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yadanu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read all parts, interesting ff
please continue
Edited by yadanu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Kalpi want to stay away from Raghav lol
Like that's possible lol, she should know by now that the heart always win ;)
I like that Raghav notice her silent. Poor guy thing Kalpi is still upset about yesterday incident
Raghav asking Kalpi to have lunch with him or I should say "them" was awesome lol
Aww Kalpi declining Raghav invitation at last moment was awful
He was sad but I like that she at least saw his disappointment
Omg! Raghav saw Kalpi and Prem together with their overlapping hands lol
Poor guy has another low blow to deal with like one was not enough lol
Superb update, I'm loving this ff


Super happy to know that you loving it.. thanks a lot for full of lol detailed comment😉😛😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yadanu

I read all parts, interesting ff

please continue


Thanks a lot.. surely will...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry dear but very few chances of giving update before next Sunday but if I get another ragna attack then may be I'll update it soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved chotusa ragna moment 😉
Poor raghav Kalpi avoiding him ...kab tak avoid karogi he will b around u always😃
Raghav's jealousy is always fun to read
Loved prem n kalpi planning b'day surprise
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Awesome update

Loved chotusa ragna moment 😉
Poor raghav Kalpi avoiding him ...kab tak avoid karogi he will b around u always😃
Raghav's jealousy is always fun to read
Loved prem n kalpi planning b'day surprise
Cont soon


He'll always be around😉 Glad u liked the update..
Surely will continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Arpita,
Nice updates. Read the last few chapters at one go. loved them.
I like kalpi's and Rags confusion about their feelings.
Plz put some situations which make for some mushy romantic conflicts between them.
Let the truth about Rags statement being trampled by the Kapoors remain under covers.
buildup the feelings and keep them on toes but also put some romantic scenes between them. Let Gauri act as the cupid it could be cute. I always wanted that in the serial. 😊

When Kalpi will totally crush Rags heart she will get to know the truth.. that could be a great climax for this revenge story. 😉
Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Hi Arpita,

Nice updates. Read the last few chapters at one go. loved them.
I like kalpi's and Rags confusion about their feelings.
Plz put some situations which make for some mushy romantic conflicts between them.
Let the truth about Rags statement being trampled by the Kapoors remain under covers.
buildup the feelings and keep them on toes but also put some romantic scenes between them. Let Gauri act as the cupid it could be cute. I always wanted that in the serial. 😊

When Kalpi will totally crush Rags heart she will get to know the truth.. that could be a great climax for this revenge story. 😉


Glad you liked them.. I'm planning all of that alongside the revenge plot...
Gauri playing cupid.. done👍🏼
Wow you already know the climax.. 😆 its similar but would have filmy touch..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Recap:

Raghav went to the table where Sammy was sitting and said that he's leaving and before Sammy could enquire about anything Raghav was already out of the restaurant...


Part 13:

Perplexed with Raghav's sudden departure Sammy too turned to leave but before that he had to cancel the order they placed... While searching for the waiter his gaze fell on Kalpi who was sitting with a guy whom he recognised to be Prem Kapoor (as he had done a lot of research on Kapoor family beforehand)..

"What is she doing here?? Raghav said that Kalpana won't be coming as she had some work.. Did Raghav leave because... No no .. Why would he care with whom she spends time with .. but he behaves differently with her .. he cares about her too.. he never did so but with her its different..", Sammy's trail of thoughts were not leading him to any conclusion...

On one side he thought that Raghav would never be affected by someone else's behaviour but then here the someone else was Kalpi.. probably the only person who gained Raghav Singhaania's trust without much efforts which Sammy himself couldn't... and now the only way he had was to get some expert.. rather experienced advice .. but before that some indirect way to find the reason..

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Not knowing where to exactly go Raghav was just driving around while clutching the steering wheel firmly thinking to himself, "Why should I bloody care with whom she has lunch or does whatever... I DON'T CARE.."... Stamping his foot on the brake he brought the car to a halt ... The volcano of anger was boiling inside him and to add to his frustration he couldn't find the reason to his rising temper...

Trying to cool himself down he hit the steering wheel and then slowly laid back on his seat... taking deep breathes he tried to calm himself down.. just then he received a call from Sammy... Raghav didn't want Sammy to know that he was upset and frustrated so in the best nonchalant normal voice which he could pretend to have he answered the call..

Raghav- Ha Sammy bol..

Sammy- You ok right ??

Raghav- Ya dude.. why are you asking that??

Sammy- You left so suddenly that's why...

Raghav- Actually I had some work..

Sammy- Work??

Raghav- (While pinching the tip of his nose) Umm.. I mean I've to meet Kamla bai.. remember..

