FKG2 - Audition Round -Page 1 and Page 13 - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey ankita how u doin? so enjoying ur golden period ...yeah so far we have 2 entries ...lets see how far we can go...hope we get more entries from both the section ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
raghav bro I just posted your entry on page 16
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Posted: 19 years ago
raguuu!!!! man luved ur 1!!! hilariuz 😆 😆 !! too good my frnd 👏 !!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome entry Zee and Raghav 👏 👏 👏 Veryyyyyyyyyyy well written 👏 👏 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
good work zee and raghav 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Ok so here's my entry😃Its my first time so might not be that good!But hope you all enjoy it😊It is really lonngggg most of u might not even read it..but I hope u do..Its really simple😳I'll try to improve as all the contestants say😆

~*My Entry!!*~

An adventure with my star!

Ahhhh...Finallyy!!My holss have started!And I had made loaddzz of planzz.But was not aware of the kind of adventure I was going to experience....Read More to find out!

My family;my mom,dad,big sis n me.were having a quiet dinner until my father broke the silence and gave us a good,bad kinda news.He said "Listen kids!We all are going for an holiday!And I was like WOW!!that's such a great news... Then my father said "until now!I mean we're going London to visit your great grandmom Queen Elizabeth!

Yepp..she was our gran..umm..kind of😆Pheww!!i just hate visiting herr..all those manners stuff..🤢GOD!!I feel like running away..once i did..but..that's a lonnng story!

Later our mom told us 2 pack our bags...I opened my drawer to find a diary..It was no ordinary diary..It was really special to me.It all the stuff,pics etc about Meenal Jain!I was her biggest evr fan born on this planet!!!I always felt I had a heart to heart connection with her!

Then I just hugged the diary and Kept it in my bag.

Uffff..The day had finally arrived.We were in London.Outside the airport a driver with a face like mushed potato came to pick us up😆

After reaching the palace..I said "coool!it isnt bad after all😳"We had our lunch with my gran..She was sweet kind of😕..and the palace😲ohh .. was huuuuuuggge..anyone could easily get lost!

Enough of the palace!Lets get to the main part!The next morning me and my cousin and her big sis(they live in London,just came for a visit!) were watching television on the PLASMA TV!cool,right?and suddenly my mouth was left open for a longgg longg time!Guess why?😆I just saw a promo of Meenal!!!it said she was going to perform in London Albert Hall after three days!Omgg!can you believe that???i mean....god!i was soo happy.

I just had to go there at any cosstt!!!I begged my mom to let me go!!after a lot of talking , begging stuff she allowed me.Phew!

I was really happy!!It was the happiest day of my entire life!I got ready with my camera and my special diary😳

We arrived to the albert hall!ohhh..my heart was pumping to see and hear Meenal!we arrived a lil faster so I could meet her..Godd!!Finally my dream was turning into reality.Just imaginee..Oh god!!!Thank youuuuuu!!!!!!!!

My cousin arranged everything and we were on our way to Meenal's dressing room..Ahhh..She was just 900 cm away from me..We opened the door and saw myyy IDOLLLLL!!!!!!!MEENAL WAS THEREE!!!my life stopped right theree..My cousin said Hello I'm Jia and she's Ashma..Meenal said in her usual sweet voice and her sweet head actions "Hi Jia!Hi Ashmaa!Its really nice seeing my fans coming to meet me"Jia said no no..Ashma is the biggest ever fan of you..She pinched me and whispered"say something u dodo!" I was in a state of shock..I coudnt speak..I just my goofy smile on my face watching or rather starring Meenal!I said..Yaa i really like you..I mixed up all the words .. I was sweating like hell.I was dam nervous..

After spending our whole 10 min. there we came out to find our seat!My cousin Jia was really angry at why woudnt she be I was angry at myself!I lost such a golden chance..I kept thinking about her the whole time until the concert started..She rocked the showw!!She sang ishq samundar,lambi jdaai and Kajra re!!Wowwwwwwwww!!she was soo good!!She kept on smilingg!I had a greatt time!It was the greatest day of my whole life!really!

