Lyf In college: masti tym.[SK/AK/AC]prt 7 UD pg 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
nehu dear very nice.... i liked the first part very much.. nikhil aur manu kii sweet argument.. stuti aur yash ka scene.. phir un chaaron ka scene.. all this was very good.. very well written dear..👏 dear jaldi se continue karna... i'am waiting for the next part eagerly...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Nehu nd vinni wonderful start dear,i enjoyed every bit of the fic 👏 will b waiting for the next part i hope u ppl update it soon😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanchoo for the wonderfull comments... luv u all.. will update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
hey cool part yaar lekin thoda bada likha karo na plzz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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cute part nehu....their relationship is interesting..enjoyed a lot...all characters are well drawn..nice work..plz continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys... thanx a lot!! for commenting🤗😃😛.. i think sum of dem r not liking it.. dats y not commenting..😭
recap:manu[chaitanya]: yup yaar now happy ki got electronics..n dis calls for a party which niks[rajeev] will give :) waise any news abt our chalti phirti library...????

n dey all 4 starts heading towards the student centre......

nikhil n stuti[rajeev n neha bamb]: starts talking abt wat dey did in d past months..

n here manu[chaitanya] takes the gogs of yash n starts running n yash[iqbal] starts to chase..but wen manu was seeing back n running n teasing yash he colloides wid sumone...n juice drops form the oder persons hand...

part:2

Girl: meri saari dress khrab kar di..chalna ni ata ya deekhta ni hai...

manu,nikhil,stuti n yash:[together]..library ufff "nehvi" tummmmm hee hooo naa??......... or yaha.....idhar kya kar rahi ho??!!

nehvi[charu of kth]: juice ko turbulent flow bta rahi thi jo tumhari wjah se pratical mein convrt ho gaya..!!


stuti[neha bamb] starts launging and says..:areyy yeh to aapni library hi hai.;.

nehvi[charu of kth]: toh or bhi koi nehvi namak insaan hai yaha...??

nikhil[rajeev]: nai yar wo toh ho ni sakta as baar baar same mistake thodi karte hai god[n all strts giggling except nehvi]...

manu[akshat of kth]: yaar actually aj tere haatho mein books ki jagah juice tha toh hume lga shayad human cloning sucessfull ho gai as tera clone ban gya ...

nehvi: yaar tum logo ko or koi kaam nai... jab dekho mere peeche he lage rehte ho....

yash[angad]: arey kaha hum toh tumhare saamne khade hai peeche toh koi bhi ni hai..n hum koi tails hai kya jo peeche lage rahegein..

stuti[neha bamb]: acha yeh sab choro..library oooppsss nehvii tum btao tum yaha kya kar ri hoo..n tumhe milli ni kyaa..?? tumhara humsafar ni hai tumhare saath...

nehvi[charu of kth]:yaar kaha milli.. kahiin bhi....[isse pehle she completes her sentence manu[akshat of kth] interrept n says]

manu: kyaa tumhe ni millii?????.. tumhari toh subha thi n yaar if we can get seats in electronics ..tumhe toh araam se computers mein mil jaani chaiye...

nehvi:wwaaaattttt????tum bhi electronics mein ..puhleezzzz not a agaiiiiiiiiinnnn..?? main dubara dubraa library se bahar ni nikal sakti...

nikhil[rajeev]:tum bhi matlab..?? u too in electronics..,par abhi toh tumne kaha tumhe ni milii..???

nehvi: arey wo toh me book ka bta ri thi tumhi sab ne pucha humsafar kaha hai..wo kal se college start hai na toh soch ri thi introduction read karlun..

stuti[neha bamb]:w8 it means we all 5 r in electronics yupii..!!!

