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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start dear
Ragna happy married life very few stories r der like dat.
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Interesting and different one too!😳
Ayna elanti concepts ekada chala thakkuva..
So do continue! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2: Last part


They reached the office and came to know about an investor who wants to meet them at a particular place. So they started for that place on the way they saw someone lying beside the road pakhi and Raghav went and saw that was a girl who was murdered brutally and was left there...

Pakhi fainted on raghav who tried to wake her up but in vain...so he lifted her in his arms and took to car and sprinkled water on her then she woke up and hugged raghav tightly crying and said how somebody can kill anyone that brutally...

Raghav pacified her and went to the spot again and called the police who collected the clues regarding the case and raghav and pakhi went to the place ...

Meanwhile in Ragna and Sakhi House...

Kalpi made coffee and went to sammy who is standing on the terrace where he made Lawn as a surprise for his bhabhi on her birthday... there he sat on a bench and was thinking deeply...kalpi went to him and nudged him and asked what's going on..

He was puzzled and asked y she came up as she was not feeling well she should rest...

Kalpi gave him coffee and said mujhse abh aur math chupao...bolo kya bath hai? Kyon inthana pareshan lagraheho?? Maine thumse baath karne keliye hi office nahi gayatha...he was surprised but he knows well he can't hide his pain from her for much time...Kalpi said agar mujhe batha nahi sakthey ho aur personal ho tho math bathavo...

Saying this she stood up and started going...then he hold her hand and said abh mujhe aur bardhash nahi hota bhabhi...she was tensed for him as she was seeing him from time of her marriage first time like this...he made her sit on bench and he sat on grass kept his head and lap and started crying...

Kalpi was shocked aisa kya hogaya khi sammy ithana badal gaya, then slowly after some time [she allowed him to cry so that his pain will decrease a bit] she asked to say what happened...

He looked at kalpi with teary eyed[ Sammy is a bit sensitive unlike raghav ] and said bhabhi mujhe lagtha hai khi pakhi mujhse pyar nahi karthi...Kalpi was stunned and cant utter a word, but composed herself hold sammy's face in her palms and asked y he think so did they fight at time of trip? What made him think so...

Sammy said we didn't became one till now...hum ek kamre mein tho rahthey hai but dooriya bahuth jyadha hai inthana jyadha ki mujhe nahi lagtha khi woh mit jayega...kalpi became numb she is confused..and looked at sammy blankly...

He was in tears and continued that he came to know she loved somebody else. Kalpi became angry that how can pakhi play with Sammy's feelings...but said sammy may be it was her past and she may need some time to forget her past and move on with him..

He said kalpi that it won't happen as she is not at all ready to move on...she married me with a cause...she is trying to separate her love from his wife...his wife is nave so she didn't see pakhi's real face...

Kalpi looked at him and she asked what about that person for which Sammy replied he loves his wife and daughter a lot...The couple didn't know about pakhi trying to separate them...

Kalpi was stunned and sth struck her mind how pakhi tried to create misunderstandings between ragna from the time earlier to ragna's marriage because of that at a point raghav refused to marry kalpi but it sorted out early by god's grace and they got married...

[Pakhi didn't show any signs of loving raghav in office, there is no relation b/w them not even friendship except professional so no one got doubt pakhi wanted raghav...before marriage only pakhi used to work with raghav.]

Kalpi was not ready to accept this she jerked from the bench but sammy hold her hand and stopped her and turned her to his side...she is crying silently...sammy said sorry but it is true maine ussey isliye ghar mein rakha thaki who humse dhur jaakar thumhe aur bhai kho nuksan na pahunchey...Kalpi cried her heart out by falling on her knees...

Sammy said to kalpi: Bhabhi bahuth hogaya aur mein nahi bardash kartha eh torture aur mein apdono kho judha hothey hue nahi dekh sakhtha...isliye kehraha hu mein, hume kuch karna chahiye...kalpi looked at him blank so sammy cupped her face and said bhabhi mere bhare mein math soch mein uske bina jee saktha hu par aap dono khe bina nahi please do something...

Kalpi looked determined and both decided to do sth so that bahuth dher na ho jaaye...[It became almost night] Kalpi called raghav and said she want to meet him right now. He replied he is busy in work its almost done and will try to come home early as he sensed sth wrong in her voice..

Meanwhile on the way to home their car got damaged, but luckily before a hotel [ pakhi planned all this as she wants to make raghav hers...] so pakhi gave idea that she and raghav can go there as she knows owner of that hotel and can get accommodation till they get some means.

