ss:test of my love :ragna..

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hlo guys.boring weeknd me phli br lika rhi hu.. this is short story i am writing here.. its my 1st tym.. njoy it.. sory if any mistake..
so now story after taking many twists n turn n situatn now is like dis.. raghav loves kalpi alot..same at kalpi side but due to revenge track n kamla pakhi obseesn,
raghav has to engage pakhi n he was hurt but he is doing to take revenge on kapoors 4 wat they had done 2 his parents.. he does not want but he was unable to
tell kalpi why he is doing bcoz gr vo aisa nhi krta to kapoors kalpi ko bht hurt kr skte hai.. he was in very deep thoughts..

kalpi at her home talking to bappa : bappa mje pta h raghav mujse bht pyar krta hai.. mai uski unkahi batein bi smjh sakti hu.. mje pta h vo revenge lena chahta hai
pr vo pakhi se engagemnt isliy kr rha hai kuki use darr hai khi kapoors mje hurt krde or vo muje bilkul hurt nhi hone de skta isliy usne pakhi ko choose kia kuki kapoor
apni beti ko hurt nhi krenge... pr bappa raghav ko mere pyar pr yakin nhi h kya,.. muje us pr pura trust hki kch bi ho jaye .kapoor mera kch bi ni bigad payenge kuki mje
pta hai raghav mje bacha lega.. bappa mai use kisi or ka hote nhi dekh skti.. mje koi rasta btao taki mai raghav ko smjha pau...

suddenly uske mann m kch aata h ..bappa ki tone bajti h.. or vo jake phn pr kch khti h n packs her bags

raghav at home: aj meri engagemnt hai pakhi se.. mai kalpi k alawa kisi ko soch nhi skta meri lyf me .. but mje kalpi k liy ye krna hi hoga.. kalpi ko mai smjha nhi skta ki
mai usse kitna pyar krta hu... kalpi tumhare liy aj mai khud ko mita rha hu.. kaash mai tumhe ye smjha pata.. sammy sees raghav n understnds how much he is in pain

kamla pakhi sath hai kapoor k ghr .. kalpi apne baba pas jati hai or unhe kch khti hai,.. uske baba use aashirwad dete hai ki bappa teri iccha puri krenge ja kalpi ja lad apne
liy mai tere sath hu beta.. kalpi smiles n takes her bags n go in auto

RAGHAV HOME: raghav tayar ho rha hai.. door bell bajti hai.. n sammy door open krta hai .. kalpi was there
sammy: kalpi tum yha.. kya hua.. mje pta h tum bht hurt ho
kalpi: sir raghav kha hai...
sammy use khta h vo apne room me ready ho rha hai.. kalpi jati hhai vha ..
kapli opens the door... raghav mirror k aage baitha hai ganto se deep thoughts m.. uske hath m blazzer hai bt vo use phn nhi pa rha hai..
kalpi enters n take his blazzer from his hand and raghav sees her ...

RAGHAV: kalpi .. tum...
kalpi smile krti hai n use blazzer phna deti hai... n then mirror m dekh kr use khti hai...
KALPI: raghav mai ja rhi hoon...
raghav: kha ja rhi ho tum
kalpi: raghav ki duniya se dur... mai tumhari lyf me tumhare khne pr aayi ti.. jeene lgi ti tumhare sath.. lyf bht pyari lgne lgi ti
raghav: kalpi suno..
kalpi stops him,, sir muje khne do
kalpi: muje pta h sir ap ye engagement isliy nhi kr rhe ki aapko revenge lena hai kuki aap revenge aur bi tariko se le skte ho kuki aap RAGHAV S ho.. or mai janti hu
raghav ko.. ap ye engagemnt isliy kr rhe ho kuki aapke mann me darr baith gya h ki khi koi muje hurt krde aapse badla lene k liy.. mai aapki hr unkahi baaton ko smjh
skti hu sir... sir mne jb aapko ha kha ta kuki mere baapa n muje kha ta ki ye tumhara sath kbhi nhi chhodega.. sir muje aap pr pura bharosa hai ki koi muje kitna bi
hurt krle pr aap muje bacha lenge ye vishwas hai mere andr... gr aap mera sath khade hai to mai hr drd sah skti hu bt mje aapka sath chaiye phr vo drd bi mere liy
pride hai... pr sir mere pyar pr aapka ye darr heavy ho gya hai... isliy aj mai apne pyar ko aajmaane aayi hu...
raghav: mtlb
kalpi: sir mai railway statn ja rhi hui.. meri train hai raat 11 bje.. thk aapki engagemnt k 30 min bad... mai vha 11 bje tk aapka wait krugi ,.. gr aap nhi aaye sir to mai
yha se hmesha hmesha k liy chali jaugi.. kbhi laut kr nhi aaugi aapki lyf me.. kbhi nhi.. aur gr aap aa gye to aapka sath aapke hr plan m dungi sari ladai jeetugi .. mere
pyar me itni taqat hai sir... to mai aaj dekhna chahti hu mera pyar saccha h ya nhi...
agr mera pyar saccha hai to vo mere pas lautkr aayega ..gr vo nhi aaya to mai smjh jaugi ki vo mera pyar kbhi ta hi nhi... ja rhi hu mai sir pr mai aakhiri pal tk aapka
wait krugi... mere pyar ko haarne mat dena sir.. mai bht pyar krti hu aapse.. mai aapka intezzar krugi... she hugs him n leave..
raghav looks at her n sees rudraksh

