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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
gr8 part! i hope nothing goes wrong once simone gets here and angad actually proposes! cont soon :)

Let's see what happens in the climax😃😉😕

[quote=abhilashasharma]has simone come already? whose familiar voice is that? not anitha plz...the part proceeded so quickly... i wonder whats gonna happen when simone comes back....
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Thanks abhi....wait and see what happens. well, i am trying to get to the climax quickly without beating around the bush😆

[quote=sweet_honey] heyy....awesome part......lovd a-kz dance....awww kripa thought angad was up2 sumat else wen he was jus goin to turn the music on lol....hmmmm wndda wats gna appen at the function....huz voice was dat? simones??

a cnt wait 4 nex part plz conts oooon[/quote]

Thanks sweet honey.....yes the next part will have the big surprise😉

[quote=krina_17]Hi... di.. This part part really nice and At end the surprise... of Unknown entry is like SOME ONE COMING AS AN WALL BTWEEN AK's LOVE STORY...

MY guesses are: Simone, Anita or Rosie (Angad's Ex-GF).... good guesses😉

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This part was nice and yes di i remeber the Predictions in my last few updates.... It is wonderful that my predictions became the major part of this FF... it is gr8.... ur idea got me thinking😃

This part seems shorter, but u left us with lots of thinkin that who is that Person?? actually it was long😆

And as now Angad is Planning so much for him and Kripa's Proposal.... I hope Simone's entry does not ruin all of that....

And also Mr. Josh Abraham seems to be a strange man... I think it is Shabbir, came here find out mystery btwn Angad-Kripa-Rhea.... next 2 parts will reveal all mysteries

It was the fast part and very well written. the scenes of Dancing was good and the song Kahin To Hogi Woh.... Is one of the Favorite Song.... very romantic.... I Hope that Naina Khanna becomes Angad and kripa's support In the Strom that 's waiting for them.... thanks 4 liking the songs

Simone is the Big Strom for AK's Love story..... dekho dekho😉

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Keep up the excellent scenes and also reveal the mysterious people in Next Part...

Anxiously Waiting.... Update Soon.... til than BYE AND HAPPY THANKSGIVING.... Happy Thanksgiving to u 2😊

TC, krina[/quote]

[quote=musicdiva]

Hellooo Bheegi!!

Awesome part again! Im so happy Angad openly accepted Rhea as his daughter!

But knowing your story styles, i would expect something very bad happen during the performance, because u've shown angad's plannings on how he's going to propose to kripa, and all the things he's wrapped in that gift for her, and how he's got his mother and collegues to come to the event, im afraid none of this is going to work!

Mishy did have a hand in Anita's plans, and unknown to that, Angad has left everything for her to handle in the event, so im sure she might do some gadbad!

And the deal with Simone is still a little mysterious! She's only known by the "phonecalls", and never shown in person... wonder what's up with that! Im even starting to have doubts that she has cancer, but only ur story will tell! hehe

For some reason, im really scared to read ur next part because i know its not going to be as good at all as you have made it sound.. I'll still be waiting though ;-)

Tata

Simi[/quote]

Thanks simi....yes next 2 parts will reveal a lot of mysteries...but remember even if there is a storm, the end will be happy😃 BTW, i agree with ur idea...i will finish DYM first and then come back to SWD😊

[quote=missypatel]congo on 100 pages bheegi....:)!!lol

that was a gud catch up on d last one..yeh! luved hw its goin smooth yet like a silence bfr d storm...!!and its funny bt i cnt wait for the storm 2 erupt and wat it tkes away along wit it...
kripa-angad were beautiful..i lke how kripa for a min doubted angad but angad didnt care for her remark...he stayed calm n undisturbed...!!
luved teddyz thoughts..nainaz perfect entry..and rheaz exposure 2 the acceptance of her papa...!!
again...d familiar voice....doesnt gve sum hints..of it bein either anita or simone...more ike d latter...bt well koe wen u let us!!
will wait for the nxt 1...soon!! beats r high for it all...d dance and d risin level of d storm...yes!! update soooon!!

luved it bheegi!!

nij =)[/quote]

Thanks nijal....it's interesting that some readers are scared of the impending storm and some are anxious to know about it😃....well u will have a to wait a little as i am planning to finish DYM first now😊

