RAGNA FF : WHAT TO BELIEVE!! :) LAST PART + EPILOUGE + THANK YOU NOTE - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz update it is a good story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Liked your story, diff theme totally..please do continue👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz Continue Dear
As I commented earlier your story is different
I really want to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@sanjulee, @hydqueen, @sunyy, @sumeshni, @yellowdiamond - thank u so much guys for such sweet words of encouragements n I'll promise u I'll never leave u disappointed with my updates..just shower ur love for me through ur precious likes n comments..!!

@yellowdiamond - u asked me how I got a name like panther..well yes it's strange n kinda unique too..it certainly suits my character of story which is an enigma n carries aura around him..just wait n watch ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
totally diff theme fantastic-interesting
plzzz kushi continue plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manikarnikaa

totally diff theme fantastic-interesting

plzzz kushi continue plz



thanks mani :)
will surely do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
About ages:Kalpana was 21 and Raghav/Panther
was 22 when they met.Now she is 23 and he is
24 years old.

Part 2

Kalpana woke up in an unfamiliar place.She sat
up to realize she was on a soft bed.She looked
at her surroundings.The room was colored in
light blue,her favourite color.There was a huge
dressing table with a big mirror.Next to it was a
huge closet that at least 15 people could fit into
there in ease.The ceiling was adorned in white
shining stars which seemed to glow at the
slightest darkness.A bathroom was attached to
the room.It was almost as big as the closet.
Kalpana got up from the bed and saw she was
still in her red sari.She looked at the door...her
only exit.She quickly walked to the door and tried
to turn the knob but it didn't move.It was locked
like someone knew she would try to escape.She
tried pulling the knob harder but it wouldn't
move.Frustrated Kalpana sat on the bed
defeated.Then she remembered.Before she had
fallen in unconsciousness,Raghav had revealed he
was Panther...the world's biggest criminal.'He
must have kidnapped her'she realized.'But
why'.They were a history...a past she wanted to
forget.Kalpana shook her head to get rid of the
thoughts.She felt self conscious for some
reason.She looked around and saw there was a
camera up near the ceiling watching her.She was
being watched!
Suddenly she heard a creak.Her heart began
hammering.She quickly turned around to see
Raghav...no...Panther.He smirked seeing her
watch him.
"I see the dose wore off"he said breaking the
silence.Kalpana got confused.'What dose'she
thought.Seeing her confused face he said
"At the party,I put chloroform over your mouth
and brought you here"
Kalpana widened her eyes.She stood up from the
bed and yelled "You kidnapped me!Why?Take
me back!"
Panther remained unaffected and said in a firm
voice "No"
"What do you mean no?I need to go home"
"Try your best to even step one foot outside"
Kalpana looked at him for a few seconds and
looked at the door.She took a step towards him
and pushed him hard before running off to the
door.She kept running,fearing if she looked
back,she would find him running after her.It was
a little difficult running in a sari.She suddenly
stopped.Her sari's pallu.Something or someone
was tugging on it.Had he finally caught up her?
She held onto her shoulder where the pallu was
draped and slowly turned around.She relaxed
seeing her pallu was only stuck to a plant.Kalpana
tugged on it to release it but it didn't move.She
quickly went to the plant and took her pallu and
began running again.The house was huge.It
wasn't a house but a mansion,she
realized.Kalpana heard a voice.She quickly hid
behind the nearest pillar.The voice was coming
near her.
"I saw a flash of red here"
"Are you sure?"
"Yes"
"Maybe it went in that direction"
The voices suddenly stopped coming near her
and went the opposite direction.Kalpana sighed in
relief.She leaned her head against the pillar with
a small smile.She was a bit tired from all that
running.
"Tired?" said a voice too close to her.
Kalpana snapped her eyes open to find a pair of a
mixture of light and dark brown eyes staring back
at her.She widened her eyes and tried pushing
his off when she realized he had caged her
against the pillar.That only angered him.He
grabbed her arms and hauled her over his
shoulder.
"LET ME GO!" she kept yelling while beating her
small fists on his back.He remained unaffected
and carried her back to the room she had woken
up in.He dropped her on the soft bed.She
quickly sat up on the edge of the bed and stood
up to come face to face with him.
"For a little thing,you yell a lot" he said with a
small chuckle.
"Why did you kidnap me?" said Kalpana with
anger evident in her eyes.
"Kidnap is a strong word.I figured if I asked you
politely,you wouldn't agree so I borrowed you"
"I see..you 'borrowed' me" she said
sarcastically. "How long are you planning to
borrow me"
"Probably forever"
"Yeah right!...I won't stay with you.I am going
home"
