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Swara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Nice update jayanti

I hate kamla poor angel

Hope raghav will help her

Update soon

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rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Kamla 😡 I hate her more n more reading kalpi's pain...d way she is treating n holding her responsible for der finacial crisis

Rags is so sweet n understanding

Loved d way u r writing dis story wit each n every details ...its getting more n more interesting ...curious to read wats stored in next for us😉

Pls cont soon 😃

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: sweet1308
kia kamini kamla hain yaar maa ke naam pe dabba
how can she for her dream is important not that little angel who suffer inside inside
rag done the right thing
i hate kamla very very much
i pray no one get such selfish lady as mom yuck
update soon

Yup, Kamla is greedy and self centered. 😕

Rags is a nice fellow but he thinks Kalpi is a shy kid. 😉

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Minnie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: veeranu
Nice chapter.. Waiting to know Kamla's secret as to why she hates the Singhanias.. And Kalpi must be looking georgeous in that lehenga. Update soon..

ThanX and yes Kalpi was looking gorgeous in my imagination in a bottle green/ mehendi green silk bandhni lehenga. very sweet and elegant for a 13yr old. 😊

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: switymango

Awesome update. ...
Kamala😡 itani choti bachi se kam karavati hai..kalpi is only 10 year old..poor kalpi😭pakhi n neetu so sweet. ...They care 4 her..
loved raghav. .He is ordered kamla😆 so cute...

Dear Mango,

Kamla is a meanie B****. Kalpi is currently 13yrs old.

Yes, mostly everyone is nice they are only reacting to circumstances.

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: _Santhi_
mini har chapter ke badh lagtha hai ke kalpi ka dard aur bad gaye this is so painful story 😭
kab bade hoge woh i hate kamla

u write every little detail that i really feel each and every character to there depth 👏
nice but painful update 😃

i know i'm being stupid by asking it hosake tho kalpi ka pain thoda kam karna i can't bear it 😭

So but gotta warn you... Kalpi ke liye abhi dard hi hai... But she is a resilient soul... and things eventually do get better... par filhaal, dard hi dard hai Kalpi ke liye... baaki sab to maze mein hai.

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: NANDHU92
nice update
kamala is such an heartless creature she is making kalpi to work

Originally posted by: rachufan
awesome kamala is a heartless person hope raghav kalpi ki help kare kalpi ki life me happiness laye update next part soon

Hi Nandu and Rachufan,

sorry abt imaginig a character like Kamla and making Kalpi's life hell. But it was just not preventable. 😕

Things will get better but right now things are the way they are.

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Minnie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: abxetz
Hi dear chapter 2 or 3 were awesome 👏 ⭐️ ye poo ki bachi kuch bi phehanlo chudail hi dikhegi 😡 🤢 or kammo kalpi sai kam karvatha hai Errr 😡 poor kalp 😭

Dont hate Poo... she does not wish anything bad for Kalpi.

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Minnie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: sunyy
What an update. I felt sad for kalpi. Kamlaaking her work so much. What a bitch 😡 she just knows how to stick her thumb up her ass. Rags interfering in Kamlas convo wasn't taken to lightly by kams. Her ass cheeked burned when rags took the guavas. It wa interesting how u shied gauri thinking it's her land so she just assumes it's ok to go and take fruit. Blanks on other hand didn't like it and wants her land back 😡 continue soon

ThanX for noticing Gauri although she is not a negative character... I am trying to keep the characters subtle and will let the readers form their own opinion.

most of the characters have shades of grey... although not 50 shades. 😉😆

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Minnie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: pd786
Loved the update
Haww this kamla is too bad
I just hate her
Raghav is kinda sweet
Hope sweetness from him towards kalpana
All the best
Do update soon
Waiting
Do pm me

Sure will pm you.

Rags thinks Kalpi is a kid... just 13 yrs old. 😳