Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#651

hi bheegi di

mindbowing part di

they confused to each other yipeeeeeeee horray

kripa cannot get over the feelings of angad

kripa's chaha is such a pervert chiiiiiiiiiiiii

update sooooooooooooooooooooooon di

luv soumya

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#652

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I'm happy both confessed. I was waiting for Angad to confess. He was not in his usual manner in this ff after he started learning kripa's personality. And you brought him back now😳 what would simone have told to kripa??😉 that made her upset and close herself away from Angad???Anything we should know??

Now Angad would bring his mother back..Naina😉 a sensitive woman/mother for a change???😳

who is this chacha..Angad should keep kripa away from him..probably he will now when kripa agrees to move to his apartment!!

now we can see more sparkles in the studio😳

wonderful dance from SWD movie. I can imagine AK in them..Thanks for bringing the story and dance for us.

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#653

woaaahh!!

i slept on d desk wafter readin yur update...u gt me all dreamin bheegi!!
haha!! i totally luved it..no doubt abt it...n incdentally i was wondering AK element 'fire' was missing...for a while...u koe...and blah later in d part i read it..cudnt be more happier..:)

that was a marvel part...bheegz..the whole confession...d readily acceptance..d "i need u" was soooooo AK frm d show..relived those moments....i did yaahh!! wat more can i say nw!! :D

but..ma fav bit was d 'blanket' line at her place....luved dt!!it was juss a word but u can sense d immense care in dt..wow!!

hmmmh hmmmm update sooon..waitin for tis 1 more than AR now...but hvnt forgotten..Az side of d story..aahhh!! update both!!!

nij!!

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#654

simply superb di

m really speechless

luved hw angad confessed his love for her

cont soon

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Richa1234

@Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#655

Great part di. Its good they confessed their feelings to each other. Yahan to pyar aur iqrar dono ho gaya, what about the other prem kahani.....Def yes, maybe one di? There, our heroine's heart is broken into pieces. She badly needs a quick fix. he he

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masin

@masin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#656

hey di!! omg...im really upset....its been two updates and i havent gotten a single pm bout any of them???? lols...i even made a post on def. yes, mayb...but i guess u havent read it yet.........

anyways...........ommgg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pyar kab hua kaise hua...aur itni jaldi!!!!!!!!! i am soo thrillleddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant beleive it...now im sure the next few parts are gonna be amazing....cute, playful, and oh so romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

as fr this one.......im sooo happy angad went in to see her lifestyle...nd i hope sooner or later he confronts her chacha and beats him up or like fully tells him off!!!

umm......wht else........kk since my comp wasnt working when i posted the last comment....i'll tell u bout the last part.........well tht song got me in splits!!!!!!!!! i mean ten times better than pappu!! i cud totally imagine AK in there........and as for mishti.....well in a way she's a blessng in disguise......i mean if it wasnt for her AK wudnt hav been together like tht........same with prithvi ;)

hmm.........i adore angad's possessiveness towards kripa....i mean i honestly like his character more than our beloved kripa......mainly because....he's soo much more intense with his feelings......and the change in him is a lot bigger than the change in kripa!!! i guess in these two fanfics u favour armi ridz and angad more whereas in to err....it was armi and kripa ....LMAO

o yea.........i luved how u used the word "slender" in the last part...when referring to kripa missing her lunches......it just fit so perfectly well with her........i mean its a cute and playful word!!!

overall..........truly amazing...nd like full of emotions....u portray evryone's emotions with such ease nd sooo deeply........u hav no idea how much ur ffs effect ur readers.........i mean im sure iv changed as a person after reading ur ffs!!!!!!!!!!!!!

anyways.....i gtg plzzzz keep me updated!!!!!!!!!

luv

Samra

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#657

aww such a great update!!

was not expecting that at all!! finally they gave in

cant wait to know what happens next

Sania

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Sweta

@Angadzgirl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#658

Awwww di.........wat a HOT n ROMANTIC part....😉😳👏

n Awwwww di.....wat confession.......just loved it so much....😉😳n finally realised that they love each other alot....😉😳

Awwww they shar their first kiss....😳

n hate Kripa's chacha....he is soooo stupied....

just cant wait for next part...😉

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: Ladoo645
RESERVED!!! SRI DI'Z!!

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YaYaYa, I'm FIRST!! WooT WooT!, I hope this males for not commenting for the past part!, Really sri, got held up with skool/life lol

SO yesh where were we?

