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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina ne Sonali ko bataya but left out a few details!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Naina is feeling like a 17 year old developing a crush for a boy!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sonali is hinting ke Raj wants something in return!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina bhi Sonali ki baat maan kar Raj ko call karke bulane ke liye taiyaar ho gayi!!!!! She is feeling a pull and wants to give it a try!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

This was the first time Naina was relaxed with any person!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is now very successful!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Cafe Coffee Day ka purana brochure dekh kar even his thought went back to the day she had called him there!!!!😊 😊 😊

He hated coffe but Naina ke saath woh bhi chalega!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Naina toh aise taiyaar hoke aayi jaise ke date pe aayi ho and he just felt she was so pretty!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He told her she was looking hot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sonali hint kaafi jaldi samaj gayi aur phone rakh diya!!!!!

Raj baby ke saath khel raha tha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Aur Naina usse dekh rahi thi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj loves kids but prefers them when they are someone else's because he thinks he will never be a good father because you have to take care of kids!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko apne parents ki yaad aagayi aur woh rone lagi because she thought she was selfish!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Raj ne usse kitne acche se samjhaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He took her by the sea and the setting sun looked beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

He said not more beautiful than you!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊So romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

They held hands and walked back together!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳And they had a smile on their faces!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Yes they are definately coming closer by each meeting!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yaadein kitne dukh deti hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Par jaldi Raj ki khwaish puri hogi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina aa rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Done reading both the parts now :D
So, the story has started building up.
Not quite sure which way itl go but the spllit has something to do with the child. Raj thinks he wont make a good father and probably that is the reason why he distances himself from Naina.
loved the ending, where they walk back hand in hand, just like the serial, a silent confession bw the two.
waiting for the nxt part :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hiiii Deeya ,

simply Gr8 update dear....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ the bonding between rajveer n Naina is amzing...luved the way they share thier feelings , finally Naina realised her mistake n luved the place were they stroll after coffee.😳
But what goes rong between them that they have to be seperated πŸ˜• well hope soon mistry reavieled but till then i wanna enjoy thier happy moments so plzzzz update ASAP...😊

Hellooo!!!!!!
thanks for the lovely comments..... yeah first i want their bond nd friendship to develop.... dnt know wen ill b able to update... coz im in a serious crisis right now😭 but will def try to do it by wed or thurs..... till then tk cre... byyye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello Deeya....

Your update was too good.Loved the portrayal of emotions..of Raj and Naina by you dear.
Too Good...
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
Continue soon.
Take care.
Love
Riya.

thx Riya... plz continue reading... nd do tell me if u guys ever get bored haan....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

Done reading both the parts now :D

So, the story has started building up.
Not quite sure which way itl go but the spllit has something to do with the child. Raj thinks he wont make a good father and probably that is the reason why he distances himself from Naina.
loved the ending, where they walk back hand in hand, just like the serial, a silent confession bw the two.
waiting for the nxt part :)

hey Ashi...
so glad u liked the updates....... welll i jus want the story to b a little hatke... nd i hope i am able to do tht.... u guys keep reading... nd im sorry in the delay for the update... so much of work has jus popped up suddenly......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

realllly loves the update.....plz update soonπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!! thanks shaina... ur comments always mean a lot to me

Naina ne Sonali ko bataya but left out a few details!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Naina is feeling like a 17 year old developing a crush for a boy!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah... it happens many times.... wen matured women feel young nd girlish😳

Sonali is hinting ke Raj wants something in return!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” lolz..... wat to do...... Mumbai mein sabhi aise hi sochte hain

Naina bhi Sonali ki baat maan kar Raj ko call karke bulane ke liye taiyaar ho gayi!!!!! She is feeling a pull and wants to give it a try!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ Yeah... pehli baar aise feeling aiyi hain... she's nt gonna let it go like tht onli

This was the first time Naina was relaxed with any person!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 couples r made in heaven

Raj is now very successful!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ yeah... par Naina ke bina... jag soona soona laage

Cafe Coffee Day ka purana brochure dekh kar even his thought went back to the day she had called him there!!!!😊 😊 😊 yeah..... poor guy... ghar saaf karne gaya.... aur woh khayalon mein kho gaya

He hated coffe but Naina ke saath woh bhi chalega!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› company itni sweet ho toh gale se kuch bhi neeche uthrega

Naina toh aise taiyaar hoke aayi jaise ke date pe aayi ho and he just felt she was so pretty!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 no comments😳

He told her she was looking hot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 woh toh besharam hai.... dil ki baat zuban pe

Sonali hint kaafi jaldi samaj gayi aur phone rakh diya!!!!! lolz.... tubelight like her

Raj baby ke saath khel raha tha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Aur Naina usse dekh rahi thi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj loves kids but prefers them when they are someone else's because he thinks he will never be a good father because you have to take care of kids!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 sacrifice... esp if the kid is my typeπŸ˜†

Naina ko apne parents ki yaad aagayi aur woh rone lagi because she thought she was selfish!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Raj ne usse kitne acche se samjhaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah.... uski bhi toh galati nahin hain

He took her by the sea and the setting sun looked beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› romantic....

He said not more beautiful than you!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊So romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

They held hands and walked back together!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳And they had a smile on their faces!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Yes they are definately coming closer by each meeting!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 the magnetic pulll

Yaadein kitne dukh deti hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Par jaldi Raj ki khwaish puri hogi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 uski duniya wapas aa rahi hain

Naina aa rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Raj ke bure din khatam

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Posted: 16 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: litika

realllly loves the update.....plz update soonπŸ˜ƒ

thanks dear...
plz continue reading nd do tell me if u hav any requests and suggestions nd ill try to improve my fic!!!!
update toh next week ko hi aa sakta hai... ek time pe itne kaam achanak aa gaye... tht there is nothing tht i can do... but ill try my level best to update by wed or thurs.... will nt delay beyond tht
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
hey sorry 4 late reply,

itz excelent n lovely,


Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey deeya !!

great updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...

i am glad at the way the story is progressingπŸ˜ƒ...do continue soon.....


take care...

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