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Posted: 10 years ago
#1
it's a too short story may be end in 10 chapter almost 15
inspired by bollywood movie
which i saw yesterday
and i've no hand in this plot
i'm going to make a few changes
update may not be regular as i've 5 more stories to
update .
ps- don't throw shoes & espacially some non- veg
as i'm pure vegetarian
i'll try to finish it as soon as possible .
i'll update ch1 today itself .
it's a type of love story with no villan :)
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
i'm hugry going to prepare something fpr myself
as soon as i'm done with it .
i'll start writing :)
i may take 2 hrs to post ch1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chpater 1

(i'm going to change some moments of movie and all charcters i'm going to take from ema . i'll write it in my words )


this is a story of 3 friends raghav , pakhi & kalpana.
childhood close friends. this is a story of an unnamed relation and an unseen bond . they love each other without even seen her . she love him unconditionally
and he love her . they parted and meet again after long 15 years they know everything about each other but the thing they don't know is only face of each other.
for him his love is most beautiful in this world and she trust him he love her when he see her. did he ever understand what beauty means ?

BEAUTY - in today world it only mean by color but some forgot a fact that a person called beautiful not by his / her colour . but a person is called beautiful
when we judge his/her soul . beauty never related to color but beauty always related to heart.
beauty is not looks , beauty is innocence...

so did he only judge her on color or judge her heart .


...

vitthal , sahil & vijay (raghav father) are best friends since childhood . they cherish evry moment of their life togather so is their childs kalpana , pakhi & raghav
and their wifes kamala , neetu & gauri.

when raghav was 12 and kalpana & pakhi was 10 years old vijay decide to move to canada to expend his bussiness in which vitthal & sahil help him . vitthal & sahil both
also are bussiness partners.


raghav have some type of crush on pakhi and kalpi likes raghav pakhi is a free bird who love her friends but most off the time she love to live in her own world .

when singhania's are leaving jadhav's & kapoors comes to bid bye .

raghav say to pakhi

R- pakhi i'll mail u will u rply my mails .

P - offcourse i'll u are my friend .

in mean time gauri call raghav as it's time to leave .

raghav bid , bye to paki & kalpi and leave from their .


( one thing kapoors & jadhav's leave in same mention and kalpi & pakhi are like soul sisters so they share everything if it's room , bed , clothes or anything)

2 days later

kalpi was working on some assinments when she notice a mail for pakhi by raghav's side .

kalpi call pakhi and inform her about same .

when pakhi say she will rply mail later
kalpi make her understand it not sounds good and it may be hurt him.

on her instance pakhi open mail and start reading it but after reading one or tw lines she get bored.

P- kalpi what is this he is only saying what he love their what he not . nothing is intresting .
i'm going

K- pakhi u doesn't behave in this way

u say him that u'll answer him

P- u are like my sister na then plz do this to me

K- but how i?

she hesitate

P- why not plz na

saying so she immidatly went from their .

kalpi nods her head

K- this girl


she then look toward comuter on which she get new mwil from raghav side why shw was not rpying .

taking a deep breath she start rplying his mail

and at last named it PAKHI

so that it doesn't hurt him.


and then it beacome their daily routine to talk with eavh other via mails
in which they share their all problems , all moments whom they meet and what they like .


and days start spending like that .


...

hush finish

i don't think it's difficult to guess movies
so i'm trying to put some spice from my side.

Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4

I remember the name of movie...😉😆😆
but I would like to read. ..bcz caractor r change. ...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😛

Originally posted by: switymango


I remember the name of movie...😉😆😆
but I would like to read. ..bcz caractor r change. ...
Update soon

it's a good movie
generally i watch srk movies
but i think it's a hit at its time.
if anyone not see they must need to see it once
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its my favorite movie ever I see this movie every Sunday and thanks 4 update and I was imagine ragna in that thanks 4 updating reply awesome this movie is about love and friendship which I love the most really love ur hard work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heheh I had also imagoned RagNa and Pakhi.. in this movie... with tadka of uday...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
It's mujhse dosti karogi...
Pakhi as kareena
Kalpi as rani
Raghav as hrithvik
darkloveriam thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I didn't expect this much awwsome responce
i think i need to ask before continuing
dis continued:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update neha pls don't discontinued..

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