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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!!! Awesome update. Can't wait for the plan to come into action. Keep writing 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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M so happy 2 c jealous Raghav .😊 Nice update. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haha...nice plan...superb update👏
plzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Very very very nice. I m glad kalpi stood up to rags! Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Omg! I can't believe Raghav actually when to see a doctor lol
Oh so it Kalpi plan all along and it's working perfectly ;)
I like when Raghav finally admit he love Kalpi
Can't wait for him to confess
Lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 13

Ajun n gauri wink at Kalpi n gauri say

G:I think it's time for Kalpi to get married n settle down (while smile @ Kalpi)(it's part of plan)

A:mom,awesome ideas(wink @ gauri)

J:wow my would be mom,loves ur idea (hugging side way)

G:Kalpi beta, I knw u dnt hav anyone in ur life, as a mother to u, I will find a guy for u,& I have already choose the guy for u sweetheart...

K(blushing)ok aunty, I will nt go against ur wish, n yes I dnt have anyone in my life...(wink @ ajoo)

A & J:bt mom who is the guy

Raghav was happy that mom gonna say his name

G:well!! U all knw that guy very well (pointing toward raghav bt she pointing @ karan who was behind raghav) n say karan.. Raghav got shocked, while other act there part..

A:I can't believe it,mom karan is perfect for Kalpi,they look cute together(looking @ raghav) n cnt control his laugh so he leave n jenny follow him...

G:well karan beta u hav breakfast with Kalpi n I will be bak,she leave smiling while raghav follow her

R:mom!!!how can u said karan's name when u knw I ...

G:I knw u love her bt did u propose her,nahi na so she can be with anyone, n if u can't propose her before arjun n jenny Engagement which is in 2 days then I'm very sorry,I can't help u,because then I have to tell everybody bout kAran n Kalpi relaxation saying that she leave (in mind:I knw raghav u cnt effort to loose her u will definitely propose her soon)..

Raghav self talk to himself,I can't propose her,bt I can't let my Kalpi marry that looser karan, never bt I can't help it while passing he heard jenny say to ajoo

J:darling if I will marry someone else wht will u do(looking @ window where she knw raghav standing)...

A:idk,never though abt it...I think I will let u go (can't control his laugh)

J(hitting him):how would u let ur love marry someone else so easily,if I was on ur place I would fight for my love,at least for once... (she saw raghav leaving n smile)I knw raghav bhahiya u will fight for ur love.raghav walking in toward his room n bump to Kalpi, n Kalpi drop a box

K:can't u see raghav,god give u two big eye then use it ...n stp bumping me,look wht u have done (point toward floor).

R:I'm really sorry Kalpi,I was thinking something,I will pick that for u

He blend n pick up the thing, n was looking at box,Kalpi what is it...

K:its a dress karan gift me (with smile)u knw I going on date with him(jus to tease him)

Raghav throw it in anger n step on it,n say :how dare he, how dare u going with him,

K:how dare u raghav again interfere in my life & move frm the box,abt to leav thn turn n say u didn't congrat me,

R:wht!! Congrat for wht

K:c'mon raghav I'm getting married to karan,dnt u knw that

R(loose his coolness)(hold her from shoulder): shut up!!! Aaj ken dia dobara mat kehna,u will nt married to that idiot,kyunki main tumse,n leave it u will nt get it n leave frm there...

K:(shouting frm bak):kya say na!!!wht I will nt get it,bolo na,(smile,I get it idiot bt bolna toh tumha he par gaye),I'm dying to hear frm u

R:shit!!! Y i haven't say it, miss the chance, bt as mom promise if I propose her she will stp this Karan n kalpi marriage drama smirk.n y the hell I'm saying there name together.k...a...r...a..n & my Kalpi..Kalpi dancing here n there n bump to gauri n arjun n jenny laughing

K:I'm srry aunty wo...me...wo...I was going to kitchen

G:kya aunty!! Hona wale Saas u should call me mom n by the way kitchen is that y (point to other side)...

K(shy):ji aunty,I mean mom

A:bt doll y r u dancing,did urs MAS said I love u

K(hitting his head):will please stop calling him that,no bt he will soon, as our planing workings

A:oh toh bhi would be aur BFF different hona le gye...

K:it's nothing like this...n run away frm there...

...in evening

Everybody teasing arjun n jenny...

R:arjun beta!!tumhare toh band baje wale hai

K:omg!!! Look @ our DULHA,he look like apple pie today..hehe

G:Kalpi beta, leave him n look at dhulhan she is busy in eatting,(point at jenny)n teasing say I wish that arjun married some sensible girl nt to this talkative girl..

Jenny heard this n start cry,Kalpi run to her

K:jenny mom is jus kidding stp,crying..stp it nw waisa bhi in Engagement u will look like bhoot,raghav cme sit next to Kalpi n try to get her attention n try to talk to her bt she keep ignoring him..

J:Kalpi kuch bhi,if I look bhoot urs ajoo will marry me, he love me na

R:yep Kalpi she is rite...

K:let go jenny n select dress for urs engagement..raghav help her to select the dress..

Raghav follow her in house wherever she go...n try to talk to her,gauri n arjun, jenny having fun seen this...n time pass everybody go to sleep,Kalpi still making arrgement for tomorrow n then go to garden raghav cme looking at her n find her Going to Garden n follow her there...with coffee cups

R:heyso miss Kalpi,u still up,kuch khaas baat hai,here u go (giving coffee to her)

K:nahi bas neend nahi aa rahi tha,so I though to cme here.. Bt u here...

R:same pinch neend nahi aa rahi hai..so I though to come here & have coffee (smiling)

K:nice coffee raghav did u make it,u knw I cme here every night to look @ this beautiful moon..n u look good while smile, always smile like this..

R:yes I made this coffee kalpi bt something is more beautiful thn this moon for me (looking @ her)

Kalpi feeling shy n abt to leave n when he hold her hand, say

R:Kalpi don't go stay here with me,I need u n ur time..I mean ur company to finish my coffee

K:actually wo me...wo me...going to sleep neend aa rahi n waise bhi hav to wake up early, bohat kaam hai kal..

R:Kalpi please few more min,please Kalpi

K:ok...she is staring at moon while raghav staring at his chaand(moon) & smiling...then both goes to there room...n turn n toss in bed remembering the tym they spend together...

...pre cap ragHav say I love u n Kalpi faint in his arm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Nice update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Awesome update 😃 Keep writing!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
wow very nice update..
raghav proposing😳
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Liked it a lot continue soon

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