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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am completely in love with both of them. So can't help but write another os. This os has got nothing to do with the current storytrack.
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Part 1
Ranvi opened his eyes. It was morning. First thing he saw Gunjan was lying beside him. A smile crept on his lips. She was beautiful and now she was his wife. They had just got married yesterday. Now she was his forever. Ranvi loved Gunjan from their childhood. Gunjan's hand was holding his. She was scared yesterday. Their marriage did not happen the way Ranvi expected. Everyone was angry at them. Ranvi recalled what happened yesterday.
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Ranvi's marriage was fixed with a girl from the pind and Gunjan's marriage with a NRI. Both of the marriage was happening at the same time.
Gunjan's marriage was going to happen first then after an hour it was Ranvi's.
Gunjan was sitting in her room. All her friends including Veera were busy grooming her. Suddenly they heard the sound of dhol and interpreted that the baarat was coming. All of Gunjan's friends rushed down. Something was happening to Gunjan, she couldn't understand what. She tried calling Ranvi several times from the morning but he did not pick up. She tried once more but he didn't pick up. Gunjan took a black shawl and covered herself. She went down and started to look for Ranvi but he was no where to be seen. She went out through the other door and started running towards Ranvi's house. She wanted to talk to Ranvi.
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Precap: Ranvi Gunjan marriage + everyone angry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW!! Awesome!!
Loved the first part!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud start, seems like mistaken identity marriage lol, then love follows after, but with Ranjan will be interestin to see how they make everyone calm down, and perhaps cud be an instant respect between them 2, if Gunjan's nri to-be says bad things after the mess and ranvi mashes his face in
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start.
continue soon. want to read more.
plz pm me when u update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys, I don't know anything anything about Punjabi weddings so I didn't describe anything.

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Ranvi was sitting in his khet. No, he couldn't see Gunjan getting married to someone else. However he gave his best wishes to her. He was playing a very sad tune on his guitar. After a few minutes he saw Gunjan running towards him in a red lehenga. She was in a complete bridal outfit. Ranvi stood up. Gunjan came and hugged him. She then pushed him and said, "Oye, tujhe waha hona chahiye tha. Itthe ki kar raha hai?".
Ranvi was shocked and asked her "Tu itthe ki kar rahi hai, Gunjan?"
Gunjan started to cry and said "Mainu yeh shaadi nahi karni."
Ranvi was in complete shocked "Tu pagal ho gayi hai kya?"
Gunjan sat down and took Ranvi's hand. "Ranvi mainu usse shaadi nahi karni. Mainu nahi jaana vilaayat. Please koi madad kar meri. Mainu woh ladka pasand nahi."
"Gunjan, teri shaadi aadhe ghante me hone wali hai aur tu aisi baateon kyu kar rahi hai?"
Gunjan again hugged Ranvi. "Please Ranvi meri madad kar. Tu mera dost hai na. Kya tu chahega ki meri shaadi kisi gadhe se ho?"
Ranvi hugged her back. "Toh bol kya kare?"
"Mainu nahi pata" she said breaking the hug.
"Gunjan agar tu yeh shaadi tor de na to teri shaadi kabhi nahi hogi."
"Ranvi Ek kaam karte hai. Shaadi kar lete hai. Waise bhi teri jisse shaadi ho rahi hai wo bilkul boring hai."
Ranvi was shocked at this statement. "Tune kya bola Abhi?"
"Ranvitu mera sabse Accha wala dost hai. Hum shaadi kar lete hai. Hum Ek saath bohot khush rahenge. Main uss lakdi se bohot behtar hu jiski tujhse shaadi hone wali hai. Please mujhe na mat bol. Ranvi..."
"Haan Gunjan." he replied. He thought he was being selfish but now he had accepted the truth that he really liked her and couldn't live without her.
Gunjan hugged him again in happiness. They went to a nearby Gurudwara and got married. Gunjan was extremely happy but Ranvi knew what he did was wrong and his decision would have consequences.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice start ... Awesome concept ... Plz-2 continue it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!continue soon!!eagerly waiting to know more!!please pm
Meh when u update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey beautiful story really gud plzz continue soon cant wait 4 more

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start yarr.. Kepp going.. 😊

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