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nadia

@xoxcuddlesxox

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#111

cool update cant wait 4 next part

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#112

oh wow cool update iram....👏
dharam had fight with dakoos and saved sia
veer soo soo sweet and loving😍 but ananya is not understanding him......i hope she will realize soon....and veer dragged ananya to the groung and eye lock scene wow!!😍
cant wait 4 nxt part plzzz update it sooon dear....

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#113

Hey dear,

Finally gonna comment on your story.... i'm really sorry that i haven't done it earlier.... have been a bit busy lately..

Okay let start with the first part..
The intro's were really good... And your story is really diffrent you got both the couple married off at the start of the story it self and i think that is making the story really intressting 👍🏼...

Dharam and sia make a cute couple as always... Love the way how Dharam act around sia.. They liked each other very much before marraige but confessed it after maraige .. so romantic are they 😍

Now to Veer and Ananya.... so they didn't start off wel but that's no problem that will slowly change ... i'm so glad Mohini came along cause if she didn't how would Ananya start thinking diffrently about veer or should i say get jealouse...😆

Agni => finally some brains .... hahaha lolz
Jaivardhan => he will never change 😡

Awww ananya had a high fever and veer took care of her... that's so sweet and the way they talked =>

Ananya: thank you for looking after me and Im sorry for being so rude to u
Veer: you dont need to ask me for forgiveness. It happens in every wife/ husband relationship and especially in ours because we got married...without knowing each other properly but I am sure as time passes we will get to know each other better
Ananya: thank u.

Dharam saved sia from the gundas jaivardhan and angi had sent... sia is very luck that her husband is very much capeble of taking care if her.

Okay that was all
Your last part was good as well.... and your recap is very intressting... i'm guessing why ananya is gonna faint... hope nothing serieus

Okay till your next part then.... update soon

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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seema

@heaven princess

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#114

THat was a loverly update... loved veer and Ananya....awwshooo cute...😍 Siya got attacked...buh romoe came to....the rescue...and saved his juliet😛😆 nice update keep on..!!

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kiran

@crazy_kiran

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#115

lovely update, most awaited and nice update

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sweetest girl

@sweetest girl

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: suryogita
😛HI I HAVE FOUND UR FICTION ONLY TODAY N READ IT TOOO ITS VERY GOOD ILIKED IT VERY MUCH ITS REAALY GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOODDDDDDDDDDDD
HI

hiii

thnxx

happy u lykedd itt

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sweetest girl

@sweetest girl

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Thanks for the update dear Veer pulling Ananya to to the ground & towards himself....h.............I see Very cute update pls. update soon as I want why Ananya faints in the next part...ataleast veer will take more care of her now

thnxx

will update soon

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sweetest girl

@sweetest girl

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: CutieA
lovely update shweetiie...I was on da edge of ma seat wen Dakoos cam.....go Dharam hehe! he sure beat dem up! wohoo👏...VA moments r so shweet...Ananya is hapi wen Veer looks after him bt wen he asks her any questions she get rude...poor Veer lool! fnx again xxxxxxxxx

thnk youhh will update soon