RAGNA FF : WHAT TO BELIEVE!! :) LAST PART + EPILOUGE + THANK YOU NOTE

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awesome part⭐️

raghav is so bossy..😆

but it was sweet of him to get berries for her😳

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Wt romantic update dear and plzzz next part very soon...

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Hey plzz update soon ...curious to know further story...😊 update...update ...update...plzzz😆

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HELLO GUYS..SORRY FOR D DELAY..BUT I'M FEELING BAD FOR LETTING U ALL WAITING..SO AS FOR MY COMPENSATION..THERE IS A SURPRISE FOR U ALL AT THE END OF D UPDATE..MIND IT..DO CHECK THE SURPRISE AFTER READING THIS UPDATE..ELSE THAT WILL SPOIL UR MOOD N MY SURPRISE WILL BE WASTED. :)

ENJOY..!!

PS : FIRST READ THEN CHECK D SURPRISE ;)

Felt like doing something a bit differently.You'll see later in the update of what I mean.

Part 13

Raghav went back inside and saw Kalpana was lying on the hay bed,her back towards him.'She's probably asleep' thought Raghav.He turned her slightly just to make sure.She was asleep.The hay bed was big enough for both of them so he slid next to her and fell asleep.

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Raghav was the first one to awaken the next morning.He slightly shook Kalpana,waking her up"Time for us to go"

Kalpana nodded and got up.She rubbed her eyes as she followed him outside.Sitting behind him,she held his waist with both her arms and hands,and leaned against him wanting to sleep more.Raghav understood her gesture.He drove the motorcycle slowly,making sure she was balanced and safe.It took a few hours but they finally reached.They were outside a large beautiful building.Raghav carried Kalpana in,not waking her up.The guards immediately straightened themselves seeing him.He took her to a room and put her down on a couch.Making sure she was comfortable,he left.

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Kalpana awoke to a room unfamiliar to her.She got up and exited the room after finding the door.She looked around.There were many people working or talking.The building was huge and very well furnished.She looked around but couldn't find anyone familiar.A shiny object caught her eye.Curiousity took control and she walked to it.It was a mobile.She picked it up.It looked familiar.It was Raghav's.She heard voices nearby.The door in front of her was open slightly.She peeked inside.There sat Raghav and some other man.The man had a light brown uniform on,with many badges.'Inspector' Kalpana realized.'What was an inspector doing with the world famous criminal' she wondered.Was the inspector involved with Raghav?Or was Raghav some kind of secret agent?Kalpana took no risks and put the phone,in her hand,to camera mode.Taking her hand's position,she captured the scene but fate was not on her side.The camera on the phone had been on flash mode.The camera flashed and caught the two people's attention.Raghav immediately stood up,followed by the inspector.Kalpana backed away.Holding the phone tightly against her,she ran.As fast as she could.Afraid to look back to know he was behind her.She saw the exit but before she could reach it,a hand grabbed her wrist and pulled her back.Kalpana wasn't shocked to know it was Raghav.He looked much more angrier than she had ever seen.He glanced at the inspector who had just caught up "We'll continue on the phone" Raghav dragged Kalpana out the exit and pushed her into the backseat of the car,snatching away the phone.He himself got into the car and drove like a maniac.Kalpana couldn't stop from being flinged to one side to another.Finally at the mansion,Raghav opened the door and dragged her behind him.Dragging her to their room,he pushed her on the bed and was about to leave but stopped hearing her "Are you some kind of police or from a secret agency?"

Kalpana had began to think of all the clues given to her.She was beginning to suspect if he was not reall a criminal.

He turned around "Maybe" Saying that,he left.

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Raghav sat on the couch,finishing up his call.Kalpana had been in the room for many hours.It was around 7:00 pm.Raghav was not in a good mood so to take off his anger,he yelled at the guards for absolute no reason.Feeling calm,he cut the call and leaned his head back on to the couch.He snapped open his eyes almost immediately "GUARDS!" he yelled.The guards came immediately"Bring Kalpana here with the rest of the gang" The guards nodded and left.A couple minutes later,the gang appeared.It was a whole lot bigger than what it was thought.Kalpana came last.She looked into Raghav expressionless and looked away "I can't believe you thought I was from some kind of agency or from the police" he smirked.Kalpana looked at him astonished.Some people of the gang began to snicker.Raghav narrowed his eyes at her "I am done handling you..I have been thinking a lot...I tried to get you to be a part of this gang because I thought you had the skills but you proved me wrong..getting caught by me each and every time..I am thinking to get rid of you" Kalpana sucked in her breath.She always wanted to be free but she didn't know why but him telling her he would be freeing her did not go down with her so well "I am forever going to get rid of you" She snapped her eyes up at him wanting to know what he meant by that.Seeing the looks on everybody's faces told her they knew it.Raghav stood up and walked towards her.Seeing the intensity in his steps,she herself took a step back.Raghav reached her and grabbed her elbow "Let's go"

