16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16

maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: lolor
great update...
raghav made kalpi to take out all frustration ...hes changing...😊
now rags all set to remove kalpis pain...that will be amzing...how will he do it???

Thank u so much for the comment ...

He's changing !!!

I loved the way u summarized the entire update in just 2 words. 😃⭐️

Indeed he's changing ...& I bet u r gonna love the chnage.😉

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
Ahem ahem... Waiting for my comment...
#JustAsking ... Just say... Sejal Ji I await for your wonderful comment.. 😆

Main aisa kuch bhi nahi karne wali...

I wish forums par koi block ka option hota jisse u won't be able to read my posts ...phir maza aata 😈😛😛

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: SamBricka
awesome chappy maru...
Nice..
Plz update nxt chappy soon..
Waiting..

Thank u so much bricka ...

Shall put up the next shot soon 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: Ragna1302

Awesome update. ...
Kalpi is fighting with raghav. .n raghav late her do that ...Sammy saw that...n he know what is his friend is...
So beautiful. ...
Update soon

Tysm ...glad to hear that u liked it 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#915

Originally posted by: Onnlyyeess
awesome
tfs

😃

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Lolor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#916

Reserved on 9 th may 2day 22nd Aug...😭

When will u update????

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: Hanz91
Finally read all shots and just loved it. Please come back soon and finish this story PLEASE

Glad to hear that u liked shots ...it's one of my personal favs as well when it comes to writing. 😳

And yep , I did come back ..wasn't that soon though but have already started advancing towards the end of this story. Hoping u remain a reader of this version of ragna throughout.😃

Marushkaa

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Awesome update
So roshish is back
Kalpi so worried
Raghav gone
Update soon

Tysm humaira !!!

Raghav's gone ...really ?? No one ever told me that 😲😛

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#919

Originally posted by: naam11
Awesome update.
Waiting to know raghav left or not.
Update next part soon.
Happy diwali.

Thank you !!

Hmm...ull have to wait for a couple of days more , yet to complete writing the update. Shall try putting it up sooner 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#920

Originally posted by: shoppingfreak1
Such a beautiful update after so long!!
Loved it so much!
It made my Diwali special!
Raghav is leaving.. gosh, the part where they leave the building was so saddening.
Love you Maru!
Love ur quotes at the end..
And HAPPY DIWALI!

Xoxo
Prathama

Prathama ...I know it's been quite a while. I really really missed this .. reading comments & replying ofcourse !!! 😃😃

Raghav is leaving ...I mean really ? No one ever told me that 😛😉

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