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Posted: 10 years ago
EAGERLY WAITING TO KNOW RAGHAV'S PLANS FOR MAKING THE DEAD SAPLING OF LOVE
TO GROW,NOURISH AND BLOSSOM IN THEIR LIVES..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls update dear. Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aru18

res

unres..
2nd amazing update..
1st warn you back to back updates deke gayab mat hoona..😆kidding
the both update was awesome
awwo kamala love kalpi..finally someone is there for her..
thank god kamala also relise her mistake..and vitthal also with kalpi..
now what is raghav plaaning to do??? what's going on his mind???
continue soon dear..😃


Thank u Aru.. Dekh ho gai naa m gayab!! I guess I need to appoint a manager for time management.😆

Glad u liked it.
Raghav's plan is bit different... I am hoping that I won't get bashed for it as well.

Will try to write next part soon.

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

sooo glad finally u update...luv ur amazing update very much...😃.

plez plez...update soon..really2 eager waitg 4 ur next update...😃

thanks frend 4 giving me beautiful story..

waiting 4 RAGNA scenes...😃


Thank u dear... M glad u liked it.

I will try to update in a day or two.

Aww... M happy u liked this story.. No need to thank me.


Originally posted by: sweet1308

Too good yaar wat a fab update u just too good


Thank u dear... Happy that u liked it.

Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

resh
unres
vishu🤗 thank u darling for dedicating dis amazing update to me❤️

a father who love his kids frm d core of his heart are just flied away, shattered their other sibling life, n lovable child just bearing all pain n still smiling. Its just an cursing life for an father.

Maya enter n vithal all anger reach to height n yes there he go, m waiting for dis only, evn i said na vishu y vithal doesnt react on maya. Yes he reacted today. N double bonanza evn kamla slap her for kalpi's sake. I surprise for her behavious bt i undstnd her pain as well, though she behave so badly with kalpi, bt an women, an DIL and an mother she herself went through a war which is dificult for any women.

As an women and mother kamla undstnd wat kalpi is going in her life n dat cz of her own other daughter n she slapp her.
M nt saying anything on maya, she is guilty nw bt no use she did mistake knwingly just hate her. Bt one thing she did ryt showed miror to kamla n atleast mother daughter reunion hpnd.

Kalpi is sitting lifelessely is realy heart pierceing. Her tears also dried bt thanks to kamla, who realised her mistake in went to kalpi n yes mother love alws break all hurdles of their childs life. And it hpnd with kalpi she cried by hugging her. She rest on kamla's lap finding solance to her piercing heart.
Love to see kamla trying to save her marrige, making her realise with motherly talk. N evn kalpi taking her decision for her daughter n she making undstnd it to kamla. Amazing mother daughter bond.it bring tears in my eyes

Raghav heard all mother daughter convo n accepted his defeat widout trying shame on u raghav. Bt vithal made him realise wat he need to do aftrall hw cn father see her own daughters hme breaking.
N it work he undstnd wat he need to do.
Superb, marvelous update vishu🤗

P.S. Strickly take care.


Thanks Sho... U deserve more than one update dedicated to u as u have always been around to read the FFs and motivate me... not matter what the story is. This was my writing ka keeda and dissatisfaction with cvs that made us the friend we are today n thanks for it. Btw where r u?? We are not getting in touch very often now. Busy somewhere???

Chill about Rags baby... The guys is shattered on realizing that such a pathetic father and husband he is and it is normal for anyone to accept defeat in such situation... He needed the encouragement which Vitthal gave him... Look at things from his pov.. He is still alone while Kalpi has her parents, daughter, mother in law and friend with her.

