AR Defeated in love 2 (updt part-26)

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#191

part 22 was amazing

finally they confessed to each other

cant wait 2 see what armaan tells shashank

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#192

nice update. both confessed!! great!!.😊 but that photos in paper??😡 oh not again!! 😒😒😒.

why ate this stupid media people always after them😡. i hope shashank will not take it too seriously. ofcourse any father would react in the same. armaan yelling at doctor and shashank yelling at him!!! 😆. it would be great to see andy yelling armaan for making ridhima sick😆.

and now comming to ur question - i love ur FF very much. but as u said this should not be draged unnecessarily. i think it would be beter to end it in 2-3 parts. 25 parts will be a good number.😊😊. no more twists plz. if you put twists also plz dont separate AR. let AR face the problems together. thanks for pm.

oh i forgot to add - plz find a suitable GF for andy

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#193

thanks so much for the PM... liked everybit of the update...

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#194

Hi Taira... thanx for d PM fren...

Yet another confession... of course this time directly from Riddima's mouth... Simply gr8... And not to forget veryvery romantic...😳

Oh... Riddima got sick...😕 Oh god Armaan might be feeling guilty... but its not completely his fault... But i can understand Shashank's point of view as well... just hope he doesnt whip Armaan too harshly...

I will wait for the next update curiosly... as always...😊

Love

- Sheetal

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Aishwarya

@Aishwarya..

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#195

thanks for the pm!!

well it was part filled with jealously, love, emotions.

loved the way u depicted the jealously felt by ridz and the lip-lock rocked!!!

how do u come up with ur one liners????
this time its "Riddhima has fainted....no she didn't faint because of the photographs silly but because she is having a fever...now shut up and get a doctor here."

man it rocked!!!

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#196

hey taira great part girl...short yeah, but awsome n intense, but plz dont say this shanx here too like dmg will become all nasty n mean to the lover boy romeo???

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#197

hi taira😊

thks for the pm dear

awesomeeeeeeee part yaar

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ridz confused soooooooooo happy

poor ridz she is sick

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Manhar

@MannyZ

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#198

this is the first time i'm commenting😳

i just read all your previous parts😛..yaar i've fallen deeply in love with your FF!😳 luv the characters...and i really like the way you potray everyone feelings....

i loved the way when ridz took revenge from vivek! 🤣bechara ppl thought he was gay!🤣🤣

and armaan's past is so sad...i liked the casanova image he put on..and when he slowly started to fall in love and changed himself...😳

when priya came with a picture of ridz and armaan at the beach...i felt like slapping her😕😆😆 yeah right she loves armaan😳

and i like the sweet bond ridz and mollie has😳...and i love the crazy andy😆...in this part...what armaan said was so romantic..after they kissed😳

i'm going mad...cause the way you write it seems so realistic😃😆

i'm soo happy that they've confessed now😃 but when shashank came in the room i don't know why but for some reason i started laughing😕😆😆 and when mollie said.."no she didn't faint looking at the pictures siily" and when shashank was scolding armaan😆

im sure its not too serious😃 and i hope ridz gets better😳 poor ammy can't see her like that😃

btw love the song you wrote when he sang it on the beach😳

luv your FF...and do write another one😛😉

luv manny / tomato xxx 🤗😳

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Maulik

@patem031

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#199

yeeah, yes, finally a beautiful confession nd a lovely prt
yeah man tht ws so romantic nd amazin prt
it ws so funny whn arman ws kissin ridz nd people were watchin
nd ridz asked for a song after confession, awesome sceene
wow, cant believe dey r in newspaper nd shachank ws arguing
i hope ridz is okaii nd shashank doesnt say bad or do anythin wrong wid arman
continue soon wid yur rockin nd amazin prts😃