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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

The lullaby was nice... Had read poems in ffs but lullaby.. Hmm that's new and nice...

The word helpless (majboor) associated with kamla is just perfect 😆 Great update..

Continue soon ...

P.S pls don't mind if i do not comment sometimes.. Actually today i'm tired so no study.. So here's a comment...😉

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

wow ritu its awesoem dear...

rags saving kalpi and rags lost in kalpi's innocent face..

manda and her taunts..grrr

lovely one dear..

continue soon..

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Lovely update hmm I thought rag will be playing wiz kalpi but its an emotional update waiting for more

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

beautifully written, Neetu is so selfish, Raghav is very silent

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Awesome lullaby Ritu! Your own creation, wow! Perfect for our angel. Loved it. Nice update too. Raghav lost in Kalpi 's innocence. Can't take his eyes off her. Loved how he asked Kamala to be careful for Kalpi. Neetu and her never ending kitty parties...lol. Manda is so irritating. I wish Pakya didn't miss his aim. For whatever reason Kamala and Pakhi have started becoming close and she is ignoring Kalpi though unintentionally. Loved how Vithal bought milk in a feeding bottle and gave to Kalpi. Vithal is such a caring father. But still feeling bad for poor Kalpi.

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SUGANDHII

@suggii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Res 😉

Unres😊

Lovely update ritu👏

Really kalpi's actual struggle begins now...🤢

Poor girl~kamla carelessness😡 dumbla...

But loved d convo b/w kamla n raghav how she assure him when he tell her to be careful nxt tym😃

But vry nxt scene jug she again😡

But I think raghav will help somewhere to make her realize she should be more careful towards kalpi😳 I don't know y I think so..

Loved d way raghav keep looking at kalpi... ahh may be it's her innocence or charm😆 but gud one...

Neetu n her kitty parties😕

But feeling really bad 4 kalpi... now she'll not going with kamla in kapur house😭

N finally kamla saw paakhi baby😊 Actually I lyk this scene too

But I know this is a indication to kalpi😭

Lovely Lullaby... ur creation is always nyc no doubt on that👏👏

Manda😡😡😡 hate her dialogue 😡 n lyk d way vithal n pakya deal with her😆 specially pakya🤣

Nyc update Ritu👏

Edited by sugandhii - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Really good. Loved lullabye and hate Kamla.

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Aru18
amazing update..like it...plz update next part soon

Thank u aruhi

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

Beautifully written update.

When we are reading ur updates,we are actually rewinding the memories of the old episodes of EMA.

And from are u actually planning to give a leap to this story.I mean ,when will Ragna meet??/
Will Raghav be a real Khadoos one in ur FF too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

And will Kalpi be a equally smarter one to Raghav?????????????????

thank u ..

glad u like it..this story base is similar to ema but u can see urself that this story is having different touch of mine..if u felt..

nd about ur questions .nu have to wait for ur answers but i can give a.guarantee that it will be completely going to be different as adult ragna..

nd yes leap of ten years is gonna be in chapter 8..

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: niru04
wonderful update ritu.vittal is best father.i cant tolerate dumla nd pooki.our angel suffered bcoz of them.ragav's concern for kalpi is nice.update soon dnt delay plz

Thank u niru

glad u like raghav concern..

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