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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Yaar pls update...!!😡😡😡

Gussa mat karo na baba ud dene jaa rahi hoon.😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Jaane Bhi De
Jab agle din saare ladkon ki aankhein khuli to vo sab apne aap ko Yudi k ghar me paate hain vo bhi jameen par.

"Abe yaar hum yahan kab aaye?" Huda asked holding his head.

"Pata nahi bro, mujhe bhi kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai." Yudi replied watching him.

"Mai kahan hoon?" Alekh got up with a heavy headache n looked at all.

"Kya oye kaidi teri yaaddaasht nahi gayi hai samjha." Huda said irritatingly.

"To hum yahan kahan hai?" he again asked confusingly.

"Yaad kaise aayega kuch jab saari raat aish ki gayi hai awaraa logon jaise." Neelu said entering in the room.

Neelu ko saamne dekh kar saare ladko k hosh hi ud gaye ab kya karein sochne lage sab k sab.

"Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai?"Alekh asked her.

"Mai yahin rehti hoon kyounki ye mera ghar hai." She said giving him a killing look.

"Yaar Neelu kyoun naraj ho rahi hai yaar, tum log bhi to hum ko le nahi gaye the enjoy karne." Karan said.

"Tum to chup hi karo aur Neelu chal yahan se kyoun apna dimaag garam kar rahi hai in logon se baat kar k. Vaise bhi in se baat karne se koi fayda nahi hai. Pade rehne do inhe yahin" Shreya said pulling Neelu out of the room and they both locked the room.

"Ye kya bund kyoun kar diya hume?" Vyom asked.

"Theek kiya hai ab pade raho yahin." Naina said without looking at him.

"Ab kya karein?" Ali asked.

"Ruk kuch sochne de." Huda said.

They thought a plan n one by one they came out of the room from window and when the gals saw them they stood shocked.

"Tum sab bahar kaise aaye?" they all asked.

"Vo kya hai na ki tumhara pyaar hum ko bahar keech laya hum ko andar rehne hi nahi de raha tha." Karan said naughtily to Shreya.

"Go to hell u n ur love." She said n was about to leave when.

"Jab raat me aish kar rahe the vahan tab hum aur humara pyaar nahi yaad aaya na?" Neelu gave all of them dangerous looks.

Karan:- O meri jaan na lele ke meri jaan
o meri jaan
na lele ke meri jaan
teri ada
teri ada

Ye mauka baaki k sab bhi to nahi chod sakte the na to vo bhi start ho gaye.


Ali:-jaan jala na tujhe pe deewana
jaan jala na tujhe pe deewana

mein hoon fida
mein hoon fida

Ab baari thi apne sone Alekh ki jo har tarah se Neelu ko manane me juta tha.


Alekh:-gustaakhi maaf karde
ab to insaaf karde
apna dil saaf karde
kehna to maan le


Ab aate hain apne Vyom jee jo Naina ko manane me lage the.

Vyom:- ho?jaane bhi de jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua

jaane bhi de

Karan bechara kabhi Shreya ko icecream le kar de raha tha kabhi chocolate aur kabhi kuch aur par vo maan kahan rahi thi vo to gusse me chali jaa rahi thi sadak par.

Karan:-gussa tera jhootha
jhoothi moothi berookhi hai

jaanu main to jaanu
teri naa mein haan chuppi hai

Ali bechara Pooja k kabhi haath to kabhi paav daba raha hai us ko manae k liye par Pooja ne us ko ek punch diya aur Ali gir pada aur bechare ki naak sooj gayi.


Ali:-gussa tera jhootha
jhoothi moothi berookhi
hai
jaanu main to jaanu
teri naa mein haan chuppi
hai


Alekh jyada dimaag laga raha tha vo jaanta tha ki Neelu is condition me jyada chal to paayegi nahi to kabhi gadi offer kar raha tha us ko kabhi car aur kabhi cycle.

Alekh:-ae sanam naa kar sitam
tujh ko khuda ka vaasta
he?..