Seeing Kalpana not move an inch,he took out his gun and pointed it at her head.She gasped "You wouldn't"

"Try me" he threatened.Kalpana followed him nonetheless.He pushed her into the passenger seat and sat in the driver's seat.He kept driving,not glancing once at Kalpana.Finally stopping after so long,he got out and pulled her out too.He dragged her to the door of a house,not answering any of her questions.He looked back at her "Forgive me" He grabbed a cloth and pushed it against her mouth making her drowsy and fall asleep.

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Kalpana awoke in an unknown house.She recalled how Raghav made her asleep and left.She did not dare think of crying but could not help.She thought maybe she was the one who misunderstood him but she was wrong.Wiping her tears,she looked around.It was a fine house with light shade colors and beautiful furniture.Someone knocked on the door and opened it.It was a man looking like he was in his late forties.He smiled at her "Dear..I found you lying outside my house so I brought you in"

Kalpana nodded and thanked the man.She got up to leave but the man blocked her "I should leave"

"No...I mean you're like my daughter now and you should stay here"

Kalpana looked at the nice man.He for some reason wanted her to stay but she didn't ponder on that thought for long.She had lived in an apartment.'The landlord must've sold my apartment to someone by now' she realized.Thinking about it for a while,she agreed.

She lived with him for about two months.In these two months,he was the most sweet,gentle man she had met.He was like a father she never had.He took care of her like one too.She had even began to forget Raghav.She called the man,dad,as he had asked her to.These two months passed.One day,a young man appeared.Dad told her that he was his friend's son.His name was Samar but was called Sammy too.Kalpana and Sammy became friends instantly.About a week later,Sammy called Kalpana "Hey Kalpana..want to come to a party with me?"

Kalpana's smile froze on her face.She remembered the last time she had gone to a party.Closing her eyes trying to forget those memories,she said "I can't"

"Why not"

"I-I am not..a party person"

"Come on Kalpana..please for me..come on"

After many pleadings,Kalpana agreed.She got ready in a purple saree.

Sammy came to pick her up.They arrived at the party.It was crowded.Kalpana remembered how it was crowded in the last party she had been to.Shaking her head,she cleared those thoughts.Sammy and she sat on a table.He got up and offered to bring the drinks.She watched as he disappeared into the crowd.She sighed.Everything in this party was happening almost as it had before.She chuckled to herself remembering.Suddenly her heart began racing.Exactly like it had before at the party,after Pakhi had disappeared.She gasped clutching her saree.She felt like someone was watching her.Kalpana looked around.No one.Everybody was too busy enjoying while she was panicking.Suddenly the lights turned off.She gasped and stood up.There was only a small light coming from the disco but it wasn't enough to tell who was who.A drink appeared in front of her.She turned and saw it was a manly like figure "Sammy?" The man didn't say anything.Kalpana took that as a yes and took the drink from him.She sat down and began drinking.The music was playing but you still couldn't tell who was who.The man sat down across her.Kalpana quickly gulped down her drink and put it on the table.Suddenly the music turned off.The man stood up and brought out his hand,gesturing for a dance.Kalpana smiled and took it.He pulled her roughly and dragged her on to the dance floor.Kalpana struggled in his arms "Sammy..what are you doing..stop misbehaving" He seemed to listen and calmly rested her hand on her waist and his hand in hers.Kalpana felt a jolt of electricity when she felt him touch her.She controlled herself and began moving with him on the dance floor.The other couples had got off because there was no music.But suddenly the music turned back on.

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Na koi raat hai

Na koi din yahan

Kya yeh andhera hai

Ki sirf hai dhuaan

Kalpana felt weird.She didn't know but she felt something big was going to happen.

Aankhein dhoka khati hain

Yeh kisko pata nahi

Jaane kya hai yahaan

Aur jaane yahaan kya nahi

Hai ye maya...

He grabbed her roughly and brought her dangerously too close.Kalpana struggled to keep distance but failed.

Heere joh lagte hai woh

Mumkin hai angaarein ho

Chingari lagte hai jo

Ho sakta hai taare ho

He turned her around,twisting her arm behind her.

Aankhein dhoka khati hain

Yeh kisko pata nahi

With every word,they either took a step forward or backward,with him deciding.

