ragna ss hote hote pyar ho gaya part 27 pg 88 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
God kalpi is a little too strict not t say mean
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Excellently written so far😊 Continue soon.
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Thnx dear
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Originally posted by: eishe10

Excellently written so far😊 Continue soon.



Thnx dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dolly pie u have given us a sweet surprise!!! Ragnas marriage had happened without any drama. Quite unbelievable!!!!! And Kalpi had given a Satak on rags chubby manly cheek. Very unfair. Bandhar kya Jaaney adhrak kha swaad. Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
whn r u updating
ur teaser made me to wait more eargerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 13 b

Pakhi look at her in shock n her vocie stuck in his throat she say ma..mama what ru doing n y u tore my leave application

Kalpi smrik n sit on couch n say buce I m not allow ur leave

Pakhi : bu...but u said urself

Kalpi give small smile n say let me clear my self I said if my enggagmet broke I will give u leave foe weekend n if not then u have to work whole weekend

Pakhi almost shoot what kalpi look at he rausing his brow n pakhi continu but mama I did my work

Kalpi getup from couch n come in front of pakhi n say ur work ha his was now high n say pointing his finger on her face buc of u c grade acting now I have to learn house hold work n she tur n say leave it that buc I need to learn that one day but she turn n look at pakhi angrely n say now I have to learn gajar ka halwa for that febicol only buc of u n know as a punishment u have to whole weekend

Pakhi glup n mummble whole weekend

Kalpi smrik on her n say not only office work but u have to a company me in my household work learning class from tommorow so be on time no u can go
Without say anything she left from them
Kalpi sit on couch n hold his face betweent his plam n rest hus head back on couch to relaxing her self after some time
Kalpi ( pov) I have to do something befor it late n she again start thinkin for her plan n idea stuck her mind she get up n call pakhi throug intercomb
After soetime pakhi came their with sad face

N say mama u call me

Kalpi look up n say pointing on chair sit

Kalpi took a deep breath n say look I give u one mor chance if this time it will work the ur leave is confrim hear this pakhi jumped on his chair n say with her closeup smile thnx mama this time I'm not disappoint u prommised

Kalpi look at her sternln n say y ur alway in hurry miss kapoor let me finished first
Phaki sit quitly n kalpi continue n this time if my plan work then u enjoy ur weekend n if it again fail then ur punishment is same miss kapoor

Pakhi sadly nod his head n say ok mama

Kalpi told her plan n say know do as I say pakhi nod her n say now it take ur leave mama n she left from there

Raghav enter jadav office when his ph. Ringging he recived the call happily seeing caller id n say yes mom

Guri: what is this raghav ha who go office in his engaggment day ha beta

Raghav : mommy engaggement is at night n I have minimi 8 hr for that

Guri: so what u think it once what if kalpi know that ur in office in ur engaggement day

Raghav smile smally n say ohh I see ur say this buc of kalpi ha

Guri say yes on other side

Raghav: then don't worry mom she is in office now

Guri shouted on other side what

Raghav lil bit move his phone from his ear n then say mom don't shout on ph. N relax i came here to bring her with me for shooping so that today she wear my choice cloth for our engaggement

Guri smile n say ok n enjoy ur lunch date she said teassingly n cut the call

Raghav look at his ph. N mummble lunch date nice idea mom

He turn hearing familiar voice from behind vithal come office he came near him n say raghav what ru doing hear beta is evrything ok

Raghav : yes baba i came here so that sammy now his work n he can help u

Vital look at sammy n say thnx beta for helping us in kalpi absence

Sammy smile n say no uncle if ur raghav baba then ur my baba to so their is no need to thnx

Vital smile in rply n say ur realy good preson

Hearing vithal word sammy mummble in low voice so no one hear him uthink na ur daughter think im bad n she is ready to kill me any time

Vithal n raghav look at him n say u said something beta

Sammy shook his head n say no uncle

Raghav look vithal n say baba i came here to ask ur permision

Vithal look at him confushingly n say my permision

Raghav : yes actuly I want to take kalpi with me for shopping

Vithal smile n say off couse beta u can take her with u n u no need my permision as she is ur would be wife n u have full right on her

Raghav shook his head n say no baba befor she is my would be wife she ur daughter n u have full right on her n after our marriage still u have ur right

His word not only touch vithalbheart but someone who is witness all this conv who is standing at his cabin door for first timeshe feel something in his heart n that is respect for him but her though broke pakhi word n she came in reality

