Ragna ff: 'Quest of love' chapter 6 updated pg-33 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyyllooo sana! 😉
Update was too good one!!
Kalpi and her maa bonding was good one to read.. 😳 and especially the dream sequence!! I liked it.. 😉
So the MVS mission is on!! 😉
Hehehh.. I used mysterious girl in my story and in ur story its mysterious guy! LOL 😆😆
Lookng forward fr d next chappy.. 😳


Thx visuu darlng
Whr r u??
Missing u a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: swara2504

Absolutely wonderful parts sana

Kalpana felt connected to the man by his pain
Pain relation always stronger one
Kalpi's bonding with her dadi was nice
Hope she find her mysterious man soon
Update soon dear


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swethalovely

Awesome update...

Loved the bond between kalpi and her maa...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm...


Thxxx swetha darlng
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely start
continue soon 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AMAZING UPDATE...PLEZ CNTINUE😃
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sry guys 4 late update as busy in job and clg. i knw dis update iz nt up2 mark so plz 4gv me ,
once again sry 4 grammatical mistakes n spelling errors so guys njy this update..


chapter 2

Nimi: why are you giving so much importance to some random guy..there are lots of ppl who lost thier loved one so why are you going to behind him.

kalpi: may b you are rgt but they are able to moved on becoz of sumone who loved them but this unknown person has no one or may be sumone is there for him but still he has been rooted at one place as sum external force is not allowed him to moved on ..btw i felt sum strong and strange connection to him as i did never feel before .

Nimi:kalpi ," have you fallen in love with him."
"whenever you talked about him , your eyes sparked with happiness and your eyes get moist at his pain"..

kalpi: i don't know nimi , i wanna remove griefs which i had seen in those brown eyes . they do not suit in his eyes.
"are you ready to hepl me nimi".. asked kalpi.

nimi: "of course kalpi! "
"as i felt that you have fallen in love with your mysterious man and the reason is his sorrows. what a irony sumone left other with the pain and here is this beautiful girl with beautiful heart ready to do anything to remove the pain of a unknown guy.she came out from her thought as kalpi waved her hand infront of her face."

"How would be you able to search him"."Do you have any plan in yoir my mind"..asked nimi,.

kalpi: " yes!! "
"first we are going to visit that palce where he was standing as i remembered , he took out something from his pocket and thrown it away..so our first target to search that thing .. After only we will think over next move.." "now lets go",.

Nimi: good!!! " you have kindda sharped eye". ...
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Both reached the park where kalpi used to went around.
they started searching the spot thoroughly..

Nimi:" hadyou found something kalpi?"."I did not get a damn things."

kalpi: " no nimi , nothing".

"i am too tired kalpi "..told nimi and she sit on the grasses..
"NIMIII" screamed kalpi.

as a shinning thing caught her eyes. she went near it and saw a bracelet .It contained a name " RAHAT' which was written inside a heart shape structure..

a smile spreaded on her lips as she got a hoped to found her "mysterious man".she turned towards nimi and showed the bracelet.

kalpi: see this symbol . ! this bracelet made from "HEERALAL'S JEWELLERY SHOP".
Nimi:" yes kalpi ! you are right ..

Both happily went to made a better planned in search of MM.

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HEERALAL'S JEWELLS SHOP

Next day both went to the jewellery shop in the search of owner.

kalpi: Hello sir, may i know who is the owner of this bracelet.

kalpi gave the bracelet to the shopkeeper ..

shopkeeper: " ma'am ! sorry to say we are not help you as it is beyond the our rule to disclose any personal informatin."

kalpi & nimmi: "sir pls ! It is very necessary for us to know".

shopkeeper: "sorry ma'am! we am helpless.. we can not help you in this matter."

both made gloomy face as their first panned got failed.