After the show ended i went towards the back door to see a glimpse of Meenal go!She was talking with someone when suddenly a man was walking towards Meenal!Oh noooo!!!He was kidnapping her!!I rushed towards Meenal and with my diary I hit it hard on that man's head!he fainted I took Meenal's hand and rushed!!wait!!Meenal's handds!They were soo soffftt!!😳ok so while we were running we fell down in a gutter😆Annd..got our clothes dirty!And we me "THE NINJA TURTLES!" yup!😆

The ninja head told us that an enemy of Meenal was trying to kill her!I said "why would anyone try to kill her!"..The ninja said "I dont know..But you must take care he/she is sending many forces to kill you.and so we are here to help you by teaching you some safety steps like karate and moves to help you"

Our training started it was a basic one..But very difficultBut Meenal helped me a lot!Can you believe that!Oh..i was gonna faint.

Our training had finally completed!in just 3 hours we became the masters😆.We left the gutter and marched our way to the palace..I had decided meenal would stay there the night!!YAHUUUUUUUU!!!!!😛

Ahh but our walk wasnt very easy😆On our way we met the evil Zorla,Mojo Jojo,Mr.Evil,a bunny, and lots of people😆But with our special training we manage to defeat them all!I felt like a pro!

Finally we reached the Palace!Meenal said she always wanted to be here and Thanked me for what I did and gave me a sweet kiss😳

Ahhh..after all the food..Talk with mom,gran , all the usual stuff..Me ,Jia(she came bak home😉)and Meenal spent the whole day talking..I showed Meenal my diary and she said You are a really true fan!Noone could ever have helped me the way you did!" I had a very simple expression on my face..But inside my heart fireworks were cracking!😆

She even told me stories of II2 and also about amey-ji!She said she'll keep contact with me.Can you believe thatt?Omgg!These were the ever best holidays ever!

<The endd!>

Edited by ~@$hm@~ - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hello guys ..how ya all doin? So finally week is over...just few more hours and my weekend gonna start too 😊 ..I wish Weekend and weekdays swap with each other I mean 5 days weekend and 2 days weekdays ...it will be cool 😆

Well Ladies and ganteman , guys and gals , brothers and their sisters and all my other pals I am here to introduce you the 3rd contestant of FKG ....So here I am presenting one and only one , the greatest minal fan and II2 and FG section's Jaan , the amaing IF memeber ~@$hm@~ ( Ashma ) ...Ashma welcome to the FKG and you gonna rock.

What a audition entry from Ashma ...its beautiful ..its well written and it has everything ..it has drama, it has humour , it has fiction and fantasy ...so dont forget Asham's entry about Minal Jain and you will know who is the biggest fan of Minal and why Minal fan club is rocking in II2....It just wondefull I mean the initial build up , the palace setup ,minal concert and the action 😛 ...Read it and definatly you gonna enjoy .

Ashma , great job👏 👏 👏 and let me put this entry on page 16 too😊
Edited by mans - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: mans

Hello guys ..how ya all doin? So finally week is over...just few more hours and my weekend gonna start too 😊 ..I wish Weekend and weekdays swap with each other I mean 5 days weekend and 2 days weekdays ...it will be cool 😆

Well Ladies and ganteman , guys and gals , brothers and their sisters and all my other pals I am here to introduce you the 3rd contestant of FKG ....So here I am presenting one and only one , the greatest minal fan and II2 and FG section's Jaan , the amaing IF memeber ~@$hm@~ ( Ashma ) ...Ashma welcome to the FKG and you gonna rock.

What a audition entry from Ashma ...its beautiful ..its well written and it has everything ..it has drama, it has humour , it has fiction and fantasy ...so dont forget Asham's entry about Minal Jain and you will know who is the biggest fan of Minal and why Minal fan club is rocking in II2....It just wondefull I mean the initial build up , the palace setup ,minal concert and the action 😛 ...Read it and definatly you gonna enjoy .

Ashma , great job👏 👏 👏 and let me put this entry on page 16 too😊

Wow!Thanks a lot Mans😃I didnt expect i could get these comments...I just wrote what I felt like..What could happen if I was really there!with a touch of fantasy😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
Ashma u welcome ...you really did a great job and I hope FKG will have lot more contestants like u , Zee and Raghav next week .
Have fun guys and Enjoy your weekend with near and dear ones ...Have a great weekend ...Adios amigo 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Ashmaaa I luvd ur storyy it wuz so cuute!!! keep it upp 😉 😃

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