FF When yu look me in the eye PG.4 NEW KA

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay guys just relli bored with KIT nowadays so heres a new FF im starting:
Kanya + Ranbir = both normal people like us noones rich no ones poor their in high skewl age: 17
Kanya: is sick and tired of her life she wants a guy just for her to hold her and let her melt in his arms someone funny romantic wonderful ... also she has a dream to become a singer .. shes been born and raised in the US and so she wants to become a American singer.. she's like you and I she has a job she works for her money .. and her dad gave her the most crappiest car just to drive to work and come back ... everyone has the car she wishes she could have a car unordinary a superstar car ... but nope ... her ex broke up with her abt a month ago she's crushed and is making plans to crush him when shes a major star ...
Ranbir: i think its just a bit too early to reveal his personality so wait up!!
Intro-
K- Mom im going to work ok?
Pammi = Mom - kitne darfa patao upni angrazi chor de hindi me bola kar
K- ok mom im going Namaste happy??
K- gets in the car ...
K- yes!! it actually started !! finally god!!
Kan gets to work .. works .. and when the store closes she leaves .. to go to her car
K- I left my car unlocked!!! man im soo stupid !!
Kan tries to start it ... still trying
K- man see now it's not working mom's gonna be mad and think im with sum fob/street guy!!
Kan hears a knock on her car door .. she looks up and...
K- AHH!! (in her head) omg who is this guy .. o wait maybe he's asking directions .. let me just open the door.. calmly
K- uuh. yes? how may i help you?
R = ranbir- get out of the car...
K- WHT .. no you dont touch this car im going to call the cops on you!!
R- go ahead!
K- let me just find my phone .. uuhh (searches thru her purse) uuhh its battery is .. uuhh done may i use yurs ??
R- uuhh no!! now get out !!!
whts Kan gonna do?
hope yu enjoyed it!! will cotn soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good Job for the intro.

Continue Soon!
Its sound nice so far.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my god this is amazing
plz do cont zara
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Himanivineet

oh my god this is amazing

plz do cont zara

hehe thanks dude ..
i'll cont just now cuz theres nothing else to do😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzz cont soon
its funny and cute
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next part :

K- NO! yu cant make me get out who are you huh?
R- does it matter? get out!
K- Why should I this is MY car ok ?
R- uumm.. actually your car is right over there ( points to another car that looks exactly the same)
Kanya blushed she got out and checks the car she was in's liscense plate
K- oo uuhh sorry ..
R- yea... sorry
K- but yu could have just said that it was your car
R- ok then im sorry happy now? uumm im new here im 17 and i just moved ...
K- o relli hi im natasha😆 ( kan didnt wanna tell him her actual name becuz he could tell the whole neighbourhoodm their little embarassing moment she couldnt take that risk) im 17 too but i didnt just move .... i've actually been here for 7 years now .. what highschool are you goin to go to?
R- Hardford high
K- OMG really ... WHY THAT ONE .. i mean oo cool i go their too ok i really have to go now ill se you around
Kan gets in her car and tries to start it still isnt working ranbir pulls his car over so its right beside hers
R- ill drop yu home if yu want
K- naw its ok..
R-wanna call your parents with my phone since yours isnt working?
K- uuh thanks !!
right when kanya bent over to get the phone it fell out of her hand she couldnt help but turn red
K- im relli relli sorry !!
since it was dark they couldnt see anything they were serching for the phone when ranbir found it
R- here you go
K- thanks😳
Kanya's parents said they'll come and pick her up in abt 5 mins so she waited ..
R- i can still drop yu
k- no thanks my mom will freak typical desi mother if she sees her daughter cum home with a fob boy no offense she'll flip
R- o i c i would no im desi too btw my name is ranbir
K- o nice name!! oh here my parents are g2g!
Kanya was relli relli freacked out becuz she just shared two relli majour embarassing moments with a fob she doesnt even know and he might spill her moments at skool!
next morning :
neha = kanya's sister
N- Kanya di .. phone for you !!!
K- hello?
R- hey..
thats it for now guys i gotta go!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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FABOLOUS Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it
Thats kind of what I would do and say to ranbir........lol lol lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: desaigirl101

FABOLOUS Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it
Thats kind of what I would do and say to ranbir........lol lol lol

lol aww thanks hun
glad yu liked it!!
i know i would say the same 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyyyyyy
gr8 update man
plzzz
cont yaar
i m loving it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Himanivineet

heyyyyyyy

gr8 update man
plzzz
cont yaar
i m loving it

thanks man..
ill cont soon
but i gotta cont my other FF🤢😆
lmao .. ill get to this one if i have time
if not ill cont tom😊

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