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Posted: 10 years ago
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So hot update lovely.update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm blushing in my pillow yaar. Cnt expresse my feelings omg IMG long wt a hot hot Jacuzzi n may be bed explode wd this raga a movement I loved this updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Really u should have been the writer of
Beautifully written
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Lol lets just say I didn't want to delay my thoughts about update
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DAMN!!!!! Girl! I want more!! Elaborate!! Be specific!! Lol... Awesom update! Like I said I want more 😛 I am addicted!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
mind blowing, how do u do it, this ff is like a drug u can not get enough of, please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Di and her double 'res'!!! Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Wow wow wow and it goes just like this I am in love with this story please please continue soon u r brilliant writer
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Wow Supriya ! Such a sensuous update. Totally ragnalicious! Too hot!!!!! Is it the effect of hot Fawad Khan? I guess so 😳 Kalpi taken away by the beauty of Raghav's house. I guess he wanted to give her space so as to manage her flustered mind. Also she looked tired. So he left her alone and even offered her the comfort of a hot bath. But when she didn't appear on the dinner time he got worried. Even thought whether she had slipped away quietly. Loved the scene where he opened the washroom door and got mesmerised by the sight of a naked Kalpi in the jacuzzi. It took all his control not to touch her. But when she came out in a towel he could see his self control ditching him and he just listened to his body. It was as if she was waiting for him to make a move. Her body started responding as if it had a mind of its own. They made passionate love as if they were making up for all these lost years. I guess not receiving Kalpi's call, Kamala will call her and Ranveer will talk to her, Raghav hearing everything. Is that how he's going to find out?

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Wow Supriya ! Such a sensuous update. Totally ragnalicious! Too hot!!!!! Is it the effect of hot Fawad Khan? I guess so 😳 Kalpi taken away by the beauty of Raghav's house. I guess he wanted to give her space so as to manage her flustered mind. Also she looked tired. So he left her alone and even offered her the comfort of a hot bath. But when she didn't appear on the dinner time he got worried. Even thought whether she had slipped away quietly. Loved the scene where he opened the washroom door and got mesmerised by the sight of a naked Kalpi in the jacuzzi. It took all his control not to touch her. But when she came out in a towel he could see his self control ditching him and he just listened to his body. It was as if she was waiting for him to make a move. Her body started responding as if it had a mind of its own. They made passionate love as if they were making up for all these lost years. I guess not receiving Kalpi's call, Kamala will call her and Ranveer will talk to her, Raghav hearing everything. Is that how he's going to find out?




Fawad was seriously hot, dude! How did u enjoy the film? I enjoyed it quite a bit, surprisingly ... Given the annoying heroine!!

Well... You are bang on their feelings n emotions from the last update... But maybe the revelation will not be as you imagine after all... Wait and watch 😉

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