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Posted: 8 years ago
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In room raghav speaks to kalpi photo y she should defend his action wen my own mother nd bro just listing. Y she should care for him wen he doesn't deserve happiness in his life unknown to him tears falls from his eyes. On t other side kalpi in her room speaks to raghav photo y should he care for t people who doesn't deserve his sacrifice she also while speaking to his photo. Next morning raghav went to office early wen kalpi enter t office directly goes to raghav cabin but see some stranger in raghav place she was about to question him but tat time raghav enter t room asks kalpi tat she want to discuss anything urgent kalpi nods her head nd looks at t stranger who is occupied rags seat . Understands kalpi unspoken question raghav introduces t stranger ar his you bro adi . Hearing kalpana name adi speaks finally i got t chance to meet miss beauty with brains whom my bro nd sister praise a lot . Kalpi rises her eye brows at adi comment raghav says ignore tat he always like tat flirt boy.After discussing kalpi leaves raghav cabin,then adi says tat he likes kalpi but he wants to spend some with her then oly he will decide wenther they should match eachother or not. Now oly realization drawn into raghav thick skull tat indeed it was his plan to the up adi with kalpi .after making kalpi for his plan in park he called adi nd discussed his plan nd also speaks about kalpi because his brother he accept tat on condition he has to understand kalpi if he feels tat she fit for him ten oly he marry her. After adi leaves raghav blames himself for falling in love nd thanks god tat he didn't confess tat to anyone one but unknown to him priya who passing rags room lister tat . She decide to speak to guari about ragna marriage ,but she went to yatra for 2 weeks.now adi started to come office frequently to visit kalpi to talk to her with some excuss . Adi insist to take her to office nd drop her but kalpi politly refuse him nd says tat she will go with rags even denied to hav lunch With adi. After some failed tries to be with kalpi ,adi goes to raghav nd complains tat kalpi always stick with him so he could hav some time speak with kalpi alone ten how could he understand her . Raghav says to adi tat he will take care of tat. In lunch raghav asks kalpi to teach adi t business process basically kalpi agrees to him nd adi gives thumpup to his plan to make they closer. Next day raghav asks kalpi to come with adi tat he leaving early for an urgent work in lunch his pa informs tat he has meeting requested to hav lunch with adi ,evening also leave early without kalpi ask adi to accompany her.slowly raghav started to ignore kalpi nd pushing adi close to kalpi. Kalpi misses raghav badly but thought tat he sas some tight work tat y doesn't hav time for her .Seeing adi nd kalpi together always people started gossip tat tey love each other . Hearing gossip priya wants to clear misunderstanding.while returning from yatra somepeople tells tat kalpi nd adi r always together.
Edited by deepu_kutty - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guari was hurt hearing tis ,tat time priya says she want to speak about bhai nd kalpi tat tey love each other nd she prizes kalpi tat she would be great daughter in law .guari thinks priya talks about adi nd kalpi . Guari says tat she will accept t relation but want to hear from them asks her to call kalpi . Priya is so happy hug her mom nd mutter thank u.maid tells adi tat guari wants to talk to him so he meets his mom . Guari asks adi tat he lover kalpi but adi replies her tat he likes kalpi wants some time to decide but she is great girl.guari says if he loves kalpi ten she will happily agrees to tis marriage raghav who listen half conversation thinks mom also wants adi nd kalpi to marry tat makes him sad.on t other side priya tells kalpi tat her mother agreed to her nd raghav marriage hearing tis kalpi hugs her nd tears falls from her eyes priya wipes her tears nd says no more tear oly happy asks her to meet guari . Kalpi happily marches to meet guari.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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On t way kalpi meets raghav who was looks like exiting from guari room. Kalpi sense something not right from raghav she was about to ask but he congrats her nd tells tat guari waiting for her with out expecting any response he leaves in hurry. Kalpi enter guari room now she is nerves . Guari asks kalpi tat she lover is son truly kalpi oly nods her head guari tells don't worry i won't play villian role here. If my son likes u i won't oppose tat . Hearing tis kalpi says thank u aunty nd takes guari blessing . Smiling guari tells her to call mom now after nd further tells tat she worried about adi because he may marry a foreign girl nd settle there but she is so happy tat he chose kalpi . Hearing tis kalpi was shocked and asks kalpi wat she is talking she doesn't love adi . Guari questions tat she herself told tat she loves her son . Kalpi says yes tat she loves one of her son but not adi . Hearing tis guari is irritated nd says tat prem is already married . Which shocks kalpi more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Both part r superb. ...loved it...
Yaar y raghav is pushing kalpi. ...n kalpi love raghav 😳...n guri 😡..not even think about raghav. ...n adi like kalpi. ...Priya know n want Ragna together. ...
Update soon plzzz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kalpi angrily asks guari oly 2 two sons wat about t one who is sacrifing his entire life for ur family . Guari was hurt by kalpi words but says raghav is old for her nd adi is correct match . Kalpi angrily says age nd money is not matter but i love oly his heart . Priya who listing tis asks her mother y she always to injustice to raghav .she oly talked to her about raghav nd kalpi . Adi who is present in t room says sorry to kalpi nd tells tat he doesn't know she loves raghav. If she loves his bro he is more happy for both of them nd tells tat indeed its raghav plan to tie her with him . Hearing tis kalpi is beyond hurt leaves t room with teary eyes locks herself in t room cries her heart out . On t other side raghav sits in car with drinking alcohol cursing his own fate nd tells himself its written in his head to spend entire life alone no one to care.next morning kalpi packs her bag before leaving speaks to priya asks her to send marriage invitation she surly come .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Before leaving kalpi enter raghav room place his coat nd letter in his bed. Priya nd sam takes kalpi to railway station . Raghav who enters t house asks ramu is no one in house but he gives cold look nd tells kalpi nd priya gone to railway station . Raghav asks y they good for station before ramu reply adi came nd says goto ur room bhai u get t answer y kalpi leaving tis city. Raghav rushed to his room in bed his coat lying there with a letter . He picks t letter .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks every one who commented here . I couldn't able to reply each one but thank u thank u. Hope to finish it tonight. Ignore grammer nd spelling mistakes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kalpi is hurt by raghavs plan...n think to leave. ...hope raghav will stop her...
Update soon plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update please complete soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for posting this story. Beautiful concept. would have missed it if not for your kind effort !

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