Jaane kya hai yahaan

Aur jaane yahaan kya nahi

Hai ye maya...

He turned her around and pushed her away,but pulling her back almost at the same time.He twirled her around letting her go.Kalpana twirled and stopped when she thought she was far away from him.

Music plays

Kalpana looked around.The light was turned back on.She looked around and gasped.She felt her heartbeat stop.There stood Raghav smirking at her.The lights turned off and she felt a hand grab her.

Chehre hai sab ek se

Tu kaise pehchaanega

Dushman hai ya dost hai

Tu kaise ye jaanega

The man forcibly made her dance with him.

Aankhein dhoka khati hain

Yeh kisko pata nahi

Jaane kya hai yahaan

Aur jaane yahaan kya nahi

Hai ye maya...

The music stopped and the lights turned back on.Before Kalpana could look at the man,she was turned around and her arm was twisted behind her back.Kalpana squirmed trying to get out but he wouldn't leave her.She was now sure this was not Sammy.She gasped feeling a cold metal touch her temple.The metal was very familiar.'A gun' she recognized.There was a gunshot behind her and the crowd went wild "EVERYBODY OUT!" yelled a fairly odd familiar voice.Kalpana felt the gun move from her temple down her cheek and ending at her chin.The cold metal finally left her skin and she let out a breath of relief.

"Miss me?" said a husky,manly voice.Kalpana could recognize this voice from anywhere.She closed her eyes tightly.Not again...

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SURPRISE UPDATE Part 14

Kalpana breathed heavily as she felt him breath on her neck.She tried to free her arm but it was impossible.He wrapped his arm around her waist,possessively and pulled her closer.Her back was still facing his front.The room was empty.Everybody had run away.The bodyguards were nowhere in sight.It was just him and her in the middle of the dance floor.Kalpana gulped as she felt him come closer.He went close to her ear.Kalpana closed her eyes.Raghav whispered again "Miss me?"

Kalpana snapped open her eyes.Keeping her face straight,not looking at him she said in a firm voice "No..not at all"

Raghav clenched his jaw and tightened his hold on her.He turned her around quick,twisting her arm behind her back.Kalpana struggled to be free "So you didn't miss me at all?" he whispered.Kalpana looked into his eyes.It was difficult to tell what he was thinking.He stood expressionless.Kalpana shook her head,afraid that if she tried to speak,she would lose her voice.Raghav groaned and leaned towards her.Kalpana tried to pull back but couldn't.He leaned close.They could feel each other's breath but weren't touching.He looked into her eyes "Last time I took you from a party,you were unconscious..and now I will again take you but this time you will be fully conscious" Kalpana looked at him confused.

Raghav let go of Kalpana.She tried to make a run for it but as she turned to run,Raghav grabbed her wrist.Turning her around he picked her up and threw her on his shoulder.Kalpana beat her tiny fists on his back but he didn't let her go.He took her outside.One of the guards opened the car's door and Raghav threw on to the passenger seat.He closed the door and gestured the guard to the door.As Raghav made his way to his seat,Kalpana tried to open the door but it was blocked by the guard.He wasn't letting her open it.Raghav sat in his seat and started the car.Pressing a button on his side,he gestured the guard to leave.As the guard left,Kalpana tried opening the door but it was locked.Raghav smirked as he drove the car.Kalpana tried to open the door but it was of no use.She looked at Raghav.He seemed happy,kidnapping her..again.She looked at the key in the ignition.She glanced up at Raghav who seemed focused in driving.Kalpana reached for the key quickly,but he took her wrist in his grip before she could reach.Kalpana twisted her wrist trying to get out of his grip.Raghav smirked,looking at the road.He glanced at Kalpana and pulled her towards him.It was easy because she wasn't wearing a seat belt.Kalpana tried to pull her hand away using her other hand "You possibly could not have thought I would let go of you so fast" Kalpana glared at him.He pulled her closer and kissed her knuckles,looking into her eyes "I always keep what's mine"

Kalpana looked at him with a ridiculous expression.Raghav turned to look back at the road.He took a turn and drove straight into the forest.Kalpana yelped,bumping side to side.Raghav let go of her wrist and wrapped an arm around her and kept the other on the steering wheel.Kalpana held on to Raghav throughout the bumpy ride which lasted for quite a while.As she felt the car stop,she looked at Raghav.Realizing their position,she immediately withdrew.Looking around,she realized she was where she had started at.His mansion.Kalpana tried opening the door.It was locked.Raghav got out and went to her side.Pressing a button on his key chain,he opened her door.He held out a hand for her to take but instead she pushed him.Since he was strong,he only took about two steps back.Kalpana got out and tried to make a run but he caught her.Picking her up in his arms,he carried her inside the mansion,ignoring her yelling and beatings.She kept flailing her legs in the air "Stop swimming in the air" he ordered but she didn't listen.

