea is not his daughter but i think he still gonna adopt her

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee don't separate angad and kripa

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal[/quote]

Thanks Mittal...good to 'see' u again. How's nursing school? Good guess about angad😃 but let's see what games simone is up to

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Jannat

@NYPunjabii

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#956

Originally posted by: bheegi
Thanks jannat. Yes, Muniza did a great job as always with the VM😊 Well, this whole story has gone through a lot of twists and changes....let's see where we end up in the next part😆 U won't believe but I keep improvising with every part....let's see what happens next😉

You keep improvising with each part..😆..i dont believe you..jk..
That just shows me how great of a writer you are..your extremely talented at writing..without planning you write down each part..I always thought that you just jot down on paper then type..but WOW 😲
I did not even see one blooper..even if there are, your a great writer so people won't notice it 😉
Like what masin said even I read all your FF's like a million times (thats my favorite pastime in the summer and breaks to read your AK ff's..😆) and did not even find a blooper let alone notice one!
All i will say KEEP IT UP THE AWESOME WORK!😛 👏
I am glad to know such a writer and read their piece of 'art' 👍🏼
Hope to see you with more such stories (hopefully on more AK ones also😳) on I-F and you keep reading my boring comments 😆
👍🏼 👏

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: rima791
beautiful part
OMG!!! hope kripa will be on time!!!

stupid simone!! ugghhh, i hate her!!

i hope things just turn out gr8 for AK!!!

do cont soon when you can

Thanks rima. Will Kripa get to angad and simone before it's too late???😕

[quote=masin]hey di!

I AM EXTREMELY SOORRIEE for not commenting for the longest time

i was actually about to check the FF section today, but thankfully i got ur pm :)

im probably your worst fan cuz i havent been commenting lately :( its just tht second semester has started and im just in gr.9, so ive been trying to figure out my classess and stufff....LOL!!! plus just had exams and then weekends are always busy so i've been tuned out of I-F for the past two weeks!!!!

anyways...i cant leave a long comment once again as i have to be up early 2moro; however, i must say tht this part was beyound fab!!! the VM of course suited the situation perfectly!!! :D and in fact i was skimming thru the pages and ur comments and saw tht u said how ur actually improvising fr each part!!! maann ur too good!!!!!! and honestly speaking, i am yet to find a single blooper in any of ur ffs...and trust me i know wht im talking about...i read tumhari amanat like twice and turtleneck gurl like another 5 times and the smaller ones (first kiss and ehsaas) like another 50 times :D :D

as for this part:

-simone is just a piss off who's gonna mess up the situation big time!

-i'm glad kripa has her feelings sorted, but angad being quite implusive...i wonder how he'll react

-and poor rhea, she's and orphan! and shes bonded so well with AK..remember when she said tht she wish they got married...and now they're not even related!! but either way, relationships don't necessarily depend on blood, but rather on love :)

-and now the whole things makes sense about kanan trying to get the DNA! i mean i noticed how u mentioned it a lot and i kept thinking tht its pointless to mention the DNA..but as a writer u obv did not write any extra and useless stuff in any of ur ffs!! so tht was my stupidity..LOL!!!!! tho now it all makes sense...cuz if kanan had done the DNA, phir parda waqt se pehle khul jaata!!

anyways i gtg now...but thanks fr pming me

o and i heard tht ur going on a trip to India..well have fun there!!

i wish u all the best, and hope you enjoy, be safe, and have tonzz of fun away frm ur hectic life!!!!!!

keep me posted

lots of love

Samra[/quote]

Thanks samra. Well, I do plan the basic structure of my story before i write it but the little details, twists and turns happen as the story progresses. This is the first story where most of the twists and turns were not preplanned at all....so bear with me here😆 Thanks for ur confidence in me and thanks for all the wonderful comments. I am really excited about my trip. Hope I can update one more time before i depart😊

[quote=arohaangel]the master ploann....finally ending, rhea is an prphan..i can't beilive what a B**** simone can be....F*** her.....i hate her..lolz..intereseting part with loads of srprises, teists and turns....i wonder whats gone go between simone and angad..[/quote]

Thanks sam....u can hurl all those abuses against simone openly😆 but remember Angad was guilty about using her for his own benefit😕

[quote=ladoo645]

Man Di's I was holding m breath when I was reading this part, thinking this it IT, but phew u kept it for the next part lol.

Must say tho Kripa in such dilemma'.with a witch like Simone'..ahhh I really do hope it works out!

Love the suspense!

-Natasha[/quote]

Thanks natasha....yeah ur right, poor Kripa she is stuck and she is in a tough spot here😕

[quote=krina17]Yea. Di, it is true; that it got recognition because it is from westerner.
I need your help my college essay. Di, you write very well. How do you set up the emotions and drama in the writing. my is not even close to the drama. If you get chance can you please PM some guidelines. Thank you, Di.