Pakhi : mama

Kalpi look at her n then her bab who look at her lovingly thinking that his dicision is right for hus daughter

Kalpi goes near hisd baba n say what r u doing here baba

Vithal : from now i come daily in office as i told u yesterday night n yes ur aai is waiting n angry on u u came office without tellin her

Kalpi shook his head n say if i told aai she never allow me to come office

Vithal :this time ok but next time dont do this n yes now go with raghav he want to buy something for u so go with him for shopping

Kalpi protest n say no baba i have lot of thing i dont need anything she say looking raghav

Vithal wisper in his hear n say kalpi go with him for ur baba plz beta

Kalpi nod his head n say let go n she left from their

Raghav bid them n sammy wish him best of luck n he left from there

At parikng area kalpi is talking on his ph. N raghav came there n say let go n both left in raghav car the car ride is silent but raghav stair her in their ride

They reach the mall n raghav both get down from car both move toward mall

Kalpi stop in mid n raghav look at her confusingly n say what happen kapli look at him n ay i forget my ph. On car u go i will join u

Raghav: no u wait i take ur ph.
Kalpi no i will go n take it n she goes toward car n took his ph .which is ringing in car

Kalpi recive the call n cross the road talking in ph .without looking here n there n a car came to hit her but befor it hit her raghav who was talking on ph suddenly his eyes fall on kalpi n the car he run toward her n pull her toward his n she put his hand on his chest to balance raghav on hand hold her waist n other hold his arm

N they share eyelock a car horrn bring him reality n raghav look at her angrily n panicly n shouted on her say cant u see when ur crossing the road ha if somthing happen to u did u even thing ha

Kalpi look at his panic state n she lovingly touch is check n say raghav relax i m fine nothing happen me look at me she say lil moving from his grip but he again hold her tightly n the share intense eyelock first time she fill something in his heart but this feeling she dont no what is this n there eyelock broke hearing familiar voice n they look at that direction from where voice came abhi come runing toward kalpi n hug her i fear n say di cant u see when ur crossing the road
Kalpi broke the hug n say im ok abhi relax n now let go befir it to late we finish our shopping n aai is also waiting n both look raghv who was standing there in shock abhi shook his shoulder to bring him back n raghav look abhi n ask him ur here
Abhivhug him n thnx him for saving his is n say yes di callvme to join u for shopoing so i came

Nthey move toward mall raghav hold kalpi arm n wishper in his ear n say y u call ur bro here

Kalpi look at him n say buc he also want to do hopping ni have to a company him late so its better he come with us n they do their shopping

At night singhnya mansion

Every coner is decorated with kalpi n raghav choice n its give a royal look the whole area decorated with red rose n white lil n geust start arriving for enggagement party n today their is no bond if happiness in guri ,vikram ,kmala n vithal face

On other side sammy n maya n raghav room n teasing him buc from past 2 hur he is various shervani but he rejected that aay its not suit him or kalpi didnt like this

Sammy : bor its ur engaggement party not ur marriage so plz chose one n wear he said teasingly

Maya : yes raghav look geust also start arriving n her ur not ready for ur engaggement

Raghav narrow his eyes n say u both go n joing mom n dad i will come by myself

Sammy : ur say we live u alon

Raghav : yes of ur continuse bablblin im cant understand what i wear so its good u both leave

Sammy look maya n say fake sadly look maya he didnt get married n he is behaving with us like that i dont know how he behave after his maariage

Raghav took pillow n throught it on sammy he catuch n say u chanced raghav n he hold mamay hand n leave from there after sometime raghav got massage he read that n took one shervani n wear it after some time he came in hall n all ladies n girls look at him in open mouth
He wear sky blue shervani wih silver zardozi work n on right side near his heart he wear a broch which he specaly design the initial of R n K
He come near his parents n vikram n guri hug him saying
Vikram : u look handsome my son toady girls is jealous for kalpan m I right guri

Guri : put a black tika behind raghav ear n say yes vikram today my son look handsome kisi ki najar na lage tume

Sammy come there n say wow yaar u look too good ha

Raghav thnx them in mean time kalanas parent arrived vikram guri ,sammy ,maya ,n raghav welcome them raghav bend down n touch there feet n greet them vithal n kamla bless him saying always happy beta

Raghav look at the door but she is not there

Sammy wishper in his ear I think she sun away from this engaggement raghav n its good atleast u save from her

Raghav give him dadly look n say me or u save from her

Sammy smile fadeup maya ask kalpana's parents

Maya : aunty where is kalpana

Kamla: she with us n she tuen but she is not there kamal look vithal

N vikram say he is there pointing toward door she is standing ith abhi circuling his hand on him

