Thank you sir ..... part 2 updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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For making my world complete:

'Sir.'

Raghav was abou to open the door of his carwhen stopped hearing kalpi's voice.Turning his head back, he found kalpi is still stranding there.It's not usual.Normally even after so many request, She always prefer to go by local transport instead of his car.So after office, they meet each other at the parking to say good bye to each other.After that kalpi rush to take bus because she want to reach home as soon as possible to avoid the crowd of peak hour.But today it seems she thinking something else.Raghav was so lost in his thoughts,doesn't realizes when kalpi comes close to him.

'Sir' hearing kalpi's voice again, Raghav comes out from his chains of thoughts.

'Yes kalpi' , You want to say something.

'Yes Sir' kalpi replied

Oh! I see.I know it got late because of the presentation preparation. I think Your bus got missed.Come, i'll drop you.Saying so, he's just going to open his door of his car.

'No sir' kalpi stops raghav by holding back his hand.

Raghav was shocked,as he's the one who always takes the initiative to touch her.She shyly just lower her gaze from his face to hide her red beet root face.After her confession, For the first time,kalpi made a initiative from her side.

Today, iam not worried about my daily routines.I can take a taxi if my bus got missed.I want to say something.

Raghav could felel kalpi.'s hesitation, so he let her to take her time to speak .

Sir could you please close your eyes?

What? Raghav ask confusingly.

To be continued...
A scene from my upcoming ff. My favourite one. I am just confused to start my ff whether from ragna childhood or their tashan after growing up.Please provide your suggestion so that i can update my ff chapter today only.After that i'll complete this scene also.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intriguing ! You ended at just the wrong moment ! I will like to know why Kalpi is thanking Rags. Please do continue soon. Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you. But please reply to my query also.
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Nice. I want after growing up. Update soon, u stop a wrong spot. So complete it.
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Intresting update👏... can't wait to read more... I would like to read Ragna bonding since childhood...
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Please start from adulthood. It will be more interesting and moreover we associate adulthood with Ashish/Rachana. For us they are RagNa . Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You stopped at Wrong place.. whatz that Kalpi intended to say.. Plz update ur ff soon.. I would like to read grown up ragna...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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very interesting i alsso want adulthood
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Thank you Sir - part 2

What ? Raghav asked confusingly

Don't say anything, just close your eyes for a minute. Trust me.Raghav closes his eyes to make kalpi comfortable as she seems extremely nervous.kalpi after a lot of hesitation, places her hand on Raghav's shoulder. Her hand is trembling alot. So to support it,she puts another one.Suddenly her hands lost the control over herself and about to fall when Raghav holds her by her waist.

This action of Raghav makes kalpi to land on his broad & muscular chest & her fringes to stand up.Sensing their proximity, Raghav removes his hand.But kalpi still in the same position.But before Raghav could do anything, Kalpi's places her fingers over his eyes & before he could figure out anything, he felt kalpi's hot breath on his lips.His mind got blank now .His lips starts trembling now unknowingly. For the first time, he's feeling nervous as he never expected this from her.On the other hand, going this much close to raghav, for the first time, she's doesn't feeling wrong because he's the one who made her to feel wanted & she wants him to know how special he's for her.She want to feel his love for her.But when she sees his trembling lips,she thinks may be he is not ready for this .So she makes her lips to shift to his stubbled cheeks & plants a kiss there.Raghav could feel now she's relax.So he opens his eyes and sees a smiling kalpi.Thank you! he hears kalpi's voice in his ears.So soft & relaxed. Separating herself from him, she thinks about the events that made to her feel desirable & now she wants to feel her existence with Raghav.Kalpi, 'this for what' he asks finally gathering his voice again.'For everything ' & saying so she turns, leaving behind Raghav with a sweet smile & his hands on his cheek.


This scene concludes here only.In my ff , You will get a strong kalpi who makes her own decision,Raghav with grey shades & Sammy with a mystery .This is the suspense of my story.


Sorry frnds unable to update even today.will upadte soon .Till now this one dedicated to readers who made me to complete this scene. see you soon with first chapter. My ff now got it's title- JAISE TERA AASMAAN
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Itz beautiful dedication... We are waiting Strong Kalpi, Grey shaded Raghav and Mystrious Sammy from ur side.. Plz update as soon as possible..

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