[quote=rima791]excellent part

i do hate her so bad, she is just eewww, so hate her

love the jaane tu song

omg!! i think angad's heart will break once he sees simone

i think josh will end up with or is with simone

poor kripa, she is gonna be so confused when he proposed her

rhea, the poor thing

teddy is choo sweet

naina seems like a positive character

nishant is so rude

plz plz plz do cont soon di

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Thanks Rima...yes i love that song too...so romantic😳. Good guesses but wait and see what happens😉

[quote=rongna]owh could that be simone that sounds familiar to angad?? please continue soon.[/quote]

wait and see...thanks rongna😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: *MitiRasmalai*
PART 9

I am glad that Angad is taking good care of rhea..they would definalty follow for any father daughter jodi.....I am happy that Rhea is finally getting the love and care which she deserves...
thanks Mita....yes this was the ultimate test of angad's character

haha...Rhea is one smart cookie...the way she catches the little details is really impressive...

Its cute how after being caught be Rhea Angad acted all ignorant about where kripa lived loll

I like the changes in Angad ...in the beginning I would have never imagined him playing cricket with some young boys off the street...i thought he would have been too proud of his position that he wouldn't want to ruin his reputation by playing with a group of young teens...But now it seems like he could care less about such small things...even tho he would not admit that right now...and would think of it as just another stint to build hi image...but deep down he knows that's not true...he really whole hearty had enjoyed himself...

aww...Angad feeling protective not just for Kripa..but Rhea as well is really cute...and on top of that he found an excuse to pick up Kripa everyday loll

haha....Rhea is soo adorable..embarrassing angad in front of kripa...haha..

I am glad that Angad had praised and admired Kripa's dancing skills...Not just as an entertainment...but he really respected her skills and that obviously means alot to a girl like kripa....especially coming form Angad..

well looks like Angad is slowly realizing his past deeds..and really thinking about all his wrong doings...Its true when people say that one cant see their own back until someone points them out to u one cant always see their negative points..and in Angad's case...not only kripa and Rhea but people like mishty are even getting angad to think about his own behaviors...

I hope that its not too late before Angad realizes his mistakes and does soemthing to improve himself....Not everyone is lucky enough to get second chances... exactly! will he really get a second chance?? that's the million dollar question😉

oh wow...Angad is really daring..lol..The way he lifted kripa in front of the whole class is really admirable...lol...Only he can act to Kripa's stubbornness...lol

loll...The scene when Angad was curing Kripa's injured kneww was both amusing and sweet...And the way that Angad mentioned that Kripa got distracted because of him and kripa having no reply back was so cute...

Looks like Kripa really has something against guys who flirt or look at woman in a not so pleasant way....And from the thing which she had heard from Simone certainly is holding her up from falling into his charms...But then again for how long will kripa keep away form Anagd...she cant resist his charms for too long....loll yes she does hate men who don't treat women right...because of her past with her chacha😕

And AK's teasing when they got out was quite funny...loll

Oh god so Anitah wants to leak info about both Angad and kripa to the press??...Why would she want to do soemthing like that??

I really liked how u described Kripa's emotions: Kripa turned the lights off to the studio and followed them to the car with a knot of confused emotions inside her'it was a struggle between her heart and her mind, between right and wrong, between loyalty and betrayal''.despite all these internal struggles, she was sure that there was an invisible cord that drew her closer and closer to this man, whom she had pledged to despise, but was now having a hard time resisting'.
these emotions are very important for the climax of the story😉

PART 10

The way that Angad's, Kripa's, and Rhea's views were portrayed in the beginning was a great touch..Angad is slowly realizing the changes which have been taking place in him...and Kripa is starting to realize the positive things in angad and how he's a different person than what he was when they first time they had met..and from what Simone had told her about him.. I am glad that even Rhea is liking Angad...and I hope that really soon her wish about all of them living together in one house comes true...

aww...angad was trying to find an excuse to prevent kripa from going home..lol....how adorable..

haha...Angad should have become an actor..hes really good at faking things..

