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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome. Plz update d next part soon
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Wow nice plz dn't control yourself ragna and update soon plzzz


Haha... 😆 Sure... Thanks... :)
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Awesome. Plz update d next part soon


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Love the update very much...
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Originally posted by: sanjulee

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Thanks dear...

Actually I lost my book in which I continued d story... Searching 4 it,... Will continue as soon as I find it.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi!
sorry for reading so late!
i loved it very much!
you write so well. Amazing piece of work. 👏

continue soon and thank you for the PM. 😊
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Originally posted by: mehr05

Hi!

sorry for reading so late!
i loved it very much!
you write so well. Amazing piece of work. 👏

continue soon and thank you for the PM. 😊


Thanks dear...
N its ok...
I'll update the next chapter shortly..
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Thanks to everyone who liked n commented on my chapter...
Part-8
Banner credits to the amazingly talented : Sameera_12


Since Ragav had a habit to sleep like a King alone on his bed.. He didn't know when he had thrown the pillows away while Kalpi had the habit of hugging her pillow... Kalpi's subconscious mind felt that there are pillows beside her n so she starts moving to the left side n lays on Ragav's chest.. After sometime,Ragav opens his eyes n is shocked 2 see Kalpi's head on his chest... He feels happy n thinks "WOW! She's just looks like an angel... I wish this night of my life never ends..." He slowly pushes the strands of the hair covering her face behind her ear which act as enemies for Ragav stopping him from looking at his Angel n places a soft peck on Kalpi's fore-head... Then he slowly hugs Kalpi n goes back 2 sleep with a joy of completeness...

Next morning,Kalpi slowly opens her eyes n is shocked 2 see sum1's arms covering her... She slowly gets up n starts screaming with her eyes closed... Disgusted by her scream,Ragav wakes up n covers her mouth n says "Shhh.. Shut up.. What do u think r u doing???? Wanna get all the people around into our room.." Kalpi slowly opens her eyes listening to a familiar voice n comes back 2 her senses...

In a scared n schocked tone Kalpi says "Wo... main... Wo.. actually.."

Ragav: "Wo kya??"..

Kalpi(in a shocked tone): You were hugging me...

Ragav (in a calm tone): Sooo..

Kalpi : How dare u????

Ragav: I must ask that question... 1st of all I said I never wanted sleep with u.. N then u come n sleep on me.. Even I have a limit to my control rite? I must actually b the one screaming here n not u..."

Kalpi feels embrassed n stays numb for a while n then says "Soo... U could have waken me up na.. I thought there ws a pillow between us.. Anyways Sorry.. Now u say sorry..

Ragav: What??

Kalpi: I asked u 2 apologise..

Ragav : Why??

Kalpi : Coz I think both of us are at fault here.. So just apologise n end this topic...

Ragav: I don't feel I'm at fault here...

But yes... I really want to apologise for what happened during the journey yesterday.. It was the biggest mistake of my life.. Whatever happened doesn't even matter a single percent 2 me... Hope u just forget it...

Kalpi has tears in her eyes by listening to this.She doesn't understand what to answer. So she slowly closes her eyes calms herself n replies "Neither do I want to remember that moment.I think its better v behave professionally Sir.."

Ragav : Rite. Miss Jadav. Get ready fast.V gotta leave.

Kalpi's POV : What wrong did I do? U were the one who didn't want me to address u professionally n now u do the same with me.. U kiss me,hug me n then say it is nothing. How can u call the kiss a mistake? It is the bestest thing of my life... Y Ragav??Do u think I'm a doll 2 play with or do u have any problem with me? Have I done something wrong in the past...

Then Kalpi goes to the washroom to have a bath...

Ragav's POV : I am really sorry Kalpi.. I can never call our kiss a mistake.. Ur memories were the only thing that had bought a smile on my face. But I can never accept u. I have a goal in my life n now I have 2 finish it at any cost. Taday, U have been in tears due to me so I surely deserve punishment.

Ragav begins to punch his hands on the wall untill it begins to bleed badly n then collapses on the ground n starts crying N says "Sorry Kalpi! I didn't have any other option.. Sorry!"

Then he listens to the knob of the bathroom door turning, wipes his tears n composes himself on the couch...

How is Kalpi going to react after seeing Ragav's hand??? What reason is Ragav gonna give?? Who is going to help Ragav in making Kalpi away from him?? What if the tables turn n destiny takes Kalpi's side??

Stay tuned to know what happens next... 😊


P.S : Hope u all liked the chapter... Both comments n critisism accepted... :)

Plzz throw anything else except chappals n eggs...

Plzz hit like n comment ji... 😳



Edited by sapnapari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice but short one . 😊 😭 .since weekends are without ragna, plz give longer updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: souhasini

Nice but short one . 😊 😭 .since weekends are without ragna, plz give longer updates.


K dear don't worry ... I'll update next chapter soon... 😃
Thanks... 😳

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