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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update or are we waiting for Kalpi to decide what to do ??? Think she has taken long enough!
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pls update de do..
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Part 9:

She boards in the train without knowing its destination. Her last piece of belief is broken. Her sister denied to trust her. Her mother believed the circumstances but not her. Her love had denied to believe her a long back. She has no ties left in this word. She had become an orphan on the day her baba died but today she has realised it. There is no one for her. There is no one to call her own.
She is not going to decide anything about her life right now. Let fate decide what is her destiny and she will accept it without any hesitation. After her father's death, she has got this opportunity first time to let her life decide its own flow.

Why he is not in peace still. He had destroyed her but why is he feeling her pain. Why her broken self is still haunting him. Why her tearful eyes is hurting him? Why the hurt he causes her hurts him more? How can his heart still wants her? There are so many unanswered questions in his life right now.

Naina is not married to Raghav. This fact brings little peace in kamla's heart but her heart is crying for the daughter she has just abandoned. She has to get out of this house quickly. it reminds her the good time she had spent here and she knows that it will not come back.

Her mother has chosen her instead of her di. She should be happy. But what this emptyness is for??

Sam is sitting in the flight. She has to reach mymbai early. She had destroyed the person who had devoted her life to them. She is so selfishe. When her brother informed that he was not in abroad but in jail and Kalpana is responsible for it. She just wanted to hurt her badly. She forgot the love Kalpana showered on her. She forgot her sacrifices. Hope there is something left to repair the damage.

He is stupid enough to impliment Raghav' plan knowing its consequences. Sam's tears had already told him that they had punished the innocents. He had to face them for their forgiveness.

Kalpana is sitting at a corner of a coach infront of the door and suddenly she sees a girl coming and opening the door. There is something abnormal about her body language. Her face is tear soaked and realisation strikes upon kalpana. Kalpana holds the girl tightly before she can jump out of the train. The girl free herself from kalpana's clutches and she tries to jump again when a strong well built person holds her and starts draging her into the coach. The person does not look like to hurt a girl but she has to make sure that girl is safe and Kalpana follows them. The person goes to a cabin and starts shouting on some lady saying it is her responsibility to protect the girl and she is sleeping peacefully. Kalpana bangs on the cabin hearing some metal click sounds and she sees a lady is putting handcuffs on the girl and the girl is crying and the man is standing there.
Kalpana could not help and she asks - " what are you doing?"
And the man answers in a stiff voice - " it is not your business".
"It is my business"
"Mam, we are from police and this girl is an witness" - the lady answers knowing her senior is not gonna like this girl in the cabin any longer and the girl seems that she will not leave till she has her answers".
"Why are you putting handcuffs on her. Handcuffs are for non helping accused , not for the witnesses"
The man and lady looks at her in disbelief. People normally run away where police is involved but this girl has guts to ask them questions.

"It is not your business" - the man speaks again.
"It is my business as i am a law student" - she whispers former in undertone.
The handcuffed girl looks at her with relief and screams - " please help me."
Kalpana reaches to the girl ignoring the police man and lady. She asks the girl to calm down and explain everything so that she can help her.
The man asks her not to interfere but Kalpana bluntly refuses to listen him and he suddenly asks her for the ticket and Kalpana knows she is in danger as she still does not know where this train will take her.

In morning, Kamla and Naina are ready to leave singhania mansion but Raghav's voice stops them. "Mrs. Kamla Yadav, you and your daughter can't leave as Naina is my legal wife. Naina dear, I know it is a shock to you as i had told you that those papers are fake. When i can punish Kalpana for betraying me then how can i leave your mother. For a mother, her children are everything and I have made her abandon her one daughter and her second daughter will be forced to live in the same house where her former lover will stay. It is your aai's punishment. And for your kind information, Kalpana never betrayed you and one more thing Mrs. Kamla Yadav, the scene you witnessed last night is an illusion."

Naina falls on the ground realising the sin she had committed. She had doubted her di and she willingly signed her life to a person who had destroyed them and she knows there is no escape from him.

Kamla does not know what to do. She does not bother to comfort Naina. She does not deserve to be called a mother. She had hurt a daughter who had sacrificed her dreams, her life for them

Raghav's voice again echoes in the drawing room - " i think i should invite kalpana for our reception". After saying so, Raghav turns to go to his room when franatic sam enters into the house calling him - "Bhai, we have to go to the chawl. We have to ask forgiveness from Kalpana di, aai and Naina. We have committed a sin hurting them. But i know they will forgive us. I am sure of it, bhai. They were forced to lie in the court to save me . Sahil kapoor threatened Kalpanadi to kill me if she would not accuse you. Papa did not die of heart attack . Sahil kapoor killed him and I forgot everything about this and i hope it is not too late to remember it. I hope we can make everything fine."

Raghav's whole world has crushed down in a moment. Flashes of kalpana's love, her testimony and his torture come infront of his eyes and the words - " i love you, Raghav and i am forgiving you but i hope you will be able to forgive yourself once you know the truth" rings in his ears.

Sam composes herself and she notices Kamla and Naina there and she rushes to them for apologizing but she could not utter a world. A deadly silence hovered the drawaing room of Singhania mansion. After a while, Raghav composes himself and runs to get his car. He has to go to chawl to get Kalpana, his Kalpana.