Oh wow....Kripa's life is wort than I had thought...especially with her chacha living with them.. I understand that her family feels indebted to him and that is the only reason to why they are even enduring him...but is their reputation more important to them than their daughters...I mean how can they have a guy like him stay at their house??...Thats hight pathetic...But kripa is certainly a strong women and knows how to not only look after herself but her family as well...No wonder Kripa didn't want to keep Rhea at her house...sue to her pervert chacha ofcource...I feel soo terrible for kripa..
kripa certainly has a lot of majbooris in her life😕

haha...It was hilarious when angad was like Agar app ithne peeche parde hai tho I'll stay loll...Hes really something....but it was really a cute scene...I am likeing this new Angad ... yes, he has changed😳

I cant belive that Kripa's family can be so desperate that they are crying about their miseries to Angad..I understand that they are stressed and worried about their financial needs themselves..but they shouldn't talk like that in front of an outsider and try to hide their miseries from strangers... i know a lot of people who do that😕

So even Angad had never thought beyond his passion for cricket and had neglected his family because of that...i hope that after looking at kripa's miserable state he realizes his mistake of neglecting his mother for his career...while Kripa is supporting her family with no support and working soo hard to help out her family all alone while they dont even care about her...while Angad neglected his only family for fame and money... another contrast between them

aww...anad really is starting to understand kripa..and he knows that she needs a...someone who understands her and is there to support her through her troubles...not someone who is sympathetic....

and the way that Angad conveyed his genue feelings to kripa was just outstanding really sweet

Lets see if Angad gets kripa to accept his offer... will she??

Anyoen would be confused in Kripa's place...One one side she had her loyalty toward her friend simone and on the other hand her desires...But its true what kripa said..after all Angad is human and everyone makes mistakes....But the most important thing is one learning from their mistakes...Realizing their wrong doings and try to rectify them....and not repeat them again...So shouldn't Angad get a chance to change??...Shouldn't he be given a chance to fix his mistakes??....After all he too is human ....

I wonder what Simone and Kripa talked about which is making kripa soo aloof from Angad.... wait and see😉

wow...AK's as always are hot and passionate...and I loved the way Angad expressed what kripa means to him...Really heart touching...

and they even had their first kiss and confession...Well i was just thinking angad will get Kripa to accept his offer of friendship...But looks like angad didn't want to waste any more time..so he decided to go straight for the confession...haha why did she accept his love and not freindship??

PART 11

i am glad that angad is trying to rectify his mistakes....by trying to help out Simone and accepting Rhea as his daughter..Without even carrying about what the DNA reports say...

Its really a delight seeing both angad and kripa soo happy and in love...

I guess its still hard for Kripa to fully accept that angad has changed...Even tho she sees and feels that he is changing...But at times his past imagine is stuck in her mind...and therefore takes his words the negative way...I hope that this doesn't create problems later on in AK's life..

wow...Angad missed his friends party which seems like is something which he had never done before..But then again at that time Angad didn't have Kripa in his life..Maybe before Kripa came into his life one of Angad's reasons to go to these parties were other women...but now that he has found the love of his life....he doesn't need any other woman in his life...

hahaha....angad dancing around the house was quite amusing..and he really must have been really embarrassed at being caught by Rhea and Teddy...Well who can blame him...after all its his really first love...loll

Aww...he gave rhea a gnight kiss...how sweettt..i remember when he rudely said no to Rhea when she asked him for a kiss....

omg so Anitah did really take those pictures...But why do I feel that Mishty did have some hand in this...

I am glad that Angad took control of the situation...his actions and words certainly reflected how much kripa's respect means to him...

loll...angad is really besharam..lol...he wanted kripa to take his faida hahaha...

In this situation its certain that angad is not trying to sav ehis own imagine...In the past there must have been many rumors like that...but he knows that hearing something like this is really hard for Kripa to take in ....

haha...aww....they ran away at the end...how cutee!!!

PART 12

Omg I am soo happy that at last Angad had allowed Rhea to call him her dad....I am soo happy right now....Poor Rhea really needed that and I am glad that Angad figured out what could cheer Rhea up at that point when she was missing her mom soo much...

oh wow....Even I was scared for a moment there ...with Angad's misleading remarks...But I am soo glad that Angad that Angad didn't take advantage of the situation...That moment just proved how much Angad truly loves kripa......Oh god why am I feeling that things are gonna take a bad shape some time soon and maybe Angad would be misunderstood by kripa...oh god I hope nothing like that happens....

Oh wow...I am really feeling scared for Angad ...I really hope that everything goes the way he has planned...Oh wow...so finally Simone is going to enter too hopefully things work out...and Simone forgives Angad...

omg Angad even brought his mom...thats was certainly a pleasant surprise....I am soo glad he realized his mistake...

AK as always just rock.....But it seems like this show really means alot for kripa...for her career...But I am a little uncertain about Josh....I hope no problems come in AK's way due to him....Oh god and on top of that Simone is gonna come too...This are really unpredictable at this moment...Hope everything goes well tho...