Huda ko abhi bhi lag raha tha ki Naina us se hi naraj hai to vo Naina k aage peeche ghoom ghoom kar kabhi kaan pakad raha tha us k saamne kabhi , kaan pakad k uthak baithk kar raha tha us ko manane k liye.

Huda:-gustaakhi maaf karde
ab to insaaf karde
apna dil saaf karde
kehna to maan le

Yudi bhi laga tha apni sweet sis ko manane me taaki vo Shalu ko kuch bol na de jis se Yudi ki band na baj jaaye.


ho...jaane bhi de jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua

jaane bhi de

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua

jaane bhi de

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua

jaane bhi de

hai....

Ab aayi humare darling Vyom ki baari vo Naina k saamne apne kness par baith gaya aur apne dono ek haath us k saamne prince style me failate hue kaha. Naina stood there with awe on her face.

Vyom:-tanhaa naa kategi zindgaani
jaan le tu
meri hi zaroorat tujhko hogi
maanle tu

Karan ne phir koshish ki ek baar Shreya ko manane ki is tarah. Shreya k saamne apne dil par haath rakh kar us ki aankhon me aakhein daalte hue bola.

Karan:-tanhaa naa kategi zindgaani
jaan le tu
meri hi zaroorat tujhko hogi
maanle tu

Huda ne fir apni nautanki chaloo kar di Naina k saamne. Naina k aage peeche us ko manane k liye us ko hug karne ki koshish ki. Par Naina ne push kiya us ko peeche.


Huda:- mar ke bhi na chodunda
teri baahien tera raasta
gu.gu.gu......gustaakhi maaf karde

Poor Ali apni pyaari se nose le kar phir se khada hua.


Ali:-ab to insaaf karde
apna dil saaf karde
kehna to maan le

Alekh ne Neelu ka haath thaam kar us ko rokte hue apne seene se laga kar kaha.


Alekh:-ho.......

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua

jaane bhi de


All:-jaane bhi de jo bhi hua

jaane bhi de

jaane bhi

"To kya kehti ho gals maaf kar dein inhein?" Neelu asked all.

"One last time." Shreya said.

"Aage se kuch aisa kiya na to in ka network mil kar hum sab aisa jam karenge ne ki yaad karenge acche se." Pooja said showing his solid punch to Ali.

"Aur Naina tu kya kehti hai?" Neelu asked Naina.

"Chod na yaar jaane de na ab maan jaa." She replied looking at Alekh n Yudi. Both of them gave her a loving glance.

"Chalo choda is baar but not next time." She warned them n was about to leave when they all saw Vyom running towards Naina n hugged her tightly n both fell on the ground. Soon a gun shot was heard.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey nice part. The boys r too gud. Ghalti to karte hai but kitne pyaar se sorry bhi bolte hai. I luved their way. And I always luv ur choice of songs.

Well, Hamare Vyom to Naina ko manane ki koshish kar rahe the but bich me Huda kyun aya??? Neways, I lked Aalekh's ways of offering car or cycle. That was cute. But best to tha Prince Charming k Prince ki tarha baahein failana. And then finally ladkion ne maaf kar hi diya. After all, inse naraz rehna mumkin bhi nahi hai.

Neways, end me ek gunshot!!! Achha hua Vyom har waqt apni aankh aur kaan khula rakhta hai. He is just so perfect.

Now w8ing to knw more abt this incident. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Jab saare ladko ko hosh aaya toh woh sab zameen par thhe!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Poor guys!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ladkiyon ne unhe zameen par sula diya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kisi ko bhi yaad nahi ke woh log yahan kaise aaye!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Aalekh uthke sabse cliched dialogue mara main kahan hoon!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Huda ne irritate hoke kaha ke Aalekh ki yaadast nahi gayi hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The girls are very angry at them and the boys deserve to be punished!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ladkiyon ne toh ladko ko kamre mein bandh kar diya magar ladke bhi kam nahi hai aur window se bahar aa gaye!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

The boys are such a drama king!!!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

The boys are really smart aur unhe ladkiyon ko manana aata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Kitne pyaar se sorry bolte hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and just perfect for the situation!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I really loved how they all started wooing their woman!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Karan kabhi Shreya ko icecream lekar de raha hai kabhi chocolate magar woh maan hi nahi rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Bechara Ali!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Pooja ne uski naak pe punch mara!!!!!

