An OS : Yes I Do !! (R POV 3) 9/12 - Pg 19 - Page 5

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

@ BOLD actually i wanted to write those words but thought kuch jyada hi ho jayga😆

Originally posted by: santhisreem

Not that I'm smarter but its quite obvious from a fan like u especially after reading ur writings before😉

Too bad on raghav's part, kalpi see he sara kaam karvaya aur usse kithna thadpaya😡

n of course if Marushkaa creates Raghav Singhania then by default he has to be unique😆

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Aww Kalpi was planning her perfect proposal all day without a clue that everything is for her lol
Raghav had actually pull his prank off well
Poor flower man had to deal with Kalpi frustration lol
It was the perfect proposal
Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: vasishna

heyyllooo dear..

waiting fr my comment Lol..😆

haye haayyeee.. wat a beautifulll os!! I totally loved it!!

though the end was hw I expected it to be.. d scenes u choose were awesum.. aww poor kalpi was breaking internally at each n every scene wen she heard him say abt maya maya maya lyk almost all the tym testing her patience..!!! n she was letting her anger go on d flower-guy Lol.. poor guy had to bear her wrath.. bt kalpi wouldn't have expected dat her torture-filled day would turn out into a blissful one!!.. awesum!!

Originally posted by: mariee

u have no idea ..how badly i was waiting for ur comment !!😃😃

super happy to know dat u liked the os

hehehhe ..wasn't the end ...to some extent a vasishna-marushkaa types ??😉😉

ty for this comment 😃😃

next time onwards late comments from u ...& u shall be punished !! 😆

Originally posted by: ban18

Marushkaa thnx for this os! How did i not notice it before. U know i love one part os and short stories and yes i do like it.😃

Originally posted by: mariee

thanks a ton rishu ...the os genius commenting on my 1st os ever is quite a big thing for me 😉

MARUSHKAA