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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Binny...

Thanks for the pm dear.. and sorry for the late reply..:)

I just read 3 to 8 and they were simply amazing.. now you have me yearning for a scene where Baldev picks Veera up.. how adorable was that I especially adored the sequence where Baldev portrayed concern for her after her argument with Ratan.. it seemed so realistic.. and I can't wait for Karan to get a good beating from Baldev.. your OS will have to do for now.. just loved it.. 😆😳

btw just loved this part..
baldev- jiss insaan ne veera nu inna rulaaya hai.. uss insaan nu abb rone laayak bhi nahi chadoonga...😡 veera... pyaar ki hota hai...vo mai bataoongi tenu 😳.

mainly because Baldev will be the individual who will not only support her once she is aware of the entire truth by encouraging her to face reality.. but will also sincerely love her and care for her on a deeper level without every realizing it.. looking forward to your next update.. do pm me.. !!


awww i just starve to get your comments you know😳. really you understand my fictions so well, and you give one of the best reviews... thanku so much for everything.. and don't worry for lat replies.. its ok.. 😃 its your comment that matters 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kajolkonna

hey!!
i m new in veera forum.
can you plz pm me ur stories.
those r really awesome.

okk sure and welcome here...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Rimi,

Another awesome post!

I just got back from Christmas holidays and saw that you'd updated:)

I think I've added you to my buddy list by I'm not sure if I did it right...looking forward to your next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunny303

Hey Rimi,

Another awesome post!

I just got back from Christmas holidays and saw that you'd updated:)

I think I've added you to my buddy list by I'm not sure if I did it right...looking forward to your next update!

thnks a lot dear, and yeah u are now in my buddy list..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
OS-9 (Slap me)
(Veera was as usual roaming around in the village in the evening. She was carrying a doll and looking at it with her smiling face)

(Baldev and friends saw her and baldev got an opportunity to tease her. He went to her with his friends and stood in front of her.)

Baldev- arre vah veera... kitthe jaa rai hai inni vaddi si smile leke? 😆
(Veera just rolls her eyes)
Veera- chhadd mera rasta baldevv...!!!😡
Baldev- kyu? zaraa mujhe bhi toh dikha apna khilona...😆
(He snatches away the doll from her hands and shows it to his friends)
Baldev- dekho bhai dekho... veera inne saal sheher me ye padh ke aayi hai ki javaani me bhi gudde gudiyoon se khelna chahiye... hahahahhahahh!!!😆
(He laughs along with his friends. Veera is very angry)
Veera(trying to take back the doll)- de de vaapas
baldevv.. varna mujhse bura na koi nahi hoga...!!!

Baldev- aur tune jo meri bat todi uss din uska ki? uss din kam buri thi kya? abb badle di baari hai veera.
(He throws the doll down and it breaks into two pieces.)
Veera- 😭😭😭 ehh tune ki kiya baldevv!!!!
(Veera runs back home in tears.)

Baldev- ladkiyaan bhi na... guddiyon ke vaaste roti hain...hahahhahahahha😆
(just then gunjan comes there and sees baldev with the doll which was now broken into two pieces.)
Gunjan- veer jee??😲😲 Eh ki kiya aapne?? veera ki gudiyaa nu tod diya??
Baldev- kyu? tu bhi khelti thi ki uske guddiyon nu saath?
Gunjan- huh! veer jee.. eh gudiyaa uske papa jee ne use dee thi jab vo choti si thi...!!! uske papajee ki akhri nishaani thi ye gudiyaa uske liye... aur aapne...
(Baldev gets tensed,😕 he picks the two pieces up and tears well up in his eyes)

(Its night time and veera is on the terrace)
(she is crying hard looking at the moon)
Veera- 😭😭 papajee ... aap mainu chadd ke kitthe chale gaye?? haan?? vaaps aa jaao na please... aur uss baldevv nu na .. ek kass ke chata lagaana... theek hai...😭

(just then she hears a noise)
Veera- kaun hai? Chor? teri inni himmat mere ghar wich ghuss aya...😡 ruk mai aa rahi hoon...
(Veera roams around to search for the "chor" in the dark and suddenly someone grabs her from the back.)
Veera- K...
(He places his hands on her mouth)
Baldev- Oye chup karr mai hoon baldev!!!
(Veera breaks away and looks at him in anger)
Veera- (with watery eyes)- tu?? himmat kaise huyi mere saamne aane ki?? haan?? chala jaa yaha se varna...!!!😡😭
Baldev- (taking out the doll and showing it to her)- ye le ... aur mainu maaf karr de jaldi se.
Veera- 😲 meri gudiyaa...
(she takes it from him and kisses the doll)
Veera- ye mere papa jee ne diya tha mainu baldevv.. bohot pyaari hai mainu ye doll...😭😊.
Baldev- mainu maaf karr de, mujhe nai pata tha ki ye tere papa jee ne di hai... pata hota toh mai kabhi nahi todta... sacchi!!!

Veera- mai kaise vishvaas karr loon ki tu pachtaa raha hai??
Baldev- arre ... bol raha hooon.. inna kaafi nai hai ki???
Veera- nai.. nai karna mainu tujhe maaf.. tune kaam hi aisa kiya hai...
Baldev- oye!! accha.. tu.. tu na mujhe chaata maar le...😕
Veera- ki? sach me?😲
Baldev- haan. dekh mainu koi bhi kaise bhi chaata nai laga sakta lekin maine sirf tenu khulli chhoot dee hai ... chal abb maar le mainu... galat kaam kidda na mai? maar le...😕

(Veera pulls up her hand)
(Baldev closes his eyes...)
(Veera looks at him and smiles at his face. she takes her hand and runs it on his cheek. and leans ahead to kiss him on the cheek)
Baldev (opens his eyes, blushing)- V-V-Veera...tu...
Veera- thankyou baldevv...
Baldev- vo..vo.. koi nai... mai chalta hoon...

(he leaves with crimson face)
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Updating this after a long time... hope you guyz like it.. it was simple but i just felt like writing... plzz forgive me fr any errors or mistakes...
and plzz like and comment... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
rimi 👏 bohut acha hein
i can imagine it

Edited by sparkle2985 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh oh veera kiss baldev...nice os ji as usuall...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Words nahi hai Rimi I am in VeeBa land... Awesome yaar... Kal bhi bahut zyaada update kariyo.. Otherwise sunday would go bad without them...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!! Veera kissed baldev!!!
Awesome as always!!!!
Luvd it!!
Cnt w8 4 d nxt update!!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow! This was super sweet! Loved it...you did it again:)))

Can't wait...please update soon. 😛

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