FF: 'My World'- Part12 on pg-64(23rd May) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saj1109

I enjoyed this update thoroughly, keep up the great work.

Update soon

Saj


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jass1

beautifully written dear... update soon


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Will update as soon as I draft the part... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jaymaa

Superbbb update 👏 Beautiful Ragna Bannar 👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all I apologize for not being able to comment earlier.
The banner is wonderful, Sapna. 😛
Amazing Update!!! 👍🏼
You've done a really fabulous job writing this. I am excited to read more..please update soon. 😳
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Originally posted by: Pookhi

First of all I apologize for not being able to comment earlier.
The banner is wonderful, Sapna. 😛
Amazing Update!!! 👍🏼
You've done a really fabulous job writing this. I am excited to read more..please update soon. 😳


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I'm such a big fan of ur writing tat I ws waiting 2 read ur comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update..good going..please do continue soon..😊
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

superb update..good going..please do continue soon..😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
They both r sharing a room... Want to know more. Update soon.. PM me..
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Originally posted by: veeranu

They both r sharing a room... Want to know more. Update soon.. PM me..


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks to all who liked n commented on my posts... Ur support meant a lot 2 me... <3

Note 2 silent readers : Plzz like n comment on my posts ji.. I'm not going 2 eat ul up (I am ready 2 accept praises.. 😳 n critisism 2)...


Part-7

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Kalpi finishes her work by the night time. She see's that Ragav has slept with his shoes on his feet n slowly removes it.. Ragav's phone rings n he suddenly wakes up..

Kalpi thinks "Thank God! The phone didn't ring when I was removing his shoes.." n feels a sense of fulfilment...

Ragav asks Kalpi if the work was done(in a professional tone) n Kalpi nods positively. Then he orders 2 burgers n 2 coke for dinner.. Kalpi protests saying that she didn't need the food but Ragav tells her that it is his responsibility to look after his Employees health (hearing the word Employee, Kalpana feels really hurt but then brushes off her thoughts).. Then both of them have their dinner..

Kalpi curses Ragav in her thoughts for giving her junk food but then suddenly feels sad for him thinking that he must have kind of food for all these years...

Then Ragav asks Kalpi to sleep on the bed stating that he would sleep on the couch... She says "NO" due to the concern that Ragav may have a backpain by sleeping there n so suggests that she'll sleep on the couch.

Ragav: So u r a superwoman kya??? Even U'll have a back pain na...

Kalpi: No, I can adjust there

Ragav: If u will hav any pain then I'll be at loss as u will be busy lying here due to the pain.. My decision is final n u will sleep on the bed. No more arguments.

Kalpi makes a puppy face n thinks for a while. She suddenly says "Idea!"

Ragav gets irritated by her antiques n asks "What???"

Kalpi : "U don't want me 2 sleep on the couch n I don't want u..."

Ragav : So...

Kalpi : Let's sleep on the same bed as this is a double bed n v can easily fit here..."

Ragav gets surprised by Kalpi's bold move n asks "What???How can I ... I... I mean both in the same bed? ?Are u out of ur mind or have u sold ur brains sumwhere before coming here?"

Kalpi : Listen Ragav.. Stop panicking n making a fuss about such a silly thing...

Ragav's POV : This girl has seriously lost it... She is thinking that sharing the bed wit a man is a silly thing... OMG!!! Iski kya karu mai ab...

Kalpi continues.. "Kyu Mr.Ragav Singhinia... Don't trust urself..."

Ragav: "Kalpi.. Its impossible..."

Kalpi: "Aacha... Suno... 1st thing is that I trust u n I have no problem about this..."

Then she climbs on the bed n keeps 2 pillows inbetween in such a way that there r two separated sides on the bed...

Kalpi: " Ab dekho... The right is my side n left is urs... I don't think ul have any problem now... N plzz come n sleep now... Its 2 late..."

Then Ragav comes n sleeps on his side... Kalpi smiles n turns the other side facing the wall...

Kalpi's POV: What the hell did I do... 1st kiss n then this... Plzzz Bappa... He shouldn't take any wrong signals... I don't know but I can't bear 2 his pain...

Ragav's POV: What's happening 2 me...

I'm having strange feeling... Y is her proximity affecting me soo much ... I'm feeling complete... Y am I feeling my loneliness has disappeared...

Though there's distance... Yet there's closeness...

What kind of intoxication is this? what kind of belief is this...

Some feelings that were vanished are awaken now..

Words are lost quietly in her intoxication

Her eyes speak a million words...

Desire has taken some lovely turn

What should I say, its not your mistake

My heart has considered u.. my love...

I made my heart a stone which no1 can win...

But why is this defeat looking like a victory...

Your magic has caught me, there is no control..

Something is special...

Something is close...

Is this what v call as love...

Mayb this is love...

Mayb this is love... (Poem credits : Kuchh Khaas Hai song.. somewhat some lines meaning is the same as song... may say inspired 4rm d song..)

With all these thoughts is his mind Ragav goes 2 sleep unaware of the fact of What Destiny has stored for him the night...


P.S :Hope I matched up to ur expectations...

Plzz...Plzzz...Plzzz... Don't throw chappals...

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Edited by sapnapari - 11 years ago

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