She headed towards the door but was pulled
back by him
"You aren't going anywhere" he said
"Let me go"
"Panther" interrupted a man in a black suit with a
gun in his left hand. "Sam is asking you to come
downstairs with the girl"
"Next time you interrupt me when I am speaking
to you or anybody else,I will rip out your
throat,and rearrange your whole
system.Understood?" Panther said with a
threatening voice.
The man slowly nodded and left.Panther grabbed
Kalpana's wrist and dragged her down the stairs
to what seemed like the living room.There were
many men sitting/standing there.Most of them
had guns and had blue tooth in their ears.Kalpana
felt self conscious as she was the only
female.She quietly stood behind Panther hoping
nobody would notice her.
"The girl?" said a man in his early thirties sitting
on the couch,legs crossed.Panther tugged
Kalpana forward making her appear in front of the
men.Every man was staring at her.Panther knew
what was going on in every man's head as he
scanned their expressions.He yelled
"EVERYBODY OUT OF THE LIVING ROOM
BEFORE I TAKE OUT MY GUN AND SHOOT
YOU TO HELL!"
That seemed to do the trick as everyone scurried
out not giving a second glance.Kalpana jumped a
little hearing him yell.That was a first.The man
sitting on the couch raised his eyebrows not
expecting the outburst.Once everybody left,he
said
"What are we to do with this girl,Panther?"
"We will keep her with us,Sam" said Panther
"She knows our secrets.Where we live,what we
look like...I think we should kill her"
"I didn't ask you what you think.Neither did I
tell you what I think.I told you that we WILL
keep her with us"
"She's too dangerous.What if she
escapes?" said Sam standing up.
"Responsibility is all mine.Oh and make sure no
man goes near her.You can't trust them"
"You seem to be too possessive of her"
"Of course I would be...after all she is my
girlfriend" said Panther holding Kalpana's waist.
"Girlfriend" whispered Kalpwna.
"Girlfriend eh.At least now we are sure you're
not gay" joked Sam.
"Whatever" said Panther rolling his eyes "I am
taking her to her room"
Panther held Kalpana's hand and walked her to
her room.She surprisingly didn't put up a
fight.He looked back at her.She seemed to be
lost in thoughts.He snapped his fingers in front of
her face bringing her out of the thoughts.
"What thoughts is Beauty lost into" teased
Panther with a smirk.
"Whatever...Panther" said Kalpana trying to get
used to that name.
Panther frowned "Since when do you call me
Panther.I thought it was Raghav"
"I like calling people by their real
name..Panther..not by some fake name like
Raghav"
"I believe you were in love with Raghav"
"I was...before I found out what a big liar..a big
criminal he turned out to be...Oh and guess
what..I learned his real name after..I don't
know..2 YEARS"
"Oh Kalpana,I was always your Raghav" said
Panther holding her hand delicately.
"Wrong...You are a liar...a criminal!You are not
the Raghav I fell in love with" said Kalpana taking
her hand out of his.
Panther clenched his jaw "So you will also call
me Panther?"
"I will...at least until I find out how to get out of
here"
"You have to call me Raghav" said Panther
I won't...what are you going to do about it?"
"Think about it Kalpi...I am a criminal...world's
biggest one...imagine what I can do,who I can
hurt just because you denied calling me Raghav"
Kalpana thought about it.'He is the world's biggest
criminal.He can definitely hurt anyone but would
he really hurt someone just because I denied
calling him Raghav?'Finally Kalpana said
"I deny calling you Raghav"
There was a dangerous glint in his eye when she
said that.Without saying a word,he left.Kalpana
wondered if she made the right decision.She only
denied calling him Raghav because his real name
was Panther.Suddenly she heard some choking
noises.Kalpana looked up and saw Panther tightly
holding a man's neck obviously trying to stop his
breathing.
"What are you doing,Panther?" said Kalpana
worried for the man.
"It's sad Kalpana" said Panther "Just because you
declined calling me Raghav,this man has to
suffer"
"What"
"It's simple,Kalpi.Just accept calling me
Raghav,and I will let this man live but if you
don't...I don't know how many lives I will have
to take just to make you accept"
The man's condition was getting worse but
Panther couldn't care less.He was stubborn.
Seeing no way,Kalpana said
"Okay,I accept..I will call you Raghav from now
on..only Raghav"
Panther immediately let go of the man.The man
trying his best to get his breathing regular ran
out.Panther turned to Kalpana and said
"You see Kalpi...I get who I want,what I
want,when I want,where I want,how I want...and
you are mine"
With that said he left leaving a stunned Kalpana.

phew..done! liked it? loved it? do tell ur opinion about the update n do hit the like button n drop ur comments here. :)
Much love khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updated Part 2..plz do like n comment :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Plz update soon
N its titally different story
Loved it
Gud 2 read something fresh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesome update
Plz plz plz continue soon

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