Kalpi becoming tensed as she can't reach raghav mobile so she called reception and the receptionist told her everything...

[Receptionist called raghav to inform sth important then he told her about being struck at hotel then he tried to call kalpi but battery dead and pakhi said the same that her mobile battery is dead]

kalpi and Sammy were shocked and left for that hotel...Meanwhile raghav and pakhi reached there when they were about to enter the rooms somebody injected raghav a powerful drug which will make a person unconscious in an instant...Raghav behosh hogaya aur with the help of that person pakhi took raghav into room and sent the person away by paying him...

Meanwhile sammy and kalpi reached the hotel since kalpi know the manager he showed the room which pakhi booked for the night...Kalpi and sammy reached near room fortunately manager brought extra key thinking may be emergency as kalpi said it's emergency...kalpi took the key and asked manager to leave so he left...Now sammy took the key and opened the door where they saw pakhi kissing raghav while unbuttoning his shirt...

Both sammy and kalpi became angry and kalpi went pakhi pulled her from top of raghav and slapped her. Meanwhile sammy managed to woke up raghav by throwing water on him forcedly...Pakhi pushed kalpi and glared at sammy and kalpi, went to raghav and tucked raghav hand with her and shouted at kalpi how dare she to separate her from her raghav...

Kalpi was furious now and said furiously to pakhi eh thumhara nahi hai pakhi...Pakhi shouted back saying raghav Is only mine and who ever come between us will be dead like raghav's parents ...Hearing this sammy and kalpi were hell shocked and kalpi asked how raghav's parents are related to this...

[Guys raghav became conscious but by hearing his parents he stood study so he can know what she meant, he with his right hand managed to take his mobile and started recording this...Pakhi gave an evil smrik to kalpi and said she only asked goons to kill them as they were against her becoming their DIL...]

[Pakhi in this story pretended to be an orphan, but raghav's parents came to know she is daughter of their enemies so they refused even before they inform their children about this she killed them]

Ragna and sammy were shocked but kalpi managed to glance at raghav and come to know what he is doing he looked at her she signaled ok and made pakhi to confess by asking how is that possible as head of the goons is not a aam insaan to kill any one on her saying... [The goon is very famous but police were not able to catch him]

Pakhi laughed and went near kalpi and patted her cheek for which kalpi turned her face away...Pakhi smirked and continued that sik[name of head of goons] was grown up in an orphanage beside her house he has crush on her from beining and she utilized it to kill raghav parents so that she can have raghav...she thought of having her life with raghav...

She went to kalpi and grabbed her hair and continued fir sab kuch acha tha plan khe muthabik lekin thum beechme aagayi..meri raghav kho mujse dur kiya..saying this she was about to kill kalpi with the knife she took from fruit bowl...

Raghav and sammy came and raghav pushed pakhi but alas kalpi got a cut on her neck[don't worry small one]...sammy became furious and slapped pakhi making the knife fall far away from her...raghav hold kalpi and took her in his arms and asked sammy to hand over pakhi to police...

Raghav took kalpi to hospital and bandaged her wound and both went to police station ...Pakhi was sent to jail for her doings...ragna were happy and sammy took divorce from pakhi and he married a new girl who is kalpi's friend and all were living happily...



Completed...
If it's boring then I m sorry...
I m a worst writer I know 😉
Thanks for bearing my bakwas...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Please say how is it and also whether I should continue such works...

Thanks to all 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
This Pakhi was playing with RagNa and Sammy feeling for so long
Sammy telling Kalpi everything was awesome
I like how Raghav record everything that Pakhi was confessing
Superb update and plz do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

This Pakhi was playing with RagNa and Sammy feeling for so long
Sammy telling Kalpi everything was awesome
I like how Raghav record everything that Pakhi was confessing
Superb update and plz do write more




Thanks for the comment...
comments do give lot of encouragement...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Its not boring
But fabulous short one
Pakhi all time bitch showed her true face
Kalpi and Sammy saved Raghav on time
Waiting to read one more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wonderful start pease update next chapter waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Nevee thought pakhi will be like dat .
It seem like u were in rush at d end.

Lovely concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome update
pakhi playing with ragna and sammy feeling for so long
Like how sammy told kalpi everythng
raghav recorded everythng pakhi said and pakhi sent to jail
ragna and sammy hav a happy life after that
Awesome story

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