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Posted: 10 years ago
Super duper like -picturing @ashish chowdhary and rachana parulkar.????? Wow so good 😊 [:D/]
Edited by PMOHANTI1774 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Aww Supriya! And it's a wrap! What a journey it was ! Fantabulous one indeed. Loved it totally. Oh girl, you are so talented. I think I told you countless times and telling you again. You are just awesome! It was the perfect ending anybody could manage. Loved the emotions which flowed through Raghav and Kalpi. Kalpi thinking he has come back to take Ranveer away from her to her realisation that he could never hurt her. Raghav working it out calmly than his anger getting the better of him to him kneeling in front of the three of them convincing them of his love was all so wonderful. Kalpi finally let go of her insecurities and enveloped him in a hug with the yearnings of all those lost years . The epilogue was the icing on the cake. Thanks for the treat. It was so sweet. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving us such a wonderful novella. You are truly an awesome writer. Hope to read more works of yours in future. Don't forget to pm me if you decide to write again.

Sorry for the late reply. I'm not someone who check forum regularly and usually wait for pm s. So didn't realise when you updated. Thank you once again for the fabulous journey of ragna. Love you. Do keep in touch.



Thanks Kiara ... It was a pleasure getting to know you ... I most certainly will ... Going to watch Viku again 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chickka wrote this so beautifully pls start another novella with ragna.
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chickee



Thanks Kiara ... It was a pleasure getting to know you ... I most certainly will ... Going to watch Viku again 😉

Oh you lucky girl! Give my love to him too 😳 Tell him to accept Kiara next time 😉 Love ya!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am sad it is over!!😭

But I also glad it is... Else you would have to drag it like as Hindi film serial .. Unless the chapters were like the one in his Dubai villa can never get enough of that😉

But girl you have a fan for life.. Love your style and the crispness and attention to necessary detail!!
I look forward to reading many more... Preferably AshNa with focus on the Ash!!
I am a craaazeee Aasheesh fan and can never get enough of him!!

Do keep me posted about any new OS, SS or FF you write... I have bookmarked your blog and I am going to enjoy reading and drooling!!!🤗

Loads and loads of love
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Posted: 10 years ago
Holy moly mother of Christ!!! How the hell did I missed this incredible piece of writing???
I feel like to kick myself 🤢
My gosh! Once I started I couldn't stop reading. I thought I had read some of the best pieces of writing on IF, but I was wrong. Yours is on top of the list
Where were you all this time???? You could of save me from some serious crying when those jerkoff lost their brains and killed RagNa in the worst possible way.
Anyway enough of my ranting ;)
From starting to finished there was not a single dull moment in your writing
I was totally captivated and wanting to read more and more and more...
Love the way you fulfilled Kalpi aai Dream and made her successful on her own
The first time Raghav saw his Kalpi after so long and his reaction was mind blowing
Raghav convincing Kalpi to spent the day with him was a brilliant idea
Even though he promised to behave lol
But we all know some promises are made to be broken 😛
Geshh! raghav controlled his desires for longer than I thought lol
Love the way RagNa was ravishing each other. It was so sensual and romantic
Aww Kalpi leaving Raghav again without even a note was heartbreaking was I kinda understand why she did. Her Ranveer needed her and I felt that Kalpi was beating herself up for not putting her son needs before anything else. Raghav is so damn sexy and romantic in here. I so wish you were the writer for EMA than those bloody losers.
Ranveer calling Raghav papa for the first time upon seeing him was a beautiful moment
Oh boi! Kalpi doubt Raghav intention once again but then again who can blame the poor girl
Raghav on his knees professing his undying love for Kalpi in front of her parents was a epic moment
This man can make a stone heart person weep for him
Love the way Kalpi stop her Raghav. Hmm... I love bold Kalpi;)
I'm happy that finally Ranveer has his complete family with him
As you can see I went overboard with my long moment but I can't help myself 😕
Entire story was magical. I love it so much that I book mark it
I will have to definitely read it all over again
Thank you sooo sooo much for this RagNa story. Your story give me closure for RagNa
Thank u once again 🤗
Edited by ...Natasha... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am so sorry for being so-so late for my reply. Loved the updates thoroughly! What perfect moments' when Raghav-Kalpi made love again; and such a perfect description of emotions of Raghav and Kalpi both when Raghav came to know about his son. It was mindblowing and terrific. 👏😃 the endign was superb and the epilogue an icing on the cake! That part where their son says Raghav keeps kissing his Mom was actually hilarious. 😆😳 Surely one of the best written works I have come across. terrific and thank you so much for this. 😃👏⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks everyone ... nice to hear that this has provided the much needed 'closure' that we all crave it seems ...
much love to you all ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Supri!!!! Please accept my request to you on behalf of all the readers!!!! PLeeease start a new ff!! We love your writing style and want more and more!!!!!
So be kind and grant your loyal readers wishes by launching a brand new ff!!!!

Love you for giving us this amazing story! 🤗 Couldn't resist from giving this jhappi to you!!!!!

Would keep an eye for your forthcoming ff's in this forum!

Signing off...

Priya_remix!!!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Oh Supri!!!! Please accept my request to you on behalf of all the readers!!!! PLeeease start a new ff!! We love your writing style and want more and more!!!!!

So be kind and grant your loyal readers wishes by launching a brand new ff!!!!

Love you for giving us this amazing story! 🤗 Couldn't resist from giving this jhappi to you!!!!!

Would keep an eye for your forthcoming ff's in this forum!

Signing off...

Priya_remix!!!😉


I second Priya. I enjoy reading your light hearted style yet full of emotional tickles.

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