A girl standing behind manu's says no we all six..[in sign languange]

yash[angad]: not 5 we all innocent 6 are together again...

manu[akshat of kth]: innocent 6..????

just den a girls standing behind him,,hits him hard wid spoon[as she's eating fried rice n shahi paneer]

girl: haan haan abhi srf 4 5 months huye ni ki tum apne bhojanalaya ko bhool gaye ...koi naa no bhojan for u from now..

manu[akshat of kth]: arey nai nai sanya[yes!!she's sixth innocent..sanya[ammna shariff] aisi baat ni hai me toh bus was chking ki baakiyo ko yaad hai yaa ni...

evryone starts laughing....n greets sanya wid a hugg....

nikhil[rajeev]:dis really calls for a treat so lets attaackkk .......

all of dem shouts together: kaustubh villa..[its small wood house gifted to dem by dere parents for dere precious frndship which dey share jus like kaustubh manni where dey can spend tym togethre..its on d outskirts]

screen is divided ito two halves:

first half: all parents are sitting together n saying: Not agaiiiiinn..!!!! God bless teachers n college....

on d oder half: all six r partying n giving eachoder high five n shouting:yessss!!!yupieeeeeeeeee!!! we all r together again..God bless our frndship...

After partying all went back to dere homes wid a new excitement n feeling of new adcentures dat dey will doo during their graduation...

A new bright day...wid sun rising...
nehvi[charu of kth]: she's all ready n excited to explore the new world of electronics n calling sumone..

sanya[ammna shariif]:All ready n cooking n packing 6 tiffins...

in stuti's room[neha bamb]: she's answering the phone call...

stuti[neha bamb]: kya yaar nehvi itbni subha subha kyun call kiya.. waise gud morning..n haan ab bta kya hua..

nehvi[charu]: arey kiddo wake up..aj col. ka first day hai n yaha tujhe sone ki sujhi hai m soo excited for new books..

stuti: yr subha subah yeh ashubh baate ni karte books n all..n yaar mujhe toh yahi jana hai hostel se he toh bahar nikalna hai...waise ab toh tune mujhe utha he diya hai...so ab col. mein milte hai..

In yash's[ angad] room: his mom is knocking the door n saying: yash uthh jaao college ka first day hai aj he bahar nikalne ka irada hai kya..

yash[angad]: hmmmmmm [in sleeping tone] mom sone do na pehla he din hai abhi kal second day bhi hoga den third day bhi ayega..

mom: tum khudd bahar aa rahe ho ya main ander auun..??

yash: kya mom app bhi...i knw app ander ni aooge..

mom: toh main ander aakar btaunn..she jus opens the door of his room..

listining the sound of door he jumps from his bed n cum out of his room..
mom: par mujhe ajatk samajh ni aya tum kamre mein aane kyun ni dete..

yash: mom itna mat sochiye..yeh bahar borad hai na "danger zone" abhi ke liye itna he kaaffi hai..n by saying soo he goes to washroom to get ready

In manu[akshat of kth] n nikhil's[rajeev] hostel room:

manu: yr niks ruk ja m going first tu bahut time lgakar ayega.. mujhe basketball court bhi jana hai..

nikhil: toh wohi toh keh rha hoon tu toh 2 min mein ready ho jayega toh pehle mujhe jaane de as mujhe tym lagta hai na..n gives wink..

manu: nopes is barr kuch ni pehle me ja rha hoon for baath..

n dey both r fighting wen oder person sees washroom empty n goes inside..

nikhil: le ja abb pehle..tujhe jana tha na...

manu goes to basket ball court wid deekh lunga tujhe look...

and nikhil goes back to his room..as still dere is sum tym for col.

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all of six meet in dere department n searching for time table n dere class mates..


end of part two..

comming up..:.interaction wid seniors and dere PDP..!!

happy janmashtmi to all..!!!may krishna bless u all..!!

wid regards :neha and vinny!!😳😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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fab part gals.......👏...woww all 6 2gether again..ab to college waale gayye..😆...hope they hv fun..😉...cuz then we'll hv fun too..
gr8 part....plz continue soon.......😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhu98pihu

fab part gals.......👏...woww all 6 2gether again..ab to college waale gayye..😆...hope they hv fun..😉...cuz then we'll hv fun too..
gr8 part....plz continue soon.......😳

hey no thanchoo dear..🤗🤗...yup dere's lot in store😆😆hope u'll like dem too...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part
finally all six of them together
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanx for all d clappings..😃
@Iqbal Neha1 : yup atlastt dey all r togetehr..

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