Sammy- Yeah.. And ya Sahil kapoor just called me up stating that he would like to meet the CEO of RS construction in two days as by that time he would break the partnership and would be ready to invest in the new project...

Raghav- That's great news Sam.. (With an evil smirk) So tomorrow Mr.Kapoor would ask me to break the partnership and then our next step..

Sammy- Ya.. now he's totally trapped..

Raghav- Hmm.. (suddenly remebering something) oh I almost forgot .. mom has called you for dinner today ...

Sammy- Fine I'll be there..

Content that now he was nearing his goal Raghav hung up the phone.. Purposely ignoring the thoughts about Kalpi Raghav drove to Singhaania chawl to meet kamla...

Raghav though not very successfully was able to drive away Kalpi's thoughts but Kalpi's mind was continuosly being flooded with Raghav's thoughts..

Prem was constantly talking about the wedding celebrations and how he spent the last week etc. but Kalpi could only say ok on every statement and merely nod her head..

It wasn't that she was bored but Raghav's face that showed hurt when she rejected to have lunch with him and then when he saw prem placing his hand above hers was piercing her heart.. she felt bad.. she felt guilty for hurting Raghav.. and just wanted to talk to Raghav.. apologise for not coming with him and clarifying every doubt of his.. but alas.. she couldn't do anything of these as her so-called Intelligent brain came in and told her to be happy on hurting her enemy.. "yup.. enemy.. that's what he is..", she thought while trying to concentrate back on her conversation with Prem...

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Singhania chawl

Kamla was busy cleaning up her house... many years back , the house which used to be filled with loud talks and laughter was now a silent home with nothing except the memories of her oce upon a time happy family...

While caressing her family photo frame which had Vithal,Kamla, eight-year old Kalpi with her elder brother Pakya, Kamla thought," In my busy work I never gave time to my family and now they can't give time to me... I wish time could rewind and I could go back to my old happy family and cherish those few delightful moments... those moments which would never again be back in my life..", a tear rolled down her cheek and she quickly wiped it..

Suddenly felt someone touch her feet.. moving away the photo frame she saw a guy bent down to touch her feet asking for blessings .. she placed her hand on his head and said," Khush raho"...

Raghav got up and so did Kamla.. " Raghav baba.. you..here..??"...

Raghav- I came to say sorry ... I..

Kamla- No no Raghav baba.. why are you saying sorry..

Raghav- For ( he was about to tell her about the statement and all but kamla again interuppted)

Kamla- Whatever happened is past Raghav baba.. we should forget the past and move on in life.. (hitting her forehead while hiding her tears behind a huge smile) hey deva.. I didn't even ask you to sit.. please sit Raghav baba .. i'll get you some tea...

Before Raghav would deny Kamla went to the kitchen to make tea.. Kamla knew the reason behind Raghav's apology but unlike Kalpi and Pakya she had forgiven him and Mr.Kapoor... It took time but she finally forgave them thinking that if at all they deserved any punishment god would give it to them...

Raghav went to sit on the sofa and found the photo frame lying on the table.. his lips turned to give a genuine sweet smile as he saw his sweet little childhood friend... Memories of his first meet with her when he gave her his dad's last gift the abacus to her.. and then the pen he gifted ..rather awarded her for solving a maths problem ... that girl had something... something that could melt his heart and made him forget all his sorrows everytime she talked to him.. "and now another girl with same name does same things", Raghav's heart teased him..

"Where's Kalpana.. Kamla ma??", Raghav asked out of curiousity... Kamla was tongue-tied on this question as this was the last thing she expected and wanted to answer... she had promised pakya and kalpi that she won't let the secret be disclosed so after few minutes of pause she said," She stays in Delhi with her uncle and Pakya.. "

"Ohh..", Raghav sighed.. Thereafter both of them engaged in a formal conversation wherein Raghav got to know about Kamla's new cafe business which he offered to sponsor.. after much insistence she finally agreed... Raghav left the house after some time ... Relieved as one big burden of guilt had lightened to some extent...

P.S Sorry for giving delayed updates but kya karu main majboor hu😆... and I'll try to put in more ragna scenes but to keep the story on track and sensible can't have ragna scenes in each update...

And i din't describe the childhood scenes as they are same as in ema but if you want I would edit that part later to describe it..

Next update maybe more delayed as I've to update others too.. Sowwiee...😭

Happy Navratri!!! 😃

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Short and sweet update. No problem with Ragna scenes, but when will the misunderstanding between the two clear and Kalpi gets to know that Raghav is not the reason of her father's death?
P.S.: Happy Navratras to you also. 😊
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago

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