RagNa FS: Changing Hearts (Shot 5b updated Pg 22)*COMPLETED* {17/08}

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premap

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Poor Kalpi, she has been living with 'guilt 'conscience all this while ! No wonder Rags is like a 'light at the end of her dark tunnel ' , when he enquired about her home ! She had needed a 'shoulder to cy on and unburden ' her years of 'mental torture ' ! But ,now she has complicated the situation by having 'feelings' for Rags !! Tani is another Sheetal for her, What a tangled web' she has weaved ! Interesting to know how she is going to ' untangle ' herself and save from more heartache ! Superb update. Thanks.

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

awesome update

really emotional update

update soon

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Lovely update
I like that Kalpi opened up to Raghav and find some sort of closure

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rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Wonderful update

Rags n kalpi's bonding is getting stronger n she trusted him n shared her past was nice

Kalpi's story was sad...she thought she was responsible for her sister death😔

Ragna kiss😳...oh now d situation got more complicated n now curious to knw wat u planning nxt wit ragna ...n also how tani will react wen she knws abt dem

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gargdia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Its beautiful😳 titli...
Raghav is getting more attrctd towards kalpi day by day...kalpi's past was heart wrenching..😭
poor girl suffring frm guilt frm so many years alone n nw one more guilt will eat her of kissing raghav,kissing that man who r going to be taani whom she sees lyk sheetal..😔
what d cruel fate playing wid her?
Hope ragna becm one soon n taani undrstnds her😳
update nxt part soon.

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: _Santhi_
Hello blackrose after a long long time how r u ? missed u and stories too 😃
kya emotional update loved it

Hey Santhi! 🤗 Missed u too...

Thanks, glad u liked it 😃

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: kalbhavs
Awesome update it rose totally heart crushed one
Hope v get nxt chappy soon

Thanks dear 😊

Ummm... I guess this is my 'soon' 😆

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: lolor
ohh kalpi blames herself for her sisters death...
raghav knows he already fallen for her but kalpis pov????
raghav kissed kalpi...😳
but they feel they betrayed Tani🤢

Thanks 😊

As the story is primarily from Raghav's pov so it's a bit difficult to show Kalpi's pov, but I've tried to include it wherever I can esp in this chappy... Mainly Raghav has gained her trust and somewhere been a 'someone' that she needed... And the attraction too can be said to be 'mutual' 😉

Well, they really did betray Taani, didn't they? 😛

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan
Emotional updatee

Thanks dear 😊

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sunyy
Omg what an explosive update 😲 loved rags and kalpis bonding and the hug that released the love bug and the kiss that indicated absolute bliss. Waiting for rags to break up with tani and be with his true love kalpi 😳

Thanks dear 😊 glad u liked it

Not so soon, picture abhi baaki hai 😉 Shot 5 part a & b will see what happens n how it happens 😉