I wonder who the woman outside yelling for Kripa was....Was it Simone?...it obviously had to be someone both AK knew...well lets see what happens next...as I said things can get reall unpredictable...

Great parts as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon ...and keep up the great work!!!....👏

thanks for ur wonderful comments as always Mita.....really appreciate and look forward to them. Have a happy thanksgiving😊

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Nidha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#813

waoh di its really a superb one⭐️ so angad accept reah😊😛😃 so cute😛 and he buy gift for kripa so sweet😉 and hows voice is that plz continue it soon😊 and sorry😭😭😭 for late reply😳 and congrates on ur 100 pages😳😉

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Humse Tuta Hua Sisa Dekha Nahi Jata,
Apne Hisse Ki Khusiyan Bhi De Dun Tujhe,
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L= love u
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Ummat

@srk ki deewani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#814

Hey! ur ff iz superb!!!!👏

I luv it! 😊

Continue asap!😃

Edited by srk ki deewani - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: aish_punk
Hey bheegi...cute part...
I feel soo sad 4 Rhea.... d way she wz cryin literally touched mah heart...I noe wt pain it iz stay awy 4m ure Mom 4 such a lng tym n tat too @ such a young age..I'm happy @least AK wer wid her...if it had bn nt 4 em..Rhea wudnt @ awl b happy in dis wrld...Angad unnerstud her pain..bcuz eva he wz nt close 2 his mother @ tat moment...I'm soo happy tat he finally decided 2 bcum 'Papa' 2 Rhea...Rhea's hapiness wz boundless... thanks aish...yes despite her brave front, Rhea is after all just an eight year old😕

Tat nyt @ Angad's place wz indeed romantic... Eva Teddy wz happy wid Kripa...bcuz she wznt lykk d oda women hu treated him lykk a slave... she wz indeed diff...I dunno y Kripa had tat insecurity in her mind eva tho she knew tat Angad has chngd 4 her....he wz jus takin her 2 switch on d muzik..n she felt tat hez takin her 2 bed..!! Newy d dance wz romantic n itz indeed memorable...one thng tat we or they can neva 4g8!!! n d FF is also such... will this dance with angad effect the outcome of the climax at the hotel?

I'm happy Angad called his Mom bck..n she did cum..2 c her granddaughter n would-be daughter-in-law ...n Angad wz g8n soo desp 2 meet Kripa[lol] d event seems 2 b a grand 1 n d nyt-memorable..d way u hv described it...Well I hope Josh takes AK in a movie as lead roles!! [lol] It wud b amazin den..!! Well Angad is ryt abt telln Simone b4 d announcement..as she has d ryt 2 noe b4 odas..she will feel betrayed if she finds out later let's see how all the characters tie up together

Angad's plans seem very romantic wid d shagun ready n awl..I guess hez awl set....Kripa wz ryt..he thnks abt only dance nwadayz..tatz bcuz of her only...!! d green room scene wz quite romantic too..Angad as alwyz flirtin..n Kripa flirtin bck in a way..!! I wonder huz voice tat wz...it can b Simone..Anita or Mishti...it most probably seems Anita..well u've left us hangin on a cliff ryt nw..soo cnt rilli predict netyn..I hope derz no harm 2 Kripa..lykk dose typical movie stuff..dis is goin on DYM too...well I jus hope deir propsal n evrytyn goez f9..n dey g8 married soon as AK bod wish..n we awl wish..!! Then der definately will b a reason 2 celebrate wait and see what the twist is?

Plzzz cont soon..I'm dyin 2 read...eva update DYM soon...

Aishwarya

[quote=jodubai]Congrajulations on 100 pages Beeghi!!! you deserve it

lovely update

Kripa's insceurity whilst with Angad was so evident that she got annoyed at the poor guy for putting on music....he has changed for good

Angad accepting himself as Rhea's dad was the most adorable part of this part...after all Rhea needs atleast one parent with her

so, as expected you habe all hungama for the perfomance night, am sure the voice which Angad found familer was of Simone's..

continue soon...u forgot my pm....but its ok, since I did read it.