"What the hell is going on?" yelled Anal,coming from the right.

"Nothing..just a girl screaming for absolute no reason" said Raghav calmly.

Anal squinted his eyes at Raghav and looked at Kalpana.He widened his eyes "What is she doing here?Shouldn't she be dead?"

Kalpana stopped yelling and froze.Dead?She looked at Anal and back at Raghav,who stood expressionless.He looked at Kalpana and back at Anal "She escaped...I found her in a party"Anal raised his eyebrows,probably wondering if he was telling the truth "Go tell the gang because I don't want to keep repeating myself to others" he ordered.Anal nodded.Glancing at Kalpana,he left.

Kalpana looked at Raghav confused and began yelling "LET ME GO YOU..YOU..YOU CRIMINAL"

Raghav raised an eyebrow at her "Is that really the best you can come up with?"

Kalpana made an annoyed face "I don't swear so yes"

Raghav chuckled and continued walking with her in his arms.Kalpana began her struggling and yelling.Nobody came to her rescue though a few servants watched her being carried away by Raghav to his room.Raghav entered the room with Kalpana and kicked the door close with his foot.

There were a couple changes in the room.The furniture was moved and new furniture replaced it.There was a mechanical device attached to the wall next to the door inside the room.Since Kalpana was flapping her feet a lot,she accidentally pushed a button on the device.'Locked' was the word that appeared.Raghav smirked "Thanks for making my job easier" Kalpana looked at him confused.He carried her to the bed and lay her down gently on it.Kalpana was about to get up but stopped when she saw him leaning towards her.As Kalpana lay on the bed with Raghav hovering over her,she felt her heart beat accelerate.Kalpana gulped trying to calm down but it didn't help.Kalpana gazed into his eyes which were already looking into hers.She felt her breath hitch.Raghav leaned more towards her and stopped when his lips were about two inches away from her.He let his finger trail down her cheek,making her eyes close.He replaced his finger with his lips making her clutch her saree.She snapped her eyes open when she felt his hand snake around her waist.With gathered strength,she pushed him.She stood up immediately not looking behind.She took two steps towards the door but stopped feeling an arm wrap around her waist"You know you want me" he whispered against her ear.Kalpana shook her head trying to free herself.Raghav tightened his hold and turned her around.She gasped as she felt his lips close to hers.Kalpana tried to control her out of control heart beats but it was no use.As Raghav held her against him,he caressed her waist over the fabric "You look so much better in red but I must say you look good in purple too..or I must say any color" Kalpana held Raghav's arm around her waist to try to steady herself.She felt her control slipping.She knew he wanted that.Raghav raked his hand through Kalpana's hair and pulled her closer.Kalpana held on to Raghav's shoulder.He leaned and was about to kiss her when he heard a knock.

"Panther..the gang wants you down in the hall"

Raghav groaned "Can't I get some good privacy here?" Kalpana pulled herself away from Raghav,looking away.She covered her mouth unable to believe she was about to kiss him.Raghav glanced at her "We will continue this when I come back" He walked to the door and quickly punched some numbers on the mechanical device,making it difficult for Kalpana to remember.'Open' was the word that showed up.Raghav opened the door and closed it.Kalpana didn't have to go try open the door to know he locked it.She sighed and sat on the bed closing her eyes,unable to believe what happened.

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Raghav sat on the head chair and watched as everybody's eyes turn to him "What's the damn problem" he asked roughly.

"Wasn't that girl supposed to be dead" asked a man sitting a few seats away from him.

"Apparently..but she escaped" he answered.

"Then let's kill her now" said Sam leaning forward on his seat.

"I will decide what to do" said Raghav "She has impressed me by escaping so I am going to see if she has any skills hidden so I'll decide what to do with her"

"But what if she told someone about us?" asked another man sitting across Sam.

"I will take care of that" answered Raghav "Now are we done?"

"I guess" said Anal.

"Good" Raghav got up and left without a backward glance.

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Kalpana sighed not knowing what to do.She decided to sleep,knowing trying to escape would be something foolish to do.She sat on the bed and was about to lie down but froze hearing the door open.She turned and saw Raghav smirk at her.He pressed a button on the mechanical device.It said 'Locked'.Kalpana stood up seeing him come towards her.Twisting a strand of her hair on his finger,he put it behind her ear.He pulled her towards him "Let's continue where we left off from"

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