Ragna SS:A Mistake (Passionate Love Story of RagNa) Ch34-43 Complt

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: riaka
Thank you for the wonderful Story. It was awesome.
You are awesome writer erika.Thank you for completing this Story. Hope you will start new one soon😛

Thanks dear for the comment 😃

Yeah, will start a new one soon 😳😆

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: b.baheti
It was an awesome story Erika. 😊

A very nice journey of two people who fall in love and get married at an age where maturity isn't that high and then the odds they meet and the turbulence that occur in their own life which at the end strengthened their relationship.

Superb girl 👏
Do write more ya you are a fab writer 😊

Thanks dear for the comment. Glad you liked my story 😳

Will write more stories soon 😃

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Dhanya Nair

@Dnair031

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Good end Erika.Pls continue writing new Ragna stories😳

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

So beautifully written! Loved the ending and the show of emotions was beautifully depicted. I felt like I was watching some movie. U r wonderful I hope u bring another ff after this. 😛

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ReezaZul

@ReezaZul

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

tq very much 4 giving me nice story.. 😃

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charvi3

@charvi3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Amazing story dear👍🏼. You r such a fabulous writer.👏 Its ending was ossom. I really don't expected that u end it sooo early.😔 Ending was superb.

Please don't stop writing dear!

Love u dear😛

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Erika.. :P I am pretty Lazzy when it comes to commenting... i know.. sooo bad of me..!! But I simply loved this SS..!! it was extremely beautiful one... <3

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

👏You have really done a marvellous job.

You really deserve one thousand claps and kisses from s for the beautiful,emotional completion

of this FF.

How can you can write back - back 10 updates absolutely in total sequence and none of it lacked

the charm of the earlier.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

That's show clearly that you are really a fabulous writer.

You had beautifully written the inner turmoil of Raghav and Kalpi.After coming to Singhania Mansion,though they are staying under the same roof,Raghav couldn't completely forgive her for aborting the child.

When Kalpi was unwell,Raghav had taken care of her well.By seeing that,she was assuming that

Raghav wants to give her a chance and now everything will go on well.A big puchka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.As it was only a dream and nothing had changed.

On that fateful party night,though Raghav had punched those rogues and had saved Kalpi,he couldn't control ,his helplessness and not being able to stablilise their married life and Kalpi's decision of aborting their first child made him to go so much wild that he couldn't even think for a fraction of second ,and had vented out his hidden anger like the eruption of an active volcano.Even to that extent of making to leave his life forever.

So,in a confused state,Kalpi had left him.After that ,he had really regretted for his mistake and went on to search for her in all the places ,where she could be found.You have written those sequences and Raghav's realisation pretty well.

I had liked the way how you had incorporated the nature's play made Kalpi to take shelter in the beach itself and to help that pregnant lady thereby making her to realise that she could have easily averted that situation had she thought abt Raghav's support that time.

And finally,Kalpi's parents had accepted their shameful behaviour and there was that beautiful Ragna and their families unison.

SO ONCE AGAIN THOUSAND MWAH'S AND CLAPS AND SMILEYS.😉👏😃

VERY IMP NOTE:

PLS DON'T COMPLETE THE FF'S BATTLE OF LOVERS AND ANYONE CAN FALL IN LOVE

ANYTIME SSON.