HSSH [AK,AR,LKT,KA]~ Pt. 4/Pg. 15... pg18 NOTE - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
***NOTE***
guys im very very very very sorry i didnt cont.....for a long time, but i promise to cont.....once i get my new laptop untill then plz wait and i promise that i'll make the next part very very long...
Edited by lilindiangurl13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyy Roshu jaan!!!


This is such an awesome, fabulous, cute, beautiful (and a whole load of other nice words😛) FF!!!!

I really luv Angad and Kripa's relationship in this story and would luv 2 see more of them!!

Update soon!!! btw i might be starting an FF soon, so Im gonna read all the FFs by the pagal sisters for inspirations!!!

luv ya
Shalu
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Posted: 16 years ago
***NOTE***
Guys i Know its been sooo long since i cont... but i'll cont... now....

im actually writing the part rite now so if i get done by tonight then i'll post it tonight or else i'll post it tomorrow.....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Baby S

Heyy Roshu jaan!!!


This is such an awesome, fabulous, cute, beautiful (and a whole load of other nice words😛) FF!!!!

I really luv Angad and Kripa's relationship in this story and would luv 2 see more of them!!

Update soon!!! btw i might be starting an FF soon, so Im gonna read all the FFs by the pagal sisters for inspirations!!!

luv ya
Shalu

thank you sooo much shalu
i'll cont... maybe tonight or by tomorrow for sure....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Recap:

After all the elders got ready they went to the hall and started greeting all the guests and after few minutes the youngsters came and started greeting the guest while the elders enjoyed.

Naina went with Dilip and started talking with the guests and everyone asked them when was Armaan going to get married and dilip tried his best to change the subject every time because none of the girls want to marry Armaan because of his hand and naina says there will be one girl in this world who will marry our son and giving him lot of love.

As she said that a car pulled up in front of the hall and a old man got out with a girl but you can't see the girl's face because her head is down cuz she's fixing her dress.

Part ~ 4

After she was done fixing her dress she started walking towards the hall with the old man...

Dilip and Naina come forward and greet them... and then you finally see the girl's face and its none other then Riddhima... she's wearing a light blue sari with a a strapless blouse with dangling earrings almost touching her shoulders and her hair left out...

Dilip introduces them to Naina saying this is my business partner Shashank Gupta and this is his daughter Riddhima Gupta. Naina greets riddhima and complments her on her looks. Riddhima just smile's and wishes them a Happy Annivesary and hands them flowers that she bought with her....

Naina then spots Laksh and calls him over and tells him to take Riddhima with him and let her meet rest of the family...

While walking with Riddhima Laksh asked her a lot of questions...

L: when did you came from abroad?

R: I came just few months ago....

L: so do you like it here so far?

R: I love it there is no place like our india...

While Riddhima and Laksh are talking the scene goes to a room in the corner of the hall and you see Angad and Kripa....

This is what happened when Kripa was walking by the room Angad grabbed her hand and pulled her into the room....

K: Angad what are you doing?

A: Im hugging my girlfriend why do you have a problem?

K: YES!! what is someone sees us here plz lets go to the others....

Angad doesnt answer her and just stares at her... After a while Kripa stares at him to and they were just going to kiss when there was a Knock on the door which startled both of them. Angad quickly hid behind the door and Kripa opened the door to find a little girl asking for where the bathroom was.... Kripa took her to the bathroom and Angad followed behind her... When the girl went into the bathroom Angad took the chance and hugged Kripa from the back and kissed her quickly and ran away from her before she could hit him.... Kripa just laughed at him and waited for the girl to come out and took her back to her parents.

After dropping the girl off Kripa come to the others and saw that angad was already there so she just glared at him... After few mins Laksh and Riddhima made it to the others too...

Laksh introduced Riddhima to all the others... When she Looked at armaan she felt something in her something in her stomach, but she just ingored it...

Then they talked for few more mins untill the announcement was made to cut the cake... Naina and Dilip come to the table and blew out the candles together and cut the cake and fed each other a piece... After that all the kids took turns and fed them the cake.

Then All the kids made an announcement that they are going to sing something for their parents...

Armaaan, Angad, and Laksh:
Yeh To Sach Hai Ki Bhagwan Hai,
Hai Magar Phir Bhi Anjaan Hai,
Dharti Pe Roop Maa Baap Ka,
Us Vidhaata Ki Pehchaan Hai...

Armaan:
Janmdaata Hai Jo, Naam Jinse Mila,
Thamkar Jinki Ungli Hai Bachpan Chala,

Angad:
Kaandhe Par Baithke, Jinke Dekha Jahaan,
Gyan Jinse Mila, Kya Bura Kya Bhala,


Laksh:
Itne Upkaar Hain Kya Kahen,
Yeh Bataana Na Aasaan Hai,

Anjali:
Dharti Pe Roop Maa Baap Ka,
Us Vidhaata Ki Pehchaan Hai...
Janam Deti Hai Jo, Maa Jise Jag Kahe,
Apni Santaan Mein, Pran Jiske Rahe,
Loriyan Hothon Par, Sapne Bunti Nazar,
Neend Jo Vaar De, Hanske Har Dukh Sahe,
Mamta Ke Roop Mein Hai Prabhu,
Aapse Paaya Vardaan Hai,

Armaan, Angad and Laksh:
Dharti Pe Roop Maa Baap Ka,
Us Vidhaata Ki Pehchaan Hai...


Armaan:
Aapke Khwab Hum, Aaj Hokar Jawaan,

Anjali:
Us Param Shakti Se Karte Hain Prarthna,

Laksh:
Unki Chhaya Rahe, Rehti Duniya Talak,

Anjali:
Ek Pal Reh Sake Hum Na Jinke Bina,

Angad:
Aap Dono Salaamat Rahe,

Anjali
Sabke Dil Mein Yeh Armaan Hai,

All Four:
Dharti Pe Roop Maa Baap Ka,
Us Vidhaata Ki Pehchaan Hai,
Yeh To Sach Hai Ki Bhagwan Hai...

After the song was done anjali became emotional and started crying and dilip started singing to make her feel better and all the others including Kripa and Kt started dance around Dilip and anjali... After that anjali hugged both Naina and Dilip...

While dancing Kripa and Angad stared into each others eyes and Laksh and Kt stared into each others... While all this was going on Riddhima was staring at the lovely family and thinking how sweet are they all and after that she stared at Armaan and the world around her just disappeared.....

- Okay guys here is the next part after a long time i hope its good enough for you... i'll cont... again on tuesday... Plz do comment and let me know if its good or not.... i think i did a bad job but i'll try to make the next one a little better....
Precap: romance between Anjali and Kavya, Laksh flirting with Kt, Riddhima and Armaan meet outside in the garden.....
Edited by lilindiangurl13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part👏👏👏
can't wait for the next part😛
and it is not at all bad I loved it😳
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i luved tha update! soooooooo romantic, sad , cute, and adorable scenes! lolz! so many emotionz! do cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update! and i noe itz a little late but..............................
❤️twinkle!
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Posted: 16 years ago

gr8 part

cute scene between ak
laksh ask alot of questions lol
happy holidays
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome!! U missed my pm but w/e!! Cont soon and PLZ PLZ PLZ PM ME when u updat becuz im not gud at keepin track. Luckily i was lookin around and saw ur ff!! CONT SOON. Cant wait for more romance of AK, They r so cute. PLZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey its been so long .......
anyways part is so good......
waiting for the next part.......continue asap....

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