Read both parts, and really Di's the story is building up beautifully!!👏

'Aapko kaise pata wo kahan rehti hain?' Rhea rubbed her chin and raised her eyebrow.LOL, children are too smart for their cookies! Lol, Hmm Angand finally making his full potential moves, by picking and dropping her off home, awww, really is the wild beast becoming civilized? 😆

'Dance is a sport too,' he smiled at her, 'and a very elegant and sensuous one at that.'I agree, ppl think dancing is just for show, and temping men of their lust and desires, but it's seriously not, When i get my grove on, it really does let me relief me daliy intake of stress out.

I am so happy Angad'.you have come as a blessing for me'.I am so happy Prithvi got hurt!'Hmm Mishti, is really snobbish business woman!

'You have already killed me'..I am just waiting for the post mortem now,' he winked playfully and chuckled loudly. SHUXS DI's how da heck u come up with these lines!!!☺️

Hmm Kripa in a Turmoil of confusion of emotions, sigh.....it's really hard......but this Simone character seems in the shadows at you current's parts, I think she's the key to everything!! 😛😉

Love the Teri Ore Video, totally luv Katrina's black sari!!, she's looking stunning!!

LoL, I'm getting off track, okie back to the next part!

Glad Kripa had finally started to opened up to his friendship.....

Waah! That lil' cheeky headache can't even leave Angand too!! Lol

Your description of Kripa's family interaction and situation was brilliantly described!

Uggh.......her chacha is a completely disgusting person, and It's sad that it still exist in today's world......unfortunately in her own family members.

Whoa! What a confession Di's, like totally dazed here!!, and that to unexpected!☺️

Awesome like always' di's!!

Keep up the FAb work!

-Natasha

p.s. sorry again!

Thanks Natasha...please don't be sorry as i know we all have busy lives outside IF😆 but loved ur detailed comments...ur guesses and instincts have been right so far. That's all i'll say😉 Thanks 4 liking the lines...i guess my characters inspire me to write those one liners😆😆 The confession left u in a daze😃....well maybe u are reading in between the lines there😉 is all i'll say again😆

[quote=spln]wow bheegi di i sure wasnt expecting this to happen so soon, but somehow when it did it seemed so right....rhea was cute but for oce the epi held so much i didnt miss her too much,,,,whic doesnt mean i dont wana see more of her from now lolzzz....chacha was horrible i wanted to punch him as bad as angad lolzzz....greta job!!! kudos!!!
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Thanks NJ...well well..well....let's see what happens next😉 Rhea is still there...the glue between AK😃

[quote=ttimpy]really lovely update

kripa's chacha seems a real creep......wonder why her parents do not bar him from the house when their girls are in................

angad's confession was really surprising .......it came too early i thot.............and even kripa reciprocated....... i wonder what convo she had with simone and what was bothering her thru' out the day..😕😕........................

richard gere and J Lo were mesmerising.........very passionate dance........... ive really alwayz liked her..........she seems so perfect and so much in control.......esp. int his movie The Wedding Planner.. i loved her.......and Richard Gere is just tooooooo handsome............mmmmind blowing😉😉

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Thanks ttimpy...good to see u back😊 Kripa's parents are worried about ghar ki izzat and are indebted to her chacha😕 for all he has done for them...this is a very common occurence in Indian families when men like chacha are shielded by their own family members😕

Hmm...all i'll say about the confession is that just enjoy the romance for now,...zyaada socho mat😉😆 and BTW some people were complaining that the pace of the story was slow.....so as of now i have put it in 4th gear...wait for all the twists and turns now😃 yes that dance from SWD movie is really mesmerizing and is what inspired me to write this ff😃

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Kiran

@Smilesx3

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Posted: 16 years ago

#660

Hey Bheegi Api

It was very nice of Angads curiosity towards Kripa's family. He pretended to be sick just to have an insight of Kripa's family. Smart. Aww. even Rhea wants to live with AK in one big house. Cute. Kripa's chachu is a perve*t. She is his brothers daughter and he behaves like that to her and with her younger sister. he even has his eyes on Rhea. Kuch to sharam karo. Shes gone through alot. Firstly having to deal with financial problems. Then dealing with her stupid chachu. Kripa has an older brother..why doesnt he help Kripa out. Kripa's family isnt considerate towards her. HAHA..Kripa caught his lie towards being sick. Even Angad noticed the dynamics between her family. I love Angad's friendship speech. Kripa refused friendship with Angad. I wonder what transpired between Simone and Kripa that made Kripa behave all stiff around Angad. Finally pyaar ka iqraar hogaya hai. It was totally unexpected and thats what I like about a story. You never know whats going to happen next. I adored the way they confessed and then dancing to tango. The video was beautiful. They both confessed. I liked the "i need you" line. Aww they kissed. I hope Simone doesnt bring any misunderstandings between AK.

Jannat