First off...Now onto the story.
Simply put. I'm loving it. I read all the parts in one go and I'm just craving for more and more. Shonu this is too good. It's your first time but one hell of a first time it is. Hell, the plot, the characters, the air of mystery, I don't think I could've ever come up with something like this. Truly applaudworthy 👏👏
(Sid ko ignore kar dena 😆)
I love the first encounter of RagNa. It was bit Cinderella type but with a touch of grey. Him picking up on her scent and the sudden desire. Marvelous. The best part was the encounter happening in darkness. He got to see her but she didn't see him. It was described so well Shonu. I personally shivered a bit but then the lights came back on and I was like "damn."
Honestly I feel for Kalpi so much. The neglect from her family. God this Pakhi...iski toh main...khair chhaddo ji. Meri dushmani puraani hai 😃. I love how even in this one she is just as self-centered and narcissistic. The fact she's pure evil to Kalpi makes me want to kill her but then again I'm sure I'm not the only one.
Wallahe, if I thought the first encounter was hot, then the second encounter was...
Mamma mia ragazza...you're planning on killing me with the Sexy Dark Raghav and the Pure Innocent Kalpi romance. Too good.
I loved how he's adamant on marrying her and won't hear a no for an answer. I don't think it's a secret that it was him who dropped the groceries home before Pakhi could do something that would make me bring out my bad side. Lol.
There's no doubt that Pakhi would think that the Prince is bringing the proposal for her. With the self-absorbed girl that she is, it's of no surprise. I'm happy Pakiya felt happy for her and took the lead to bring her out rather than let Pakhi go and instigate her further. I have always liked the idea of mind-linking in dark stories, specially when there's a dark and handsome prince involved. The threat, the anger, the unwavering strength, it's a deadly combo in a story and you've carried it out perfectly. Well hello, that scene with Kalpi soothing Raghav and him staking his claim on her was mind-blowing! I loved every bit of it!
Lol! Arnav and Khushi. Ahahaha. More time for romance. That was a perfect way to end it, Shonu! 😆😆😆 Love love love it.
Now do continue soon! Now that I'm caught up I'm really enjoying this one. 😃 I can't wait to see how Kalpi and Raghav will fall in love and Pakhi's reaction to it all. It's going to be a treat with a writer like you taking us on this journey.
Continue soon!
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