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Thanks JO....sorry about the PM....i am very erratic with the PMs + for some reason some names are getting deleted from my buddy list automatically😕 Kripa still gets insecure around angad.....will this effect the outcome of the competition??😕. Let's wait and see what happens😉

[quote=deeya123]great part di

outstanding

so much happened in this part...even though angad had accepted rhea but he allowed her to call him dad was too sweet

and yeah even i think that simon is back but i also think that mishti and josh may be together ..may be partners

well waitin for ur next chapter

cont soon!!![/quote]

Thanks Deeya...good guesses but u may or may not be right😉

[quote=saridena]hi bheegi di

awesome part di

angad is going t propose kripa yipeeeeeeeeeeeee

i hope becauz of simone kripa dont say no

angad said rhea to call him dad sooooooo happy

update soooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya[/quote]

Thanks soumya....let's see if angad will be able to propose?? and if he does, will kripa say yes or no??

[quote=cheeky_pari]Hey,

Congrates for completing 100 pages!!!! 🥳👏

It was a nice part, fantastic as usual!!! ⭐️

aaawww Rhea was missing her mom....poor girl. Thats good Angad allowed her to call him papa!!!

hhhhmmm....I would have done the same as what Kripa did; when Angad was holding her in her arms. "Bedroom" factor is always too scary for our girls! But i noticed something HERE instead of getting angry and making a big issue and argue about it (comparing to now a days lovers); Angad cleared her misunderstanding in light way. On other hand if its someone else on Angad's place then he would have told Kripa to get lost and never come back to me, you don't trust me etc etc etc!!!! Angad is big boy now (hehehehe😛)!

Hahaha 😆😆 i loved that line "You are a lioness trapped in an ant's body"

That voice sounded familiar to Angad. I think its Simone!!!

Do continue soon!

Take care

Pari

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Thanks pari...yes angad is a big boy now and really loves her. He would not want to lose her just because she mistrusted his intentions. Kripa is right in a way- after all angad does not have a stellar record with women😕 let's see if ur guess is right😉

[quote=mahi4u]hey di

wowwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was relllllllyyyyyyyy a sweeeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee prt😳

luveddd it

cont super sooooooooonnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Thanks mahru...i am glad u liked it😊

[quote=sonihinnu]congrats on 100 pgs for this ff too:D:D
aww how did rhea speak to simone??
awww angad finally became her papa officially:$ sooo sweeeeet!!!!! i knew that wud cheer her up!
i hope ke anitah aur mishti mile hue na ho...but i sitll hav a feeling someone is with her in all this....chacha?? or mayb simone? nahh cnt b simone:S:S
cud b kripa lolz but doubt it
omggg angad:@:@ scaring poor kripa lol!!!
kripa sherni hahaha
love dtheir dance<3333333
omg hes gna propose...sumfin is def gna go rong!!!!
akz happiness and dreams are shortlived:(:(
there will be no smile on kripaz face lyk hez expecting...only tears:'(
i guess the sari and jewelry wud go to waste too:(:(
is angad participating in the competition with kripa??
hope rheaz family dream comes true!!!
iz simone just visiting or is she na stay with rhea:S:S:S wat bwt her treatment???
omg i hope nishant isnt the eprson separating ak:O
i thought tht said john abraham i nearly fell off ma chair🤣🤣///is he mishtiz bf? or is she gna fall for him?
ohhh does josh know simone??:O
nishant is soo rude:@
ahhh cnt wait for AK to dance on the stage:P:P
"aaj raat jo bhi ho…..remember I will always love you…" hope she does....uh oh kuch tohoga!!!!
i fink shel misunderstand him!:(:(
kisi ki buri nazar to zaroor lagegi:(
why cnt she c da surprise before the comp?:P
moisture in kripas eyes??? is sumfin rong? is he hiding sumfin from angad?:S:S
omg nooo plz continue d part na:(:(
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Thanks Hinnu....the credit for 100 pages goes to you all😃.....i know AK love stories are always marred by uncertainity, separations and misunderstandings😕.....aaj ki raat yahan kya hoga? Yes, AK are supposed to dance in the competition. Is Kripa hiding something?? good guess...wait and see😉

[quote=sweet_mittal]hey di the part is really nice and wonderful

their romance is so cute and nice yay and i am happy for rhea she have her dad back and she is so happy so is angad

y i feel that at this competition something wrong is gonna happen like may kripa is pretending to be in love with him but planning something else behind his back with simone

i think its not kripa's fault may be simone wants to take revenge from angad and that's y she is using kripa

i hope nothing bad happen and angad and kripa stay togheter with rhea

but u know what even if they separated then rhea will bring them togher and also she will accept angad as her dad and kripa as her mom

can't wait for more romance and u continued the next part

pleaseeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal[/quote]