Raghav freez in his place memorizing his lady with open mouth maya wishper in his ear shut ur mouth raghav n stop staring her

Raghav look at her n then everyone who r staring her n he mumble if its not my guest then I berak everyone mouth

He again look her n she is coming slowy slowly
She wear sky blue n voilet color choli with jardozi work n she only wear earing n mang tika ( bindiya) with minimal makup she wear glass bangle in his hand

She wishper in abhi ear I tell u this choli is difficut to walk carring his what if I wear simple n light something but no aai nthis febicol abhi look at her confisingly n say febicol who

Kalpi : thst raghav he stuck in my life febicol

Abhi smile n sa seriously di u call him febicol

Kalpi : shut up abhi n hold my hand I can't walk properly in this choli

Abhi node his head n both stand beside kamla

Kamla look kalpi n kalpi give her smile kamla gesture her throught his eys to touch guri n vikram feet n she bend down n tought their feets
Both bless her

Vithal introduced kalpi to guri n vikram

Guri put kala tika behind kalpi ear n say god save u from evil eyes

Raghva stand beside kalpi n wishper ur look breathtaking today look I told u na its look good on u

Kalpi look at him deadly n say u like this buc u dot have to carry this na I told u its to havy but u didn't hear me n know I even can't walk properly

Maya n sammy came there n clear their throat
Both look at them n raghav intoduced kalpi to maya n both greeted eachother

Vikram stand in mid of the hall n hold mike n sa lades n gental man today I too much happy buc my son came back indai after five year
N my frnd vithal his daughter n my son say a paternership deal n the mos imp thing today we r nots patener but we r going ot be samdhi today my son raghav singhanya n he give mike vithal n vithal say n my daughter kalpana jadav going to engagged both fathers n mothers r happy for their kids both father stand beisde their child n moters join them

Vikram say plz bring engaggement ring n the two girls come with plate which is filed with rose petal n in center a welvet box there with rings

Both girls stand beside kalpi n raghav n both took the ring from box

Kamal say in low voice so only kalpi an hear kalpi forward ur hand beta n she forward his hand with fake smile raghav hold his hand n when he is going to slid the ring in ringfinger n he stop hearing a voice both raise their head n everyone look at the door where a women is standing wearing a black aline dress everyone look at he confusingly n she come near raghav n stand in fornt of him

Vikarm who ru n y u stop my son engaggement

Girl with teary eyes say y ru asking me ask ur son

Vikram look at raghav with qiestiong eyes n guri ask him who is she beta

Raghva: mom I don't know who is she

Girl look at him n say now u forget me ha ya how can u remember me when u got new girl in ur life

Raghav : look I'm realy dot know who ru n whatg r saying all this I don't understand n she start crying loudly

Kamla go near her n sa beta u tell clearly so we can know

Girl wiping his tearf actuly aunty I'm nishi me n raghav wasd sruding in same college n we r haiving affair from past three year n befor he cam indai he promised me he will marry me n now he is going to break all hi realtion with me n going to marry her she said pointing toward kalpi

Finishe hope u all like this if u find boring to sorry for that

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updatee
Kalpi and her plan
she got a new plan hmmm
poor pakhi without listening plan is excited heheh
sammy will leave no chance for telling raghav not to marry kalpi
raghav respect kalpi parents soo much
and kalpi do respect him
Raghav and kalpi went for shopping together
raghav is mesmerized with kalpi beauty
maya and sammy saying he forgot them bcuz kalpi came in his life
nishi and raghav affair im sure its kalpi plan
kalpi wnt leave even in the last tym to break her engagement
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi ,sorry i dont know ur name but i just start to read ur stroy HOTE HOTE PYAR HO GAYA .its really nice to read this story .please i resqest u to send me the name of ur first story that u already finish .if u send me link or name of that story .i am really thankfull if u can do that for me ,as i love to read ragna /ashna love story coz miss them so badely .at least all urs friends stories keeps our ragna alive in our heart and near to us .so tahnks for sharing with us.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Wow makhi ki application rejected
God kalpi with another plan
Hmm gauri in shock kalpi in office
Rag word touch kalpi heart
Kalpi go t shopping on dad word
Hmm she crossing without looking
She felt something wen rag angry on her
Abhi also came n thank rag
Hmm kalpi n rag dress lovely
Poor Sammy his friend changed haha
Hmm this is kalpi plan
Update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago

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