Aalekh is trying to stop Neelu from walking so much aur kabhi car offer kar raha tha aur kabhi cycle!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ke peeche toh do hai!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeh Huda abhi bhi Naina ke peeche pada hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Can't he see that Vyom is there for her??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Stupid Huda!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yudi toh apni behen ko mana raha hai taaki woh Shalu ko kuch bol na de warna toh Yudi ki band baj jaayegi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vyom knelt down on his knees like Prince Charming aur apni baahein failaayi bilkul Shahrukh ki tarah!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Aise toh koi bhi ladki pighal jaati toh Naina ko toh maaf karna hi tha naa!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Karan bhi kitne cutely Shreya ko manane ki koshish kar raha hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda ki entry hamesha galat time par hoti hai!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Itne romantic scene ke beech mein aakar kabada kar diya!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Luckily for the boys ladkiyon ne unhe finally maaf kar hi diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Hopefully they will never do such a thing again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Who shot that bullet??😕 😕 😕 😕Why is someone trying to kill Naina??😔 😔 😔 😔

Thank God our Superhero Vyom saved her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏He is on the alert all the time and is always there to save Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I hope everyone is safe!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIII VARTIKA HOW R U ?
UD WAS TOO GOOD👏
AWESOME👏
SUPERB👏
FANTASTIC👏
LOVELY👏
ALL THE SCENES WERE REALLY VERY NICE AND BEAUTIFUL👏
AND THE SONG SUITS THE SCENE AND I LOVED IT👏
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
UD SOON

LOVE U 🤗
DEEPA

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Vertika
Kaisi ho dear???So Im back n I'm trying to reply as soon as I cud...
Update was really very funny indeed..Yeh boys hamesha koi na koi nautanki karte rehte hain..Girls were so much angry n boys deserve to b punished.. But our smart boys know how to manaofy our sweet n simple girls..
Sabka manana to samajh mein aata hai par Huda abhi bhi Naina ke hi picche pada hai...Cant he see that Vyom is dere for her..Stupid Huda..!~!!!!!!
Finally boys ne girls ko mana hi liya..But yeh end scene kya tha..
Was some1 trying to shoot Naina ???
Vyom has seen it n dats why he came n pushed Naina...
Pls update soon
Take care Bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was really good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏 👏 👏 Gr8 Part!!! 👏 👏 👏

😛 😛 😛Lol the guys are tooo cute!~!!

😳 😳 😳 Awwww Vyom is sooo sweeet! 😳 😳 😳

😲 😲 😲 Gun Shot??? 😲 😲 😲

Thank God Vyom was there

😕 😕 😕 Who could have shot that bullet? 😕 😕 😕

Waiting to know...cont.soon plz.

Star ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Rocking update..

Poor guys.becharon ko zameen par sula diya that ladkiyon ne.😭
Par ladkon ne bhi kya badhia andaz se ladkion ko manaya.koi kaise in sab se naraz rahega.👏
Alekh trying to stop neelu from walking so much and offering her a can or cycle to sit, was too cute..😳
And vyom, kneeling down on his knees like a price charming..(wow i am going weak on my knees😍)..yaar aise to koi bhi ladki kabhi bhi kisi bhi bat ke liye mana nahi lar pati. To naina ko to maaf karna hi tha.😉
aur itne romantic scene mein huda beech mein kyon aa rah hai yaar..but he is a cute dude as well.
Its good that vyom is on alert all the time and he is always there to save naina. But the bad part about a gunshot in the update is that you never know who might get hurt..Please keep everyone safe...and itne shocking ending ke bad please jaldi se continue karna
Take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiiiiiiiii vertika.............
the ud was.............
awesooooooooooome................
superb................
gr8................
excellent...............
just too good................
do cont.soon....................

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