Thanks mittal.....good guesses and ur right, whatever happens, in the end AK will always be together😳 Rhea has already played a big part in bringing them closer😊

[quote=coolpal]hey bheegi di, great part, but i felt it went by too quickly, but its good that u put the dance competition part it now. there is a lot of suspense for the upcoming parts, like the new guy that angad met that is looking for talent and now that familiar voice. y do i feel that things r not gonna go as Angad plannned?[/quote]

Thanks coolpal...yes i decided to fast forward to the main part of the story...this is a short ff u see. wait and see what angad is in for now😕

[quote=humza1]hey thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 reply .............well u r sooooooooooo smart bheegi..................nice part luking forward tht wat happened after the competition.......................i think sumkind of twist ll com now or misunderstanding or josh's entry is also confused me ..............keep going fabulous wrk bheegi 🤗[/quote]

Thanks Humza....good to see u back on my ffs.....well Josh has a small but important role😉

thanks sameira

[quote=armaanridz4eva]hey congrats on 100 pages well deserved!!!

the update was awesome

really like the bonding coming along between the three of them

waiting for the next part

Sania[/quote]

thanks sania....u all deserve the credit equally😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: me_iq
diiiiii...
now m bcumin superstitious!!!

haiiii...the most imp part of ff is cumin up...

ur smart gals head is gonna burst...i can think of many possible things!!!*as v discussed

i m gettin scared....

pooooooooor angaddd...

kya honay wala hai....???

tht was a super dooper part...

josh kaun hai??

is he involved in d plan too??

n for kripa....i dunno...per i think shez truly in love now...

awsm job...

where is rhea??

n shez acting too??

i dun thnk she is...shez a very sweet gal...n she shud b thankful 2 angad...

4 acceptin her as his daughter...his legal daughter!!!

m happy atleast naina is happy 2 meet her future bahu!!!

i wanna c wat happens wn he proposes her!!😛

lets c wat simone does in d nxt prt!!

tc

cont asap...

just cant waiiitt

Thanks iqra....ur fears are justified😕 but wait and see what happens....definitely a twist coming up there. U know i will finish DYM and then continue the rest of SWD as i am having a hard time going back and forth between the two stories + have very little time to even reply all ur wonderful comments

[quote=angadkripa#1]Awesome job Bheegs!!! U did a wonderfull job. I loved this part!! That voice......hmm i think it might be Simone. Hw iz Simone gonna react when she finds out abt AK? OMG! Scary! Cont soon Bheegz.

Harji[/quote]

Thanks harjot....good guess but wait and see😉

[quote=elana]hey bheegi,
omg i luv yerr FF. all of them actually.i'm a new member but i've read a bunch of fanfics b4....i've read all of yers nd you'r n absolute terrific writer. u shud write a book or something. I luved KYPH and ur ff's are based on them as well..AK are teh eternal pair and many ppl stopped writing Ak ffs...😭

I luv Angad and the relationship b/w angad nd kripa..nd the dance parts are fabulous....its hott and steamy lol..i wonder how Simone is gnna react and i hope Josh is a gud character <3

I guess teh voice of that gurl is Simone cuz he recognized it. omgg so now he prolly wont be able to propose, i mean it cant be that easy so i'm realii xited..😛

well plz cont soon..i'm planin 2 be a regular reader lol :D😃😃

ndd currently i'm reading your AR fanfic and i lovee it lol..i basically love all of ur fanfics..👏👏👏

---<3 Elana*[/quote]

Thanks Elana. It's always a pleasure to hear from silent readers. even if AK are getting less popular on this forum, they will still be #1 for me😊 as they inspired me to start writing ffs😃. Thanks 4 reading DYM too

[quote=superstar15]hey di got ur pm awesome part

rhea must be happy to get her papa

offically i was happy.

incredible naina is excited to meet her

bahu. omg angad is gonna propse to kripa f

after their last dance. ak part was cute

in the dressing room i think the person that called

kripais simone omg di i think im can guess wats

gonna happen in the next part u gave some clues

but am scared if im rite i will pm u wat i think

i cant say here cuz i might be right and give it away.

awesome part though cont soon.