Take care,
krina [/quote]

Practice and experience...i guess that's how I have learnt that and I am sure u can do a great job too. IM me when u get a chance. I would love to help😊

[quote=angad-kripa#1]So great.

Awesome part Bheegz!!

Cont soon and plz pm me.

Tht Angad and Simone part is realy scaring me.

What if she sayz sumthin abt Kripa which seperates AK.

Harji[/quote]

Thanks Harji....well simone is certainly a trouble maker here..wait and see what happens😃

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#958

hey di last parts were awesome and great

can't believe it was simone who plan all this to make angad suffer and that too now when he is really became good

i hope kripa listen to her heart can't do anything against angad

so rhea is not his daughter but i think he still gonna adopt her

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee don't separate angad and kripa

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal[/quote]

Thanks Mittal...good to 'see' u again. How's nursing school? Good guess about angad😃 but let's see what games simone is up to

hey di acutally i graduate from LVN nursing school last week now i have to study for my Board exam to get the license

hopefully i get my license soon so i can start working

thanks for asking

love ya

mittal

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#959

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal
hey di last parts were awesome and great

can't believe it was simone who plan all this to make angad suffer and that too now when he is really became good

i hope kripa listen to her heart can't do anything against angad

so rhea is not his daughter but i think he still gonna adopt her

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee don't separate angad and kripa

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal[/quote]

Thanks Mittal...good to 'see' u again. How's nursing school? Good guess about angad😃 but let's see what games simone is up to

hey di acutally i graduate from LVN nursing school last week now i have to study for my Board exam to get the license

hopefully i get my license soon so i can start working

thanks for asking

love ya

mittal

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#960

Originally posted by: noyonika
hey bheegi!!
read both parts 2day....actually my exams are starting from this month so i cant online tht often now...but today i was determined to and in much need of a break..lol!! and thank god i read it when u had updated the next part....i dont think i cud have survived the cliffhanger....i swear!!!!

what a twist..i guess after DYM and this part, u shud be called the 'queen' of twists..lol....u sure know how to get us to the edge of our seats...lol!! the parts were extremely interesting....the whole 'real reality show' thing is amazing!!! i cant believe simone!!!! forget angad, i guess all of us readers too were expecting an ailing, frail simone....and she turns up smoking!!! u know, i was half-expecting kripa to rebuke simone for smoking inspite of being ill....i mean i still dint get it tht this must all be a drama....

and poor angad....i really dont want to see his heart broken....he is sooo in love with kripa!!!! plus, valentine's day is just round the corner!!!! u cant do this to them...lol...

as usual i'm curious to know what happens next....my god....everywhere there r such twists happening....DMG's got AR separating coz of shashank n here coz of simon n the gang...

do put the next part up soon!! please...really wanna know what happens next...:)

love,
Niyati..

P.S.: the 'Josh Abraham' name somehow really cracked me up...good going...!!!

Thanks Niyati. Good luck with exams and visit IF as and when u can. even i will be out of town most of this month so won't update for awhile either. Yeah, i saw AR on the verge of separation in DMG. Wonder why the creatives are doing this around valentines? well, my AK are also going through a tough time right now...let's see how they come out of this😕 I know Josh Abraham sounded to close to John Abraham😆

[quote=deeya123]thanks for the pm di

great part

but i have a feelin that simone will ruin things between ak and may lie to him since kripa might just not do what she wanted[/quote]

Thanks deeya...let's see what games simone plays. Does she lie or does angad interpret things wrongly??😕

[quote=tehreemmirza]oh god thts soo unfair to angad like seriously hw can simone do such a thing she is ver heartless thax god some sense came into kripa's mind. Now i just hope nothing goes wrong continue soon[/quote]

thanks tehreem...remember angad was unfair to simone once upon a time😕

[quote=nypunjabii]You keep improvising with each part..😆..i dont believe you..jk..
That just shows me how great of a writer you are..your extremely talented at writing..without planning you write down each part..I always thought that you just jot down on paper then type..but WOW 😲
I did not even see one blooper..even if there are, your a great writer so people won't notice it 😉
Like what masin said even I read all your FF's like a million times (thats my favorite pastime in the summer and breaks to read your AK ff's..😆) and did not even find a blooper let alone notice one!
All i will say KEEP IT UP THE AWESOME WORK!😛 👏
I am glad to know such a writer and read their piece of 'art' 👍🏼
Hope to see you with more such stories (hopefully on more AK ones also😳) on I-F and you keep reading my boring comments 😆
👍🏼 👏[/quote]

Thanks Jannat! U all make me feel good about my ff altho I know there are bloopers galore😆 I have taken more liberties with this ff than i had with any of my previous ones. I love all ur comments and could never get bored of u guys😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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