my first veeba and ranjan love story part 29 updated! - Page 5

~chapter 23~

Veera was very happy that now she could tell Baldev about her feelings
~flashback~
Veera was packing her bag mummuring inside her breath
Veera:ab ae hi kaam rahe gaya hai mere vaaste
When suddenly a report fell down
Veera:ae ki hai...?
There it came that Baldev took loan from the bank and sold his bike for her treatement her eyes started welling up with tears
Veera:ab main tainu chadh kar nahi jaaongi samjha
~flashback ends~
So they were lost and Baldev was working very hard to find a way out
Suddenly Veera bumped into him and they both fell Veera was on top of him and their eyes wide open
Veera was loving the feel but Baldev felt uncomfortable and got up along with Veera
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This is only veeba story for veeba fan so please change ur cap becz ranjanian feel like they becm cheated and waisted their time after reading this story line up :-)

Right now my focuss is only on veeba then ranjan so once iam done with them then I can focuss on ranjan

No worries :-) sorry for the post .I felt to share with u my opinion but ur story is going very well :-)

awesomee continue soon 👏

Note:sorry guys couldn't update chapter 23 because my CPU crashed so here u go and pls comment and give me ur feedback pls

Chapter:23
After searching for the road for 5 hours Veera and Baldev both gave up
Veera:oye ruk oye
Baldev: 🤢
Baldev:aaj raat yahin batani hogi
A squirrel passed Veera,s and she screamed at the top of her lungs
Veera:veeerjiii
Baldev had to press his fingers agained his ears in order to prevent himself from getting deaf
Veera:aethe janwar bhi hain
The way she said so cutely yet innocently made him forget all the hatred for her but he had to speak rudely in order to send her to London and fulfil her dream
~flashback~
Baldev entered the room and saw Veera holding the report of her hospital and heard her speak up
Veera:Maine isse kinna galat samjha is de sapne tode aur isne...main Kahin nahi jaongi
~flashback ends~
Precap:veeba both found a village called Matkundi and the starting of a new life and disasters

this is really fabulous!!!!
Awesome creative writing skills! Loved it 😊

it was nice but plz don't copy others update 2-3 line hav been already wrote by some other writer u hav grt writing skills plz use them !

Chapter:24
They both were walking and walking and walking suddenly Baldev's eye caught something
Baldev:ae vekh Veera ek pind
Veera:Haan oye aage chal kar vekhte hain
They both went near the source and saw ladies with 'matkas' on their heads as it was the speciality of the village Veeba went everyone were starring at Veera with lustful eyes Baldev noticed it and pushed Veera behind him and said
Baldev:praaji humein thori din ae the rehne mil sakta hai ki...?
The man while looking at Veera said yes(actually they came to the 'chaudhary's house and the man was the servant who Veera will later on call Ramesh bhaiyya so relax)
He invited both Veeba inside while Veera was busy looking at the antics of others so she took out her camera started clicking selfies(lolx)with it and by mistake she entered the 'mardon ka kaksh' now this thing was actually over here husband and wife cannot live together and got scolded by the chaudhary himself
C:ae larki tu athe kya kar rahi hai(screeming)
Veera:oho uncle aap bhi na Maine parha hai ki gussa karne se Baal sefed honjaye hain
While Baldev came running
Baldev:ae lo ji iss kudi be toh chaudary bhi Nahin chadha