Love Ya Di

Rhea🤗[/quote]

Thanks Rhea....yes PM me ur guess...i am interested in all ur ideas and views😃 Let's see what's cooking in next chapter😉

[quote=arohaangel]it was simone right?? i know it was..the voice...lolz...gr8 part ddii...angad's gone have a big one tonite!![/quote]

Thanks sameera....let's see who's gonna have a big nite??😉

[quote=stars shine]hey

it was amazing

wonder who the voice was

probably simone

continue soon

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Thanks dear...wait and see😉

[quote=anitamalik]Oh wow! I sense danger coming on this competition night after reading this part with the song "aaj ki raat"....I can tell something dhamekhedar is going to happen...especially with the way you inserted Josh into the story...and the lyrics of the song at the same time...I felt like I was watching a movie since my heart was beating rapidly and my mind was trying to comprehend what mysterious event can happen...lol...Let's see what you have in store for us...But I can sense something bad....LOL...Great job Di! You definitely brought in a mysterious ambiance at the venue! thanks anita....yes that song in the background definitely hints to what's going to happen😆

Aww I loved how Kripa was scared and nervous at the apartment...She is just insecure a bit due to Simone..Thank God Angad understood her state of mind..He is sooo sweet, well at least now he is! The song was a favorite of mine! is that a turning point of the story??

Aww, Angad is finally a father to Rhea..he admitted it! Rhea sure must be happy to get her dad back in her life..Who wouldn't be?!

I'm so loving Angad's suprise...but I have that eerie feeling like something bad is gonna happen right now...LOL...I wonder what you have in store for us...Is it somethign related to Simone?

ehem ehem.....wait and see😆

I loved AK moment in the Green room! So cute! Nice to see them moving in their relationship...

Hmm..I think the voice belonged to Simone...Hmmmmmmmmmm! Spill Di...Spill...LOL wait a while as i am planning to finish DYM first😃

Great update Di!

Continue DYM now..I'm dying with anticipation...LOL.

Love, Anita[/quote]

[quote=vallanki]s she simone?? hale and healthy?????? hmm eager to know the suspense..how kripa cheats him...how he falls for her plans, if any.. thanks vallanki...wait and see who's cheating whom😆

Can't wait till the competition is over and the after effects.

you made Nishant bad in two ffs...arrogant, jealous, aggressive...but perfect with the roles he got in those two ffs. roles change karne se hi mazaa aata hai😆

It's nice to see Angad accepted Rhea before the competition.

hope Angad won't get shock of his life on the stage in front of all the guests....can't see Angad in tears, shame, insult. Though he forgot, rejected Simone..it's personal life not to be disclosed in front of public..I agree he abendened her in the society but it's her choice to have a child of his...no offense..but she should have hold him before...anywayit's history...but Angad's insult shdn't be publicised...lolz..possessiveness😉

i know u are such a softie when it comes to angad baba😆

nice songs..kripa's fears brought a smile when he took her to bed..I was sure he wouldn't touch her.. u trust angad more than anyone else does😆

Naina for a change had good role here. yes she is good

Misthy..did she have any role behind all this drama?? so far she was a shrewd business woman for kripa.

wait and see😉

Loved Angad's after competition plans..hope he fulfils them one day aaj nahin tho kal😳.[/quote]

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#817

Just read your gonna finish DYM first before continuing this...I totally understand...It's so hard to keep up with writing two FF's and even reply to the comments..I seriously have to commend you for doing that despite having such a tight schedule yourself...It's so time consuming and I totally understand and I'm willing to wait for this one, more so because I love DYM more...LOL....But I'm sad it's gonna end soon!

= [..I LOVE DYM! but my favorite will still remain TEIH! But I'm sad of not readding about Armaano...LOL....

Anyways, I hope all is well at your end...These Mumbai blast news are sure frightening... I want it all to end...Hope all your family members of friends are safe if in Mumbai...

Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving...I had to work morning shift at the Mariott...LOL..That's how I spent my Thnksgiving morning...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: spln
aawww bheegi di...it was such a crucial yet cute part, i mean it was obviously the preceeding part to a major one, n even though there are so many possibilities of wat cud happen, um not certain how u wud take it....as alwaz rhea was my star...loved her....hoping to read the next update soon the suspense is super high!!!

ps: liked angads mum in her so far short dialogue, n teddy is a sweetie too!

thanks NJ....let's see what happens. I will continue this ff after DYM isover😊

[quote=angadzgirl]Awww di......its veryyy cute part...😉👏

i loved angad n Kripa's dance...😉

n am so happy Angad accepted Rhea as his daughter...😛

n Angad Planning is Kripa's Proposal.... I hope Simone's entry does not ruin all of that....

