RagNa Os Peace within your arms

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Posted: 11 years ago
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kalpi's pov

I watched the clock as the ticked away. I watched as each second passed away then minutes then hours. Everything seemed to move the people, the cars even and the air. I felt as if was the only thing in the world that had come to a standstill. I wanted to move but this one single question held me to halt was I always going to be the second choice of my own mother each time I was chosen was repeated before me I wanted to avoid these memories for years but today again I was reminded of my position which I contiounsly failed to change no matter what I do, how I do it and how much effort I put into it I would always come 2nd. For years and years I hid my feeling, my emotions and my pain was I not worthy of my own mothers love.

I sat on the empty bench on the side of the road thinking about the value of my life was I so worthless that my own mother replaced with someone else. Each memory of the injustice done to me felt like a stab in my heart. I didn't want move I wanted to hit here and ignore the pain that burnet like fire the pain I had faced since my childhood.

I watched as low sound of the foot steps towards me increased I didn't want to turn and look who it was at this point I didn't care who it was I just wanted to alone away from everyone shortly the faded figure sat done next me to. I didn't bother to look who it was there was a complete silence. After a few seconds I felt a pair of hands covered me with a coat I immediately turned around it was raghav sir it was always him whenever I needed some he turned up but at this point I wasn't ready to talk to him or anybody again a complete silence filled the air . I felt angry, frustrated and hopeless did I not deserve to be loved or to be cared. I then suddenly turned towards sir and his words echoed through my mind he confessed his love to me he said he loved me and I was his world but why me love me when my own mother replaced me with an daughter

"why do you love me sir" I questioned him today I wanted to know why me " why me why do you love me when my own mother replaced me" I repeated again didn't want answer I wanted him to now "am not worthy of your love in fact no should love me when my own mother doesn't love me" with saying that I turned around grabbed and my bag as I was about to walk off sir hugged me tight from behind tightly suddenly my stiff body started to melt within in him I dint want this I didn't want my body to react this way with all my force I tried to push him but he didn't budge in fact his hug got tighter after many attempts to push his away My heartbeat increased I stopped trying push sir off my heart told me to just to give up fighting and hug him back yet my brain kept telling and reminding me that he was boss I should get away from him . I contiounsly fought who to listen and whom to ignore.

"I love you because of who you are, because when am with you I don't need anything else, I love because of your attitude, the way you rise up every time you fall, I love how strong who you are, I don't have words to describe how much I love you I don't think there are enough words to explain why I love you all I need and I know is that I if your hurt am hurt if your happy am happy. You are the only happiness in my life I want to be with because you complete me you make me stronger. I don't have any more words all I know is that without you I have no existence and without you am lost." He whispered into my hear as he turned me towards him it felt as if all my pain vanished I don't know what happened next but all I know is that I hugged him I hugged tight I felt as if I found something that was missing as I hugged him tight I could hear his heartbeat increase did that happen because of me. For the first time in my life I felt important. I felt at peace within his arms.

Sorry for any grammar or spelling errors I hope you guys like it.
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myera thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its so emotional n heart touching :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so beautiful! I love it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, well written👏 I was caught up in the moment the whole time, I could visualise everything. I am impressed by your ability to invoke emotions in the reader.⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfect this is what CV has to show in the show. Awesome please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momrin

Very well written..love it..


Thanks alot am glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: myera

Its so emotional n heart touching :)


Thank you soo much am soo gald u like it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumppurvi

Wow, well written👏 I was caught up in the moment the whole time, I could visualise everything. I am impressed by your ability to invoke emotions in the reader.⭐️


Thank you sooo much for ur compliment am so gald u loved it thanks again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aims, it's a beautiful OS
I love the way u expresses Kalpi feelings regarding her mother
Aww Raghav always come at the right time for her
Kalpi asking him that question "why he love her?"
And Raghav answer was just superb
I love the ending, the happy hug :)
The hug said it all, Kalpi finally accept her Raghav love
Posted: 11 years ago
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this is such an awesome piece of story👏 loved it. do write more & pm me😊

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