MRD1692020 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

" Phool mati.. " she says & he spat his Morning tea , while his Mother chuckle & his Kaka , Kaki try to suppress their smile

" Vo bagicha nahi , hamari beti hogi ... " he says

She frowns ,

" to Indumati???? " she suggests

" ye mati lagana jaruri hai kya?" he ask

" To thik hai ab aap hi bata dijiye.. " she says while taking Tea

But he so busy in his breakfast.

After his breakfast

He about to leave but stop in his tracks

" Pari... " "Pari hi hogi vo... Rana Indravardhan ki beti... " he says with pride & mostly an order tone . & with out turning back he goes.

She smile little , but next second she frown

" Shyad Ranaji bhool gaye ki vo hamari bhi beti hogi" she mutters to herself


Years passed on..

Pari is seven years old now. But she is truly Rana Indravardhan daughter. Only two things she inheri ted from her mother , Innocence & long hair.

Rana ji discuss something with Rajmata , after discussing something Ranaji come out happily. But he stops whenhe felt some one tug his pant.

Ranaji look at source & found Pari.

" Aap yaha ? Kuch kaam tha ? , Rajkumari" he ask

" Ji , kya aap hamare saath mai chal sakte hai?

" Ha kyu nahi ?" per hum ye puch sakte hai , ki hume kaha jana hai ?" he ask

" mere kamre mai " she answers & give him smile.

" theek hai chaliye"

In Her Room

"Aap yaha baith jaiye , hum abhi aate hai . " she says & he nods his head

Adjust himself on her Bed.

He look at her , while she goes to Mirror & neat her frock & her hair.

" Rajmata... " Ranaji thinks & smile at himself

" Aap Chai lenge ya Coffee ?" she ask

" Chai. " he answers wondering whats she upto

After some miuntes she come with little Cup & saucer from her Play kit & forward in front of Ranaji

" Chai " she says & he take cup from her hand.

He holds cup in his hand ,& thinks what to do , but feels her gaze on him.

He acts that he drinks Tea , from her cup.

" Hum aap se bahut jaruri baat karni hai ,Ranaji.." she says

And Ranaji look at her

" Hamare Doll ki haalat bahut kahrab hai " hamhe nayi Doll chayie "

Ranaji keep cup aside & get up from his place & bend down in front of his daughter.




Created

Last reply

Replies

17

Views

3.7k

Users

13

Likes

66

Frequent Posters

MRD1692020 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#2

"Kyu nahi ? aapbata dijiye aap ko kaise Doll chayie , aapki iccha jarur puri hogi " he assures her

She also seat on floor.

" Ap jameen per kyu baithi hai? Rajkumari " Ranaji ask

" Aap bhi to baithe hai , aur jab aap aurRajmata baat karte hai , tab to aap Chai peete hai , au raise neeche nahi baithe , Chair per baithe hai na ?" she ask while looking at his eyes with worry.

" Ooo to ye Rajmata ji ki nakal utar rahi hai " Quickly he thinks to himself.

" Aur ek baat ,hamari saheli Kalavati ki tabiyat thik nahi hai aisa Rani maa ne kaha hai , to vo kuch dino tak yaha nahi aayegi,aur hum unse milne bh nahi jaa sakte .." she informs

" Ji.. to aap chathi hai ki aap kikoi aur saheli ko yaha aane ki anumati ( permission ) di jaye ?" he ask

" nahi , Kalavati hamari achhi dost hai , aur tab tak humne ye faisala kiya hai , ki aap hamara saath khelnge... " she orders , but suddenely she realize what she said

" Maaf kar dijiye Ranaji , humra vo matlab nahi tha " she says in slow voice looking down.

" Per humhe aap ke saath samay beeta kar aanad hi hoga" Ranaji says & kiss her forhead.

She immeadtly get up from her place & holding her frock's both corner , she slowly bend down from her waist "Thank you... "

Ranaji just blink his eyes.

" Aap se aur ek baat puchni thi , " she says in slow tone

" Ha puchiye , kya puchna chathi hai aap ? " Ranaji ask in causal tone

" Abhi samay kya hua hai ?" she ask while looking in his eyes.

" 6 baj chuke hai "

She smile widely .

" Mis . Margarate ne hamhe kuch dane steps bataye the , lekin vo aaj nahi aa rahi . " she informs him sadly

" Ji , hum jaante hai " he says

" to kya aap dukhi hai , ki vo nahi aa rahi hai ?" Ranaji ask her

" Ji ,hamhe dance karna pasand hai " she informs him.

Ranaji get up from his place & take her in his arms & seat on bed , adjusting her in his lap.

He thinks for good minute. & then sighs .

" Kya aap hamare saath dance karna pasand karegi Rajkumari ?" he ask in polite manner

"Jarur ,humhe bahut hi khushi hogi " she says

With that he immeadtly get up & she still in his arms , immeadtly keep her one hand on his shoulder , held her head high & hold his hand .

Bot dancing in way rhythmic way ,Ranaji humes a tune while she smile at him.

While Gaytri who notice them just wipe her Happy Tears.


hpe you all like it 😃


plz comment

its is good 👏

or bad

ChalJhoothi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Awesome
Beautifully written 👏
heartbroken1 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
beautiful my friend , just beauti ful !!!

so emotional , so sweet .

please write more !
MRD1692020 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
MRD1692020 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: RockingPixies

Awesome

Beautifully written 👏



thank you dear.😊
MRD1692020 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: heartbroken1

beautiful my friend , just beauti ful !!!

so emotional , so sweet .

please write more !



very much thank you dear.

glad that you like it.
MRD1692020 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#8


thx 😃
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
As usual,it was really beautiful n lovely.
Father-daughter moments were truly lovely.
Loved it a lot,Mannu di..
Thanks for the pm.
ll_megha_ll thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Wow didu...
Beautiful os..
Just loved it...
Do write more...
And plss update ur ariya story also

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".