cant cant see Angad n Kripa seperate...😭

n di thanx for pm...🤗

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Thanks shweta...let's see if they separate or not😕

thanks shafoo, iqbalneha1, nishitta

[quote=masin]O DEAR!!!! whts gonna happen now di!! first of all this Josh Abraham sounds sumwhat fishy...but extremely se*y!!!!!!!!!! i watched dostana recently.....and my jaws were dropped down to my toes.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u have to see tht movie di if u still havent!!!! thanks samra...yes i have seen it....it's funny but certainly not the best of the year

nd tht voice was obviously simone's but wasnt she sick...i mean how is she able to walk around like that [:S] in fact, i know sum1 who passed from cancer just this morning...a family friend, she's really young and has a three year old daughter!!! my parents went to her funeral this morning....it was really sad...i mean this disease itself is just sooo dreadly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wanna be a doctor wen i grow up....and honestly every time i hear about a cancer patient i always wanna go into tht field!! hope i make it there sumday!i am sorry to hear about ur friend😕...yes cancer is a deadly disease...let's see what's up with that voice??

as fr AK scenes...they were mind blowing.....or shud i say mind blasting!!!! brilliantly described i must say..... thanks samra

but omg......fr the first time...im not thinking so much about AK but more about the next part! unfortunately i have a strong feeling tht the shagun will not get thru tonite...simone's presence their will definetely turn the tables around [:S] 😔....well im looking forward to an intense part but i hope all goes well between AK :)

wait and see...btw i will finish DYM first and then continue this one

i gtg

keep me posted

and keep writing

luv

Samra[/quote]

[quote=namelesssr]Can't figure out for the life of me what the next twist is going to be this time Bheegi 😕 At this age, my poor heart can't quite adjust to the rollercoaster rides that you subject it to 😭... 😆😆

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looks like i have confused u too much😕

[quote=monikaseth]Oh nooooooo sangeeta please angad ko hurt mat hone dena , i hope kripa apna mood change kar de angad ka pyar dekh ke .

Reha ko usske papa mil gaye soo sweet , but i dont want to see kripa and angad splip for any momment .

awesome part please let angad propose kripa .

Thank you for pm.

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thanks monu...let's see who gets hurt and who doesn't😕

@ teri-suan....yes like the original show, they always end up together despite all their weaknesses😃

@ sweetaddiction...yes next part will be intense for sure

@ Nidha...please don't be sorry...and thanks 4 ur wishes😊

@ srk ki deewani...thanks for reading😊

[quote=ladoo645]

I noe I noe I meant to reserved and comment asap, but seriously Di s I slept like a baby after readin this part 😆.

Wow, Angad is changing, and even accepted Rhea as his daughter! Hmmm is Teddy is Angads dog? Just double checking!

That was a really romantic Dance Diz!☺️

Omg hes gunna propose to her?! OMG! Everything is going perfect in Angads view, that its scary, I wonder what u have planning up ur sleeves for the next part!😉

A perplexed Angad stood still, "that voice? Kaun thi wo? It sounded familiar."Is this a hint for Simone arrival?

Superduper romantic Diz "Tumhari aankhein waise hi khubsoorat hain'..inhein chupa kyun rahi ho?" He walked closer and kissed her neck from behind.😳😳

Love it to the core, I sense we are coming close to the climax!

-Natasha

P.s Congrad passing 100 pages, it was well deserved![/quote]

Thanks natasha...please don't be sorry and thanks for getting me to another 100 pages😊. well a lot of mysteries will get solved in next part...is all i'll say😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Just read your gonna finish DYM first before continuing this...I totally understand...It's so hard to keep up with writing two FF's and even reply to the comments..I seriously have to commend you for doing that despite having such a tight schedule yourself...It's so time consuming and I totally understand and I'm willing to wait for this one, more so because I love DYM more...LOL....But I'm sad it's gonna end soon!

= [..I LOVE DYM! but my favorite will still remain TEIH! But I'm sad of not readding about Armaano...LOL....

Anyways, I hope all is well at your end...These Mumbai blast news are sure frightening... I want it all to end...Hope all your family members of friends are safe if in Mumbai...

Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving...I had to work morning shift at the Mariott...LOL..That's how I spent my Thnksgiving morning...

thanks anita...i am still so disturbed by the mumbai terror that i don't feel like writing anything romantic or lovey dovey right now...i don't know when i would continue again....have a great weekend and take care