The house of Kalpana is open and empty. Raghav enters and searches for her but no one is there and he suddenly trips on a box. Raghav stands up and lifts the box. He opens it to find her mother's ghungroo's, her baba's 'best businessman award', his cards and small gifts, Naina and Sam's hand made card for her and a simple finger band which Kamla ma bought her from the fair. He recognised everything. This box is her treasure. Raghav asks everyone in the chawl about Kalpana but no one able to give him any lead of her whereabouts.

At night, He returns Singhania mansion dejectedly where every one is waiting for him. He looks at them and says - "I will apply for the annulment of Naina and my marriage. Kamla ma you and Naina can make yourselves comfortable in whichever room you like but you will not leave this house and please don't give me the look that I am the only culprit of Kalpana. You both have believed me over Kalpana" . He turns to sam and asks her to shift her belongings in sammy's room and he asks Sammy to appoint people immidiately to search Kalpana. Raghav enters into his room and places Kalpana's box in his cup board and he leaves the house.

It is 11pm and Raghav is standing infront of boxing ring of an illegal fighting club. People come here to enjoy pain and cruelty. Pain has become an integral part of his life. First, he had to bear pain from police torture and then he had inflicted pain in her life. So now its his turn to bear pain. Raghav starts fighting in the ring. He is not punching the opponent but he is recieving the punch. It is his penance for torturing her. He will bear the pain he had given her but he will not let her go out of his life. She is only his. He is regretting for torturing her and he will always regret but he will get back her in his life at any cost. His opponent punches him hard and he falls on the floor remembering her face.

After six months,
She checks herself in mirror again. She is looking gorgeous in her knee length black flared dress which is emphasing her narrow waist. Her hairs are arranged in loose side plaits. She is not wearing any earrings or necklace. She is wearing an expensive watch in her one hand and a cocktail finger ring in other. Red pumps of 4 inch heels in her feet is making her look taller and a thin anklet in her right leg is just perfect. She had just applied little maskara and eyeliner and her red lips has made her look just perfect for her own engagement. Eyelenses has hidden her eye color but not the intensity of her gaze. Kalpana yadav oops this name is long forgotten. She is Janhavi Mittal urf zen , a brittish indian and would be fiance of Prem Kapoor. Today she has to face her past Mr. Raghav Singhania and she knows the consequences of facing him. He has been searching for her from last 6 months and he would have recognised her at the moment media announced her engagement with Prem Kapoor , son of her dad's murderer. this engagement will again make him her brother in law which relation he had broken by annuling his marriage with Naina. But now he is engaged to Pakhi Kapoor. She had let fate decide her destiny and her destiny has brought her into the middle of people who are related to her past. But she will not turn her back. Her fight is not for her own revenge but her fight is for the innocent people who are either destroyed or on verge of destruction because of Sahil and Prem Kapoor. She has to act calmy and efficiently.

Raghav looks at the engagement card of Prem Kapoor and janhavi Mittal - " i know you will be back in my life and look my belief has been true. you have come back. I love you Kalpana and i will get you this time. Nothing will come between us. "

Precap

She comes out of restroom when a strong arm pulls her and then traps her between the wall and himself. His lips whispers in her ear "you don't have to do this drama, kalpi. I will take revenge for our destruction from kapoors. Please forgive me and come back to me. I will make everything right". He is so close to her that she can sense his breath but she does not shiver. She does not struggle but strongly pulls his hands which are caging her and retorts - "You are going to be my brother in law so behave like one. I had allowed you to call me zen few moments back but your this attitude i think you should call me ms. Mittal." And she takes a step from leaving from there when Raghav calls her - "I will call you janhavi. Jahnavi means sita and Raghav means Ram. We complement each other.'

Notes:

Thanks for liking this story very much. Sorry for late update.

Do like and comment if you want me to continue my story.

Sorry for grammatical and spelling mistakes

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Posted: 10 years ago
i like your story.but prem & kalpi and raghav & pakhi mujhe pasand nahi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear... but as u have started a new track so it will take little bit time to absorb it... but i know i will because i trust ur writing...keep updating dear...just do one thing don't make kalpi to forgive raghav so easily n i want raghav to bend on his knees to get kalpi back in his life...
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Posted: 10 years ago
i like only ragna. kisi third ko beech me mat lao.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting twist👍🏼
Awesome update dear👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
She realized she is an orphan nd for the first time let life/her fate decide for her. All her loved ones broke her beliefs in them Nd reaped the restlessness, shame Nd guilt for themselves as they punished innocent soul of hers who always kept their welfare before hers.
But what did she sow to reap to be again in the life of her culprits Kapoors Nd Yadav nd Singhanias? And how can inflicting Pain on self for causing treacherous pain in the life of someone u loved u more than her life nd forgive u for ur misunderstandings be PENANCE. No it's anything but PENANCE.

Six month later her life has again made Jahnavi/Sita who is supposed to be with her greatest destroyer to settle the score of crime inflicted on them nd yet maintaining her innocence. But still she will manage the show. She is Kalpana, the imagination which can flexibly take the shape Nd shade required Nd yet remain pure, remain mystic.

Please update next chappy soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Update!!!!
I am loving the flow of the story. .. :)
Raghav isn't seeming to be weak one here either unlike new ragna ss.. :) and Kalpana seems to be strong.. super
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Wow interesting twist ...so again kalpi came bck in rags life n she is here for revenge from saahil n Prem kapoor ...n rags is her BIL
Curious to read further...cont soon

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