A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY! - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
hey u can write bigger updates....no offence to you.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey continue soon😊 i'll be waiting......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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In the breifing session -
Dr.keerti assigns them to their duties as usual...then when it was mukaan's turn to be assigned
Dr.keerti - drmuskaan...aap Dr.Jai ko assit karengii...unhone kaas apko chuna hai
Muskaan - lekin ma'am
* But b4 muksaan could protest....Dr.keerti went away from there *
* Muskaan was really upset...she dint know wht to do ? how the hell could she face Jai? *
* Rahul sees Muskaan upset and goes to her *
Rahul - muskaan...sun main tere liye Jai ko assit kar dunga
Muskaan - lekin Dr.keerti ?
Rahul - Kuch nahi hogaa...dont worry...aur jai ki fikhar tu mat kar...main usse sambhal loonga !
Muskaan - smbhaal lungaa matlab kya....
* But before Muskaan could say anything else Rahul went away *
* Muskaan was confused....wht did Rahul mean by " usse sambhal lungaa " ?....wht was he gonna do ? *
- Rahul enters Jai's room -
Jai - haah Rahul bolo kya baat hai ?
Rahul - main aapko assit karunga...Muskaan ki tabiyat theek nahi hai !
Jai - lekin main khaas Dr.Muskaan ke liye requst kiya tha !
Rahul - sorry Dr.Jai woh bahut bimaar hai ! main kuch nahi kar sakta ! orr waise bhi aapko intni kya khaas kaam thi Muskaan se ? ( angrily )
Jai - dekhiye Dr.rahul...its none of ur business !
Rahul - ofcourse its my business ! orr aap usse dur hi rahiye.....warna...
Jai ( angry now ) - warna kya ? warna kya rahul?
* Rahul pushes Jai to the wall and holds him by the collor *
Rahul - warna...tum mujhe bahut maar khaoge
* Unknown to them Muskaan was just standing oustside and watching everything...and when she sees whats goiin on sh burts herself into the room and tries to bring back Rahul to his senses *
Muskaan ( holding rahul by the arm and trying to pull him back ) - chod na rahul ! chalo please !
* Rahul gave in and went away with Muskaan *
* Muskaan drags Rahul into one of the storeroom *
Muskaan - Tum kya kar rahe the wahan ? pagal ho gaya hai kya ? tu yeh mat bhool ki Jai yahan ka sr.doctor....orr tujhe kya farak padtaa hai ki mere orr Jai ke beech kya ho raha hai ? tu kyu musibat ke picche picche jaa raha hai ?
Rahul - MUJHE FARAK PADTAA HAI MUSKAAN ! koi tumhare saath bataameeze kare...main woh sehn nahi saktaa...samji ?
* Rahul walks out of the storeroom.....*
How was that guys ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome update, please please please continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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and also can you pm me everytime you update?
thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: monadarling2628

and also can you pm me everytime you update?

thanks.

sure no probz...but plz remind me to PM after my every update or else I might 4gt !
Thank 4 reading !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the PM. It was really nice.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx 4 da pm...itz awesum..
plzzz update soon....
take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW man! frm someday me seeing dis topic n jus kept thing will red 2day will read 2day buh arghh everyday 4got! aah finally 2day! v read ALL d parts! damn! man it's totaalyyyyyyyyyy amaaaazing veeeeery interesting! realy luving it! me feeling d goose! lol! luving it! n i like how u keep updaing constantly evn tho lil parts n las parts were long tho! 😛 it's really refreshing! cont soon! gr8 gng! 😛 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: usharafuddin

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW man! frm someday me seeing dis topic n jus kept thing will red 2day will read 2day buh arghh everyday 4got! aah finally 2day! v read ALL d parts! damn! man it's totaalyyyyyyyyyy amaaaazing veeeeery interesting! realy luving it! me feeling d goose! lol! luving it! n i like how u keep updaing constantly evn tho lil parts n las parts were long tho! 😛 it's really refreshing! cont soon! gr8 gng! 😛 😛

Thnk u SO much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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