I am taking extra care in this winter so do not worry!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Hi Vishesha,

Are u not from Delhi basically???????????????//.
The weather must be cold nowadays.Eat warm and bit fatty stuffs for this weather,wear woollen
attires and take plenty of beauty sleep.
Pls don't wake till midnight for posting the updates.You are more more imp to us rather than the updates.
AS FAR THIS UPDATE IS CONCERNED,IT WAS TOO TOO EMOTIONAL.
It had brought tears on my eyes.
I could visualise the poor kid's emotional turmoil and the medical condition more ,and much more
than the hurt and the pain given by Raghav to Kalpi.
Hope Kalpi gives a second chance to their relationship just for the sake of Ria as a Mother
and not as a wife.


vishesha... Well it feels good to hear my name after such a long time coz here in Delhi everyone either calls me Vish or Sweety(that's my nickname) 🤗

No... i am not from Delhi and that's why it's still hard for me to not fall sick in Delhi's weather... I am from MP... To be precise from a district called Jhabua... u must have heard about Adivasi's... Well I belong to that district... Jhinga la la la hu hu... Jhinga lala hu!!😆

Fatty stuffs?? babes... I do not want to cross a century... M already fat n my finacee wants me to reduce weight for our marriage😆 So I am trying to eat healthy food and thanks for concern.. It feels great to find such sweet person who cares about u. Thank u.

Rags need to prove himself as a good father... Only after that Kalpi will give him a second chance.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank u dear.

Originally posted by: Shivanie05

finally update but still no Ragna moments why it's taking so long for Ragna to be together


Thank u... There will be a RagNa moment soon for sure but only in flashback... Rags needs to rectify his mistakes first and it's not easy for Kalpi to forgive him. The story is about Raghav realizing his mistakes and making him worthy enough for his family so the reunion will take time.

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Truly truly exceptional update.

Atleast in this Ff,Vithal is not Kamla's kathputhli.After finding out the truth indirectly from
Raghav ,he could analyse its impact on Kalpi's and on the poor kid's life.
That was not a mere slap but a highly realising one for Maya.Whatever may be the circumstances
and the situations,one should always protect their dignity and self respect.
And without slapping,Maya had made to taste Kamla her own medicine,She had made Kamla
to realise ,how she had ignored Kalpi right from her childhood on the pretext of her complexion.
BUT I HAD REALLY LIKED THE WAY,YOU HAVE WRITTEN:
AFTER KNOWING THE TRUTH ,MAYA HAD LEFT HER PARENT'S HOUSE AS A WAY
OF DOING PRAYACHIT AND VITHAL AND KAMLA IMMEDIATELY WENT TO CONSOLE
AND SUPPORT KALPI.WE ARE ALL HUMAN BEINGS .CREATED BY GOD AND NOT GOD.HENCE BOUND TO COMMIT MISTAKES .BUT AFTER REALISING IT,ONE SHOULD KNOW HOW TO RECTIFY IT AND THE OTHER SHOULD KNOW HOW TO FORGIVE.
Though Kalpi had forgiven her parents at this moment,She is afraid,for her daughter.She
doesn't want her angel to go through the same phase.Being under the same roof,she doesn't
Ria to yearn and long for Raghav's love anymore.
KALPI MIGHT GIVE RAGHAV A SECOND CHANCE FOR THE SAKE OF RIA.
It is in Raghav's hands ,how to make the love revisit in both the lives of Ria and Kalpi.
ALSO IT IS IN THE MASTERMIND OF VISH HOW TO BRING THE EMOTIONS OF RAGHAV
INTERESTINGLY THROUGH HER NEXT UPDATE.
DEAR, YOU ARE A ⭐️ AND YOU DESERVE 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Thank u so much dear... M flattered and do not know what to say more... It makes me so happy to know that my readers are liking the story and getting involved with it.😊

N u deserve a big hug for being an awesome reader...🤗


Originally posted by: charvi3

Lovely update dear

Kamla had realised her mistake & apology to kalpi also.
Both the update r too amazing dear
Let see what will raghav do to win kalpi heart...
Pleaseee update next part sooonnn


Thank u dear... M glad u like it. Raghav will try a different method to bring Kalpi closer... Hope u will like it.,

I will try to update in a day or two

Originally posted by: abxetz

Great update 👏 its very good that vittal or kamla supports kalpi.Maya ko na ek slap ki kami thi par dho dho milana 😆 I am happy. And waiting for next update ki raghav kya karnai wala hair hamari angel ko mananaikeliye 😊 par itni asanisai maafi math dena. 😛 by vish


Thank u dear... Maya deserves the slap just like the way Rags deserves the pain. I will try to update soon. N I assure u that he will have to bellofy lots of papad.


