Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07 - Page 59

This is an awesome update Charu... Though I read it 2 days back but due to slow net speed n another reason I am commenting today. I liked the way Rags voiced his anger towards Kalpi for not trusting him. I wish she ponders over those words n realizes that she might be wrong... i always love the way u write those romantic scenes... Ur writing is strong enough to make me blush. (I feel I am the most unromantic person on earth.)

I wanted to write so many things that day.. but I forgot. So sorry!! I promise next time I will give feedback properly.

How will Kalpi control her body and soul specially from rag's morning greetings???