kapoor: 10:30pm.. raghav has ring in his hand.. pakhi is there kamla vittal prem sahil .. evry1 is there...
kamla: raghav baba ring phnao..
ragav ki eyes se 1 tear drops... n he sees baapa n leaves 4m there... pakhi hairan hai evry1 shockd
kamla: rahav baba kha ja rhe ho
raghav : aj nhi kamla bai.. aj nhi... aj mai apne pyar ko nhi haarne de skta.. mai darr gya ta bt aj nhi.. n he leavs
kamla: raghav baba kya kh gye
sammy: aj uska pyar jeet jayega... ap sb ne uske aage aisi situatn la di ti.. ap kbhi pakhi se aage soch hi nhi pai kamla bai.. aapne kbi kalpi ka drd dekha. nhi pr raghav
ne use hurt nhi kiya.. vo rok le use.. aj uski khushiyo ko najar na lge.. aj do adhure pyar pure honge... aj unhe koi nhio rok skta .. na aap na pakhi ,.. na kappors.. koi nhi.
aj raghav ki kalpana ko puri hone se koi ni rok skta.. he roars n smiles n give thnks to bappa.. ki aj usne uske dost ko khushi dedi finally

STATION: kalpi ki aankhein raghav ko hi dhund rhi hai... uski bdi bdi aankhoin m pani h bht... train aa jati hai.. pr vo dhund rhi hai jse dikh jae use jise vo dhund rhi hai
raghav ja rha h bt prem bich me aa jata hai.. vo use jaane ni de rha... bht fight hoti n raaghav successfully nikal jat hai vha se
time 10:59... train about to leave
kalpi: mera pyar nhi haar skta baapa.. or uski aankhoin se aasu nikal jate hai... with heavy heart vo train m chd jati hai
now scene move on raghav
raghav 11:10 pr statn puchta n vo dekhta hai ki train ja chki h .. or vo bhagta haoi uske train k phiche ki ruk jao kalpi.. plzzz mai aa gya hu... his hand head is bleeding bt
train aankho k aage se aaojhal ho jati hai... aur raghav shout krta hai .. vo chali gyi baapa vo chali gyi ... vo nhi ja skti.. or he was all in tears,.. n vo vhi baith jata h n
he weeps like vo sb kch kho chuka hai...
suddenly phiche se koi use tap krta h,,. he turns n vo kalpi ko dekhta hai.. kalpi niche baithti h .. vo bi ro rhi hai...
kalpi: vo kse ja skti hai jb use pta hai uska pyar nhi haar skta... muje yakin ta tum aaoge.. mere baapa mere pyar ko nhi hra skte...
raghav hugs her tight.. maano uski lyf use phr mil gyi ho ...
kamla vitthal pakhi kapoor sammy .. all r there sm1 hpy sm1 shockd
raghav: tum gyi ku nhi train me.. mai late ho gya ta
kalpi: mai chdi ti train m.. mai almost apna vishwas kho chuki ti ..ki mere pas baapa ka 1 msg aaya mtlb sammy sir ka ki.. kapli apne yakin ko tutne mat dena.. aur mai
train se utr gyi,.. maano dubti hui meri pyar ki naiyya ko sammy sir ne 1 tinka de diya ho
raghav looks at sammy n smiles
sammy: mai apne dost ki lyf ko usse chinte nhi de skta.. lekin ab tum ise jaane mt dena
raghav: looks at kalpi.. nhi ab nhi jaane duga.. n gives look 2 kapoors like aankho se hi maar dalega ..
vitthal: meri rajkumari ko uska prince mil gya... thnku bappa
kamla n pakhi also in tears
paakhi: sory mai kitni selfish ho gyi ti.. sorry kalpi... ab mai kbhi tumhare bich nhi aaugi.. kamla maa am sorry,,. ap mje sambhal lena
kamla: haan pakhi tu meri smjhdaar beti hai... she hugs paakhi .. n thn kamla gives smile to kalpi also like kalpi ko uska aasmaan mil gya ho
pakhi kapoors ko chhod deti hai,... sahil in guilt n prem in hospital raghav n jo pita ta... neetu also in guilt..
ragna luv story wins.. kalpi wins battle

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_BleuNoir_ thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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do comments.. i wrote first tym... plzz if any mistake .. plz tell .. no problm wit that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful but dear prem ko hospital mein rakh diya tumne sanaa maar dalegi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsume dear👏 .great😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

beautiful but dear prem ko hospital mein rakh diya tumne sanaa maar dalegi 😆

sanna ko mauka dia h mne jake hospital m care kre uski😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenu7

sanna ko mauka dia h mne jake hospital m care kre uski😆😆

hmm nice thought😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itz amazing... 👏👏👏
Just luvd it...
N especially neetu feeling guilty ...😆.. (U actually shwd d 8th wonder)... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful one 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome dear 😉 nd RAGNa's luv will always win ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sweet...but my prem in hospital...nahiii

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