Originally posted by: eishe10

Brilliant updates!!!


Than u dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niru04

Amazing update.dnt want Kalpi forgive ragav easily.update soon


Thank u ... Kalpi won't forgive him so easily... It takes time to gain trust specially after breaking it once.


Originally posted by: lolor

I love ur surprise.. back to back 2nd update...
& what??? I was shocked...u bring tears in my eyes & that too because of kamala... 😲 😲 😲
I really love vitthal in this chap...I hv never thought in my life that I m gonna like kamlas char...but in this chap...both wr good...not only they realized but accepted & corrected their mistake... 👏
love kalpis convo with her parents...
& best thing is that vitthal don't want to forgive rags but want kalpi to forgive him for her happiness...
& hope now raghav really makes efforts to rectify his mistake...
again I m saying I don't want kalpi to forgive raghav easily...maybe she me rethink about divorce for the sake of Ria...but I want raghav to feel kalpis pain...right now hes only feeling guilty...
waiting for update...that to soon...pls pls pls pls pls pls pls ...


Thank u dear...

To be true, I was unsure whether people will like me forgiving Kamla or not but I am glad u all r liking it as I do not want to show her completely negative... A mother can be rude to child but a mother can't ignore his child in his pain and that's why I made Kamla realize her mistakes...

Vitthal is a father and I think no father can forgive the man who hurt his daughter to such an extent... May be he will forgive Rags after seeing smile on Kalpi's face coz of him.

I am not planning divorce but something else... may be a little separation. Raghav will feel Kalpi's pain too but before that he needs to learn about trusting women.



Thank u

Originally posted by: diti96

Nyc update

Love will revisit in ragna lives
Gr88 story
Plz pm me the further update


Thank u dear... I will pm u for sure... I guess u r in my buddy list too.😊

Originally posted by: ovee

Finally kamala realised her mistake. Pls pm me dear. Update soon.


Will try to update soon n dnt worry about pms... u r in my buddy list so I will disturb u very often.,

Originally posted by: sampa79

Fabulous double update


Thank u dear

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Nice update... Kamla realized her mistake... Waiting to see what Raghav does to rectify his mistake...


Thank u...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Superb update Vish, the love has started actually revisiting. First in the FB memTories of Raghav then glimpses b/w raghav nd Riya, and finally the reunion of father, mother and daughter. You showed so many revelations today, FB of RAGNA moments, two father nd daughter relationships where both the fathers realizing their mistakes vow and stand by their daughters and also a traditionally conditioned mother finally realized her folleys breaking all the barriers just became support system for her daughter.

Vish please resurrect Maya's character too. I know many or no one may agree with my POV but if Raghav, Vitthal, Kamla all can be forgiven then why not Gauri and Maya? afterall Maya too loves Kalpi and till now you hv not portrayed her to be intending to be a home wrecker of her sister, infact she did try to instill sense in Raghav. Logicalmly too if ONS of Raghav can be forgiven then why not Maya?just because she was not drunk and Raghav was drunk, even she was emotionally in weak state.
If love has to be revisited all of them should move on by forgiving each other.
Sorry if I hv offended u.


Thank u dear... M glad u liked it. I just tried to show as many relationships as I can in this part as I feel everyone is suffering in some or other way and they need to mend their ways...

No need to say sorry... U have not offended me at all n u r readers so u have full rights to give ur suggestions, criticize my updates and give honest feedbacks...

