Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07 - Page 72

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res...Charu I'll comment in the morning,I have almost finished reading😃
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Hi Charupie 😳

This is indeed a long ChapterBut I'm going to Enjoy Reading it

Sapna made sure Kalpi was in deep sleep was in she Planning???Ohh this sapna is so cute and sneaky

It's amazing seeing Kalpi shopping and Happy,and after all she's a celebrity and she has fans,it's sweet she's taking out Pics and sighing autographs,Also she's Keeping Raghav out of her thoughts.

Now Raghav's back in her thoughts as Kunal his friend Appeared,She introduced them and their went to a CAF,Raghav's name is following her now...RagNa Chem is sizzing and Hot .

Kunal is telling Kalpi all of Rags secrets,Wow Raghav is some type of awesomness He did all that,He helped her and cared for her,Rags is amazing but Still dumb Leaving our Princess dumbstrucked and Teary-eyed,And Raghab doesn't want Kalpi to know he cares?? He kept this all this while! Wow Kunal looks Legit and It's nice of Him to Apologize and Confess it all to Kalpi That's a nice scene Charu,beauitfully written

Raghav is waiting for his Kalpi...He doesn't know why?? Seriously?? This guy ,But It's nice that's the only thing he wants "Kalpi" He's regreting and Kalpi has becomed his reason for living,His Day & Night,He wants to see trust in her eyes for him...Amazing

And Our Princess Made her entrance Catching the Prince's Eyes Haaayeee Tha little scene you wrote was so amazing Sapna gave her a reviling dress also Kalpi knows Rags will leave no chance to Touch her Any girl would feel like that wearing such dress infront of the Man who stole your heart she's wondering if he touches her she'll be gone...she will OMG their eyes met Ohh tum hi ho ab tum hi ho That song has the atmosphere all romantic and Hottt
Wow Kalpi sound beauitful ahahah Poor Rags I know he aint going to keep his hands off Oh My Raghav is lost in her beauty and Kalpi is just a Nerovus Wreck

Kalpi is keeping her distance and she's doing interview and all,Raghav isn't going to leav that Poor soul alone tonight...Hoping we get a Hot Romantic scene

Their dancing and their gazes aren't leaving each other,Ohhh Love the eye convo and then Raghav lets it out he had to make a move Oh Kalpi is nevrous and then he ask DO YOU(DO YOU LOVE ME) I think have fallen for each other Ya...I wished he had a reporter like that In Our RagNa days we all would've died seein Ashu and Rach Like that

So the reporter wants To see RagNa's Chem...awww Kalpi is nervous Raghav is always smirking or teasing kalpi ahhahah RagNa's fights are always cute

You would find this werid but I never heard this song before😆😆

Kalpi's gonna lose tonight to Rags,her heart is done beating faster than anything ahaha lovely Roses😆😳 How much closer is he going to pull her she might end up inside him 😳😆 the cutest part Raghav put the rose in his jacket😆😳

Ya...is he seriously trying to romancie her in public like that😆😳 Lucky Kalpi This guy could touch😳 She walks away and then get pulled back into his arms and again the touching contuinues😳😳

Ohh such a lovely dance scene 😳 and he's still touching finally both decided to get some space,Kalpi went out to the Backyard but wait who's holding her hand???

RAGHAV!!! He pulls her to the tree then touches her and Kisses her 😳😳 iSN'T HE bold That he thinks of her and she thinks of him😆😆 and he kisses her saying that too😳😳 he rubs the Noses,He kissed her again and he is again touching her back,and she feel peace,You know those two might as well make love by the Tree😆

😲😲 My reastion seeing them in that mood,the dude is seriously kissing her like that😲 hmmm I think Kalpi goes GaGa over his touches😆🤪

She happily hugges him as he too hugs her back and then she realises and jerks back,Kalpi ran away from Raghav with her confuison like head

Ohhh So sweet the End "Sorry😒" so sweet


Charupie such an amazing Romantic Update👏👏 got me all shy and stuff☺️ Sprry for the late reply babes😭,I loved the whole Party and this Raghav though half Of me will always hate Raghav Singhaina for being stupid!!😡 but the other half is true love❤️

