The Lion and the Panther- (Ragna ff) REMOVED

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#861

Vidya dear,
When are u going to update..
Waiting for it 😳

Edited by vyshuu.. - 10 years ago

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#862

Intehaaan ho gayi intezaar ki! Aayi naaa kuch khabar mere yaar ki!

Ye mujhe hai yakeen! Update pakka post karegi yahin!

Phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki?

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#863

Awesome awesome awesome!

Perfect execution!!!! Puhleeez Vidya!!!!! update dedo naaa

Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago

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annies2

@annies2

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#864

Omg! That was so spellbinding!
Simply intriguing :)

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#865

Omg this chapter was mind blowing. It took speed. Pakhi's lies and kalpna's anger on the peak. Raghav plead kalpi to control her self and she asked him how will he react if another man do the same with her... omg kalpi told him wash off the touch of pakhi if he wsnt to kiss her. Ja Raghav pehle muh dho ke aaa😆😆😆 and he fulfilled the requirements Oh they drugged Raghav 😭. Prem is basted jerk 😡. He hurts kalpi. Finally she used her power. Eagerly waiting for next update to know the aftermath.

Please Vidya update soon.it's weekend tomorrow and we have plenty of time to read.

Thank you so much. I really enjoyed it 👏👏

Edited by riaka - 10 years ago

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ayesha khan

@Fly2TheStars

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#866

Omg what an updatee

Awesome updatee

tottallyy loved it

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#867

awesome update

u deserve an Oscar for such talent that u have

god amazing

really deserving that housefly kalpi slap her twice n yet she got the audacity t malign the reputation of rag

kalpi couldn't bear the taint on her hubby honour as she perfectly aware that rag couldn't be betrayer the answer kalpi give t makhi was awesome

rag ask for forgiveness n kalpi asking the same question while her emotion was ragging in her rag word calm her

haha poor rag wash ur lip then u get my scent 😉😆 hmm kalpi hate that place n want t leave rag announced their departure

hmm kalpi finally kiss the longing man that was desperate t remove the distaste of makhi

hmm the way rag felt upon the blur vision n his feel for kalpi makhi was t kill rag n rag noblest thought t hurt a woman was so amazing

disgusting king want t malign the lady north honour n talking such bad words about her baby

that man deserved unpardonable punishment

how he hurt kalpi n the way rag enter was power packed

sammy n the warriors fighting t save the ir lady n lord of the north

rag punched that bas***d n kalpi unable t see rag hurt n hearing the disgusting word prem did n said made her react

rag try t save kalpi n prem in fear

kalpi controlled the fire and rag prepared t feel the fire yet the ball went t prem

update soon

will not be able t sleep without another update

plz plz update soon

thank thank you for such an amazing power packed update

Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago

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Sukanya

@Sukku24

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#868

Oh myyy... Now thats a full power packed update 👏. I'm so curious to know about Kalpi now 😲 and would that effect the baby ? 😕 Tooo many questions after this... I don't want to say update soon but please please try so i can sleep peacefully 😆, pretty sure i'll dream about it as this all around in my head 😛

I hate Pakhi and Prem even more 😡, such a shit minded ppl 🤢

A big bow for your writing Darling 👏, thank you again 🤗

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#869

Mind blowing update. The update turned out to be such a splendid one which I wasn't expecting the least. At start I never expected Pakhi's accusations and then the second slap😊 she proved to be THE LADY OF THE NORTH. "I deserve that" I loved it😊. Prem, what king is he? Neither worried about his own Thorne ' s image nor he is worried about his sister and not to forget the way he kept his knife to his mother Queens neck😡. Oh my god Pakhi the princess wanted to stable her love? The way raghav was asking for mercy from the god before he raised his hand on a women showed how good man he is👏. It's not at all love what prem has for kalpi and he is for sure gone blind for what he got in the position as a king. When raghav understood what happened to him after drinking the wine, I was like what will happen to him now & with kalpi😲 Here I sincerely want to appreciate your brilliance as a writer in the turn of events.👏 Sammy heard the scream and I wonder what is happening outside when they were stopped by the eastern guards😲, you deliberately didn't showed us what's happening outside after that😲. PREM was the reason for Raghav's temporary blindness was he'll shock for me as like to raghav and kalpi. KALPI'S POWER I love it. Even in that state she can differentiate her Lord husband and The Culprit? I hope you will be pleased with my long comment and be kind in giving another update today😉. Seriously it's eating my brain to know what would have happened.

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abxetz

@abxetz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#870

Hi vidya brilliant update 👏 ⭐️ ye poo o God world ki pure anticeptic lotion sai wash karo rags lips wild dog attack rags lips 😡 🤬 ye makhi 😡 she is a w***l 😡 she accused rags waw kalpi the lioness of north poo ki kano sai honey bees 😆 😆 o gid ye prem or poo drug rags and kidnap kalpi 😲 par rags reach on time par kalpis power 😲 😭 I god poor ragna and there child hope ki ragna child will be alright.ye prem 😡 😭 bas***td usdin prem dha vo Jo rags ki eyes mai powder daladha 😡 chep maniac.vidya please update soon 😭 please 😭

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