I do not know whether u noticed or not but I have kept mum abt Maya and her punishment till now coz I know many people think that she is more responsible for the mess as she was not drunk but for me both are equally wrong and if one deserves forgiveness than other too deserves it though the relationship won't be same as some awkwardness will be there always... I do not think that Raghav was drunk so he is less guilty as he was in his senses and had purposely slept with Maya while Maya was week coz of her loneliness and her mind stopped working on seeing sudden closeness with Raghav.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81


Nice update. Finally Kalpi got back her parents and their love, Raghav realised his mistake waiting to see what step he takes to rectifies his mistake will he able to gain Kalpi's trust and love back. Waiting ur next update.


Thank u dear... I will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Too good vish update soon dear...


Thank u.. Will try to update in a day or two.

Originally posted by: pyardil

Nice update I read all chapy is awesome its heart touching waiting for next update


Thank u... M glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I admired Kalpi and her strength. She is one strong woman
She went through hell and back but still strong for her daughter
This Maya is freaking disgusting. I hate her sooo damn much
But it was nice that she told kamla off. She deserved to hear the truth
Kalpi as usual the kindess person ever so easily forgive her parents especially kamla
I don't know if I could do that :)
Outstanding update


Thank u dear.. m glad u liked it. I like strong woman and that's why tried to prove Kalpi stronger in this FF but still Kalpi is a himan and she needs support too and that's why she forgave Kamla..

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

nice update di... Finaly kamla said SORRY... I don't kno di bt i thnk i can't 4gv rags... Bt still i luv dis story... I cry di jab bhi update prdhti hun... Nd maya shameless... She said dat it was only 1NS gosh... Wo bhi apne aayi baba k samne... Plzzz update nxt prt


Thanks Somi... I know u can't 4give Rags but give him some time.. M sure u will forgive him on seeing his efforts... Maya was not shameless baby... but she was too guilty and was just angry for hiding that... When someone's guilt crosses the limit he tries to find the ways to come out of it and that's why Maya was using a facade of anger.

Do not cry baby... It's reality and we need to be strong in our life as anyone can face such problems though I hope no one has to.
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Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Fab update Vish! Simply awesome !!!!!

It's realisation time for Raghav. He's reminiscing how he had turned from a loving hubby and an anxious father to a self centered businessman. It's true he's successful but at the cost of his ruined family life.

He's surprised seeing the decors changed in his daughter's room, see that she sketches well and he didn't even know about it. Feeling guilty that Riya has pictured him as someone who's always absorbed in his files and not spending time with her. It was a shock for him to hear Riya talking about divorce. He couldn't say anything when she said though she wants both parents if she has to choose one, it will be her mom. He knows he has lost all rights to tell her otherwise.

Meanwhile another father is also treading the same path thinking about not being there when his daughter needed him the most. Seeing Maya makes Vithal more angry and he slaps her for she was responsible for her sister's divorce. Finally Kamala realised her folly too. Till now she had not shown her love to Kalpi and always belittled her in front of Maya but now she repents her mistake.

It was lovely to see her parents soothing Kalpi, hugging her, asking her for forgiveness. It was lovely to see how she finds comfort in her mother's lap. It's true that the peace and happiness you find on our mother's lap cannot be found anywhere else, no matter how old you are. ...

Raghav watching Kalpi with her parents. Vithal stopping him when he decides to leave quietly, asking him to work on their relationship. Raghav has now understood what he needs to do... He needs to prove himself to be a loving hubby once again and gain her trust. Also needs to spend time with Riya and be a doting father she always desired. That's his penance...

I'm loving this story more and more and it will always hold a special place in my life... Love you too Vish! Here it goes. ...🤗

🤗 To my best reader... U know what.. u r super awesome. I always love the way u understand my updates in the right way and direction... My motto of showing Raghav-Ria convo was to prove that Rags lost his rights to keep Ria with him and u got it perfectly.

I agree... A mother's warm hug can take away all ur tensions and I guess her lap is the best place to sleep peacefully... Aww... I am missing my mother so much... I wanna fly and go to my home but this bloody commitments... 😡

This story is special to me as well... Though i do not know the reason and being writer I should love all my creations equally but it holds a special place in my heart.😊

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