INVISIBLE LOVE :RagNA SS updated pg4

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2:00 am

clashing sound of clouds causing the rise of thunder, natural lightening willing to fall , heavy rain droplets pouring on mother earth. a car zoomed off but came to a hault at some distance, driver took the car back to the near by tree where a woman was lying by the wood of tree, the woman was heavily pregnant .

the lady In the car came out and checked her nerves, she was breathing, the lady herself was a doctor so she escort her to hospital. the lady delivered her baby, the woman was blessed with a baby girl. she named her "kalpana"

later on the doctor came in to talk to her
' where is your husband ??"
" he is no more " she said tears slipping from her eyes
" why were you lying beside a tree in such a critical condition " the doctor asked again
" some goons were behind me they want to kill me and my child " she replied
" now where will you head, is there some one where you can take accommodation"
' no I m alone, but god will my place for us on this mother earth "

the doctor left her alone and head back to home , when she reached home it was midnight but her son was awake waiting for her
" mom where were you , I was waiting "
" sorry beta , had an emergency "
" what emergency mom, have a look at clock it past midnight now, dad would be angry "
" a little baby girl was desperate to enter this world so I have to help her out "
" a baby , is she cute ??" he asked out of blue
" yup she is cute with big black eyes "
" can I see her tomorrow mom'
" we will see raghav first let the dawn break "

they went to their respective rooms, she was lost in the thought filled with that woman she met today, actually she was kind a worried about her , an invisible was connection there among them. she thought of discussing the matter with her beloved husband


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It sounds interesting👍🏼
Please do continue soon! (If possible PM me when you update😆)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intriguing and grippin continue.. make updates longer plz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome seems very interesting. Update soon and if possible please pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz updat soon. The story is realy nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its interesting...continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Different n interesting story..
If u can pm me plz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow 1 more refreshing story
I liked the starting
Can u plz pm me the updates 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting... Continue soon...
Plz pm me when u update
Edited by UB2500 - 11 years ago
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Interesting
Waiting for continuation

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