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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally most awaited update! Superb way of showing by three different angles. So Raghav was a jerk and emotional, angry fool! maybe victim of his past, childhood memories. Don't know what to say, maybe he does deserve even more punishment! or his guilt has made up for it, really confused!!He got to know the complete truth about Riya's birthday party that she was in hospital. It may add up more to his guilt. Really don't like Maya, even though it was a mistake, a mistake out of her loneliness. Loneliness leads to many stupidities I know! but this one was unpardonable. Maybe here Maya's mistake is bigger than Raghav's because she wasn't drunk and she wasn't angry. She was lonely yes, but loneliness cannot be an excuse to hurt your own sister. Maybe Maya craved for some human intimacy, emotional or physical; but still she was fully aware of what she was doing.Good Raghav also got to know about Prem, at least he will think again the next time before doubting Kalpi now.

New thing you showed in flashback, Pakhi and Gauri like Kalpi and care for her. I am still kind of angry on Raghav, LOL and upset with this ONS. Forgive me, but you know I will always be with you. Thanks to you for taking my small suggestion so seriously and giving me credit. You're always a sweetheart and I really love, admire you for the person and writer you are. Hope my suggestion is of any use to you, then I will be happier. You make this story so much more better by your unique writing style and vision. Waiting for next update, but before that take rest and a short break!

Muah, Love. 🤗 ❤️
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 😭
unres

it was really emotional update yar😭
Raghav is such a jerk.. 😡 just becoz he has sm doubt abt his wife he slept with his wife's sister..🤢
n maya ... hw could she do it wid her own sister.. raghav n maya both r equally responsible 4 dis mess.. may be maya was little bit more becoz raghav was nt in his sense 😡 both need big punishment 😡

but awesome update vish 👏
nw very eager 2 know wat raghav wil do 2 get back his wife in his life again
update soon 😊

Edited by sweet_aditi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh oh sorry to hear that! Hope you feel better soon!!
What an emotional and revealing update!! I knew maya had something to do with it!! So, out of jealousy and also from what he felt that his mom did he reacted on that!! I know hurt can cause someone to do many things spur of the moment! I don't blame him!! But also, Maya knew he was drunk and vulnerable and she took advantage of the situation and she wanted to support kalpi after?! Maya was very much aware of what she was doing and also knowing the truth she still allowed herself to be taken by Raghav!! She knew how he felt and yet she went along with it to fulfill her desires!! I hold Maya responsible because of she didn't go to Raghav mone of that wouldn't have happened!! She used him to get what she wanted!! She took advantage of him, of the situation!! And now he gets to realize that kalpi wanted to get into contact with him becasue of Ria!! And he avoided her calls!! Becasue he was hurt!! He had no idea that kalpi and Ria needed him that night!! It's sad really sad how things happened! At least he found out the truth from Paaki about how his wide really feels about him! Now he has to make some changes in his life! The first being his mom!! He needs to understand how she felt and why she did what she did!! And also apologize to her!! And also put himself in hers and Kalpi's position! Only then he can understand what they pass through all these years and how they felt! And also not to think of women as a piece of rag!! To use and discard off!! Something's must be experienced to feel others pain, hurt and grieve!! Hope it all works out for the best!
Vish this is amazing! I just love this ff of yours! You are a remarkable person!! Hats off to you!
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Most awaited and very emotional update.I feel like killing Maya.She took advantage of the situation.She knew Raghav was upset and drunk.Still slept with him...Even if Kalpi forgives Raghav,I don't want her to forgive Maya😡.Poor Kalpi😭.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm Wow Vish! This was not an easy update for you I know that!
And you dedicated it to meee????😭😳

I am all emotional! I am happy I could come of some help to you to write this update!

Oh People will now empathise with Raghav and curse Maya!

I would say they both were wrong! Just by seeing your wife dance with someone if you can go out of control like this? Get drunk and then go and sleep with ur wife's sister! Getting drunk is no excuse! I am more disgusted with Raghav because he had hated his mom for cheating his dad and he himself did the same thing!!!

As the owner of such big industry his behaviour in terms of personal life was too immature! He could have just walked upto her and taken her from Sammy and danced with her! After all she was dancing publicly and not in her bedroom!!! Duh!

Just having a big fat ego does not help! And MAya!!!! wow! She has proved that she is the epitome of sisterhood. You know you share things and clothes with your sisters when you are children and Maya thinks she could borrow her sisters husband too for a night!

I completely understand her physical needs but being a responsible adult she should have thought it could create complexities. She should have just slapped Raghav and yelled on his face to stop being a drama queen and go and talk out his problems with Kalpi and be a man.

He has been a terrible father too! Not once he thought of Riya in all this! It was all about him and his big fat ego!!!

Now they both want to rectify their mistakes! Poor Kalpi what a sight to see! And yet she did not even slap Raghav!!! or Maya for that matter. which shows how heartbroken she was!

Hmmm now he wants to become friendly to his own daughter and gets to know now that she was admitted?
C'mon Raghav pull up your socks and prove it if you really want to make a difference or if you really repent!
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Posted: 10 years ago
plez cntinue..dont make me wait so long..luv ur story very much😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
thnx 4 update di...i just hate rags nd maya..how can dey... 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hate rag maya itni badi mistake ke baad bhi present me unke relation mei koi change nahi hai aajbhi maya rag ki paties media sab handle karti hai koi ehsaas nahi ki kalpi ko kaisa feel hota hoga agar kalpi dono ka na dekhti aur divourse na file karti to dono ko koi guilt nahi maya aur rag ne prove kar diya
"Raat gayi aur baat gayi"

Hate them
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Posted: 10 years ago
Painful update.i want kill ragav:@
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Posted: 10 years ago
Reswa😛
Unres..

You left me with no words.. This might sound weird but Raghav can be forgiven.. If the situation is seen in his perspective then what he did ( though it was terribly wrong ) is what any other man would've done..

Anything which a child sees or hears becomes the reality of their life and here Raghav too had a same situation.. As a child he saw that his parents weren't close to each other, his mother cheated on his father and finally left him.. The only truth he knows is that Gauri's cheating led to his father's death..

And when he saw Kalpi with Sammy the happiness on her face made him think that she is attracted to Sammy and his big fat male ego made him follow an eye for an eye rule...

I just can't stop saying this but everything you show in this story is so realistic.. Way too realistic.. Each emotion .. Each reaction everything..

Its really so .. Can't describe it in one word..

Kalpi has already done so much for Raghav and in turn all she is getting is sorrow..

Raghav.. He loves kalpi and ria a lot and wants them to get best of everything in their life but in all this forgot to give them the most important thing that is time...

Maya.. Her one moment of weakness has made her feel guilty for life..

Everyone is at mistake and everyone is suffering... Everyone bcos even Kalpi (though she is right ) didn't even bother to tell Raghav her feelings the hurt she felt... She forgot that when problems arise in a relationship one should cut away the problems not the relation.. So in a way she too is at fault..

May sound i myself am contradicting my statements but your story felt me feel all that i've typed above..

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!! You're brilliant di!!!

P.S You owe me a big box of tissues ..As u finished the update soon I didn't cry but was about to .. seeing Ria suffering in all this.. but I'll not take any chances coz till now there has been only two updates when i didn't cry.

And ya i don't really know what i typed in as my comment I just kept writing what came to my mind..

P.P.S Read the note.. Take care and don't stress so much ki update ke chakkar nein u ruin your health..😊
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago

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