"""NIMIII"""" ...screamed kalpi.

kalpi:" i get an idea".

after narrating whole plan to nimi.
according to kalpi nimi went to shopkeeper while kalpi went to sales man of the same shop.

kalpi: "excuse me! I wanna know few information about this bracelet.."
Kalpi showed the bracelet to the sales man.

sales man: " ma'am ! i am sorry .we are not allow to disclose any customer's information to any person".

kalpi: "pls help me." "it is between us only".

sales man: "sorry ma'am".

kalpi gave him packet to the sales man.. after seeing that sales man shocked..

sales man:" ma'am! are you trying to give me bribe.."

kalpi: " no dude!".." it is not a bribe .. just a exchange offer between you and me and trust me it is confidential between us only"..

sales man:" ma'am ! if the owner's comes to know ,he will dismiss me."

kalpi indicated towards the owner who wa engaged with nimi..

kalpi: "come on! ..you have only 5 min too give me information.now pls do it..look! i am not terrorist .. i am asking just a information not your kidney.."

after lots of pleas he agreed to help her ..

sales man: "here you go.."

kalpi thanked himfor helping her..
both left theshop after their successful mission..

Nimi: "kalpi, tell me nah who is the owner of this bracelet."

kalpi:" have some patience nimi".." leto now's ".

both were standing before the villa which was extremely beauiful..

Nimi: "hello ! are you mad?" .."this is chopra & jha 's villa".."look i am so young to die ".."pls save me from this"..

kalpi: stop ! "you dramaqueen".."this is the same address which was given by sales man"..

Nimi: "WHAT !!!!!!"". "now speak up the owner and don't say that this is bracelet owner's is chahat"..

kalpi:" you are right darling".. "chahat singh".

Nimi: CHAHAT SINGH !!! ..OMG ! OMG !... " the one who is girlfriend of arjun jha"..

kalpi: "yaa right" ! ..."she is the one"...

Nimi: "she is the one who betrayed your MM"..

kalpi:" hmm"..

nimi: "it had to happen kalpi". " you can not expect good from that b**** and how would you be able to obtained the information about her"..

kalpi: "Don't worry ! i have my own source to find about her"..

"just wait and enjoy the show now"..smirked kalpi ..
nimi smiled at her as she knew surely something cooking into her mind ...

then kalpi made a called to someone..

kalpi: " i need your help"..* pause* "i wanna know all information about chahat singh including all her calls record"..*pause* "but need it as soon as possible"... *pause* "thanks and bye"...

Nimi: "to whom you are talking".

kalpi: "have some patience nimi".."you will be get to know soon"..

"thank you god so much for helping me and i promise to you i will be there for him always and no matter whatever i have to face, i will never left him"" kalpi made a promise to herself...

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girl: " don't be sad".. look i am here for you"..

boy: NOoo !!!" JUST GET LOST ".."NO ONE CAN HELP ME"..
as soon as boy looked up at her, the girl felt pricked in her heart as he looked so lost , his eyes became red due to crying...

girl: no ! "i would never do that".. " however much you try to push me ,i will come to you just as much as that"""..

boy: ""why??""

girl: "i don't know but one thing is comfirm i will never left you"...

boy: " go"

girl: " never"

boy :" leave me alone "

girl: " no! come with me".

boy: " i am dark"

girl: " no ! you are light for me"

boy: " no! go from here"

girl: " but i live in you"

boy: " STOP IT"

girl: " no"

boy: " STOP !!!'"

raghav awaken from his nightmare and he was badly sweating from head to toe...
he turned to his left side for the water, after drank the water, he felt good...

" all my life i went through the same nightmare but i never felt so relaxed as i am feeling now".."what is this?"..is this the sigh of something good going to happen im my life?".."who was that stubborn girl who is determine to bring the suhshine in my dark life?".."she didn't know my past dat's y she is doing but if she will come to know , she will definetly left me".."but why am i feeling ,this is not true about her".."whatever", why am i waisting my time to unknown girl" ...said raghav to himself...

but both are unknown to their upcoming future ,one is determine to remove his pain and other one is try to run away from his future happiness as he don't believe in such type of emotionals now...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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updated part 2 on page 13.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kalpi is a nice person. Nice update. I think ragna will meet next chapter. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update happy that kalpi so determined to cure rag
sana miss u dear
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadhuGupta

Kalpi is a nice person. Nice update. I think ragna will meet next chapter. Please update soon.


thxx darlng.
wl updt sun .

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