It's such a beauitful update and I loved it all,I do miss your writing are you still busy?? You're MIA these days anyway this chappy was beauitfully wriiten and Your Writing always Inspires me!! Love you Charupie🤗😳 and I promised I gave you a long Comment,Sorry for the little one before😭 I like writing long comments 😆😆 I'm werid😆😆


Edited by ariarai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu darling 🤗 fantastic update.2 romantic song ke saath Ragnar ki romantic dance 😛 poor rags kalpi ki kithni kayal raktha dha colledge sai lekhar ab tak 😊 or akhon akhon ke bathe how romantic 😳 poor singhania sexy kalpi ko dekhkar iss bar bi control ka banda 😆 😆 partake ki thara tut gaya 😉 ab ye kalpi apnai ego ko bagakar rags ko I love you kab kahega 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a wonderful update charu. Love the song " janaam dekh lo ". Both of them are not accepting there feelings. Dumbo stubborn heads 😆.please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Thanks for a lovely update. Please give us one more update. Being selfish ... I know
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

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what a fabulous update chahat. Mindblowing..ohk consider me at place of director roy nd urself at place of kalpi...now imagine i m telling u the same line which was roy telling to kalpi after their commercial shoot.( i can't say more than this chahat👏)

i read part 13 to 16 In one go...
wow, raghav one day at kalpi's house..superb. It was seeming like the day was stand still nd they were reliving their moments that they shared eight years back. Raghav indirect teasing to kalpi, nd when raghav was zipping sapna's dress..kalpi again took it in wrong way nd raghav saw this..he told her that it was not like that what she has presumed to be, through his gesture..he was hurt at that moment that why she always presume wrong about him. nd he let out his frustration of years in the form of his complains in the bathroom during their proximity nd kalpi was a silent listener to his complains.
she was feeling jealous of sapna at every second which she had spent with raghav at her home nd her jealousness came out when raghav spilled shower water on her. In short, they both complained to each other during their proximity to each other forgetting about world keeping in mind only themselves.

raghav made promise to her to avoid their physical closeness for some days as he don't want her carrier afftected by his actions coz it was his promise that if someday she would b successful,it will be coz of him only. He don't want to break his promise Neither he wants her falldown. Kalpi was surprised with his decision or say somewhere she didn't want that.
still he wants his effect on her Nd thus his morning kisses will be continue as regular. Nd here he sealed his promise with kiss.


this is raghav singhania..who finds every different way possible to kept his promise with certain exceptions. He find his new was to wish her morning through white rose.
gauri nd kalpi convo was heart touching. They both missed each other nd unable to to something for them. Gauri coz of her son nd kalpi coz of her perception that had happened to her in the theater.
raghav was enjoying this moment coz he was also missing it.

nd the commercial adv shoot..hats off to u chahat.
kalpi's jealousy finally took over her mind...sammy enjoying the moment seen kalpi jealousy...😆
omg, kalpi dialogue "all mine"...its true side of kalpi nd raghav was happy to see this kalpi coz he always wanted to see this side of kalpi..coz he loves her...

it was my previous comment...I think unknowingly u missed it...😆..but i m little selfish for ur reply...😳 so thought to put this comment here..so that u can read it.,i know this comment was for last to last update but i want u to read it once...if u won't reply also then its also fine...u read it is enough for me..😃


now coming to part 17(b):
Fabulous update...
sapna was sharing everything about kalpi's misunderstand with someone else..she only wants kalpi's happiness. She wants to see her best friend happy in her life not that barricaded kalpi from raghav.
kalpi meeting with her school mate after long years nd his revelation about raghav's hidden personality nd caring side was shocking for kalpi nd for me also..i have never thought that raghav could go to this extent to protect kalpi with those stupid boys nd even from his own friends..he was with her like her shadow all the time...
it was obvious for kalpi to get emotional after listening the truth from a eye witness of their fights..

tum hi ho..again rocked the update...raghav's eyes were glued only to kalpi nd kalpi's blushing from raghav's gaze was awesome.

no doubt chahat that u can be a good choreographer...the dance steps u explained during song main yaha hoon...was superb. I could visualize every step of the dance...brilliant work chahat.

and then at last..ragna kiss...Was moon in the sky...
nd raghav one word text to kalpi was superb...

SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT.
Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii charu so its again m n my late cmmnt😉 😆...ab to tujhe aadat hogayi hogi na mere late cmnnt ki😛


For all three updates it have only one word wow wow n simply wow...loved dem b it romantic scene wit flower, ad shoot, realisation part n party scene n ragna dance...simply amazing 👏


part 16- Hmmm Kalpi was waiting 4 raghav n his morning kisses😉 n dis naughty raghav ek mouka nahi chodta hai 😛...m loving dis raghav more n more
Wow...love how raghav using white rose to romance with Kalpi...loved d way u described d scene...him touching her w/o brking his promise n dat almost kiss was super duper romantic n sensual😳😳...do I need to tell u my romance Queen d scene was simply awesome n loved how u always cum up with so sensual yet pure romantic scene...love u for dat muaaahhh🤗
Loved gauri n kalpi convo...was heart touching
Oh d commercial ad shoot was super se upar...hats off to u sweetie...scene descpription, kalpi's jealousy wen othr girls were drooling n sammy enjoying watching her reaction, sapna's oversensual performance😉 n last but not d least kalpi changing lines of script n her claimimg raghav is her n n dos mindblowing kisses,unknowingly pouring her real feelings in dat scene n her embrassment on coming back to reality was beautifully written ...iss kalpi ko dekhkar raghav kya but we were also shocked😛

Edited by rani214 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res for part 17...have read d update will cmmnt 2mrw😛
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Beautiful beautiful beautiful update👏👏👏
Part 17(1)- Omg finally both of them have realized their love...Can't wait for them to admit it to one another 😳😃
Raghav was under the impact of kiss lik a lovestruck teenager😉...haaye him reminiscing d moment unknowingly grinning n was lost in d moment dat he forgot Sammy was sitting n observing him n was rofling observing him😆😆...always love how u portray Sammy's character in ur ff

raghav ke love guru ne iss topic pe to PhD ki hai😉...warna pata nahi raghav ko kitne aur saal lagte apna pyaar realise karne me n kab hume unka confession milta😛😆

Loved raghav's emotion wen he realised his true feelings for kalpi after Sammy's speech ...she has bcam his addiction n was thinking abt her all d time n his heart was at peace wen he saw her again after eight long years... he finally realised it was not only coz of his anger n promise he made but his love for her😃

Also finally kalpi shared her past wit sapna n loved how sapna made her realise her mistake using reverse psycology by bad mouting abt raghav...oh how i loved her line "You don't love Raghav, neither do you like him."😉 ...finally after internal debate she realised dat he always kept his promise n always took care of her...she admittind her liking was lovely but still poor soul could not forget theathre incident n again her mind win over her heart😔...hope dey talk abt it n her mu gets cleared soon

17(2)- Sapna is so cute...she is planning wit sammy to make ragna confess der feelings😳

Like dat kalpi went shopping to cleat her thoughts n was happy getting all attention n was able to distract herself frm raghav's thoughts but fate again played a role n kunal his best frnd shared his secret

Wow m loving dis raghav more n more😳...he helped her cared for her n protect her against other jerks in school n don't want her to know abt it but like dat kunal shared it n also apologized for his behavior too ... kalpi was overwhelmed wit emotions aft revealation ...d scene was superb

Oh raghav w8ng impatiently for Kalpi n my my he is completely mesmerised by her beauty n der gaze never leaving eachothr's ...Kalpi was looking stunning n our lover boy could not keep her out of his sight😉😳
Kalpi trying to keep distance from raghav but neither raghav nor media helping as media wanted ragna to give a dance performance😉😛

Ragna eye talk was amazing😳😳...loved hot sizzling ragna dance☺️...song was lovely ...charu d scene was beautifully written....always love d way u portray each n every emotion

Der closeness der intimacy was affecting both n dey parted away...she ran away to keep her emotions control but but dis man could not put his hands off her😆
he kissed her all over...she was completely under his spell n was lost in his kisses n touches n she hugs him happily😳 but den den she jerks him away after realization hit her😔

Raghav texting her sorry for brking his promise was sweet😳Dis girl is so stubborn...hope Sammy n sapna cum up wit sum plan soon n both stubborn ragna confess der love 😉😳

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️lots of kisses n hugs sweetie ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by rani214 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for your update. P:
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charuuu update naaa😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for ragna family dinner. Waiting for Ragna romance at rags home. Pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon.

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