jazbaton ki jung[part-9 on pg 12] - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
hi guys...
here's an imp news for all the readers of my story...😛
actually m inactive for about a month.so am unable to update my story till then...
soory appko intezar karna padega...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-9

Raghav has been taken to hospital by the people in park...

Raghav is speaking kalpi's name in his unconciousness...raghav's parents and sami reached in the hospital

After some time raghav gained conciousness and get up suddenly ...

Raghav: kalpi .where is kalpi?????they take her away...no I can't stop them..why?why?all is my fault...

All enters in the room ..

Gauri : raghav ..what hapeen .are u okay...and what happened to kalpi ...

Sami : ya raghav where is she...if m not wrong then kalpi is with u right???????

Raghav: they took her away...thay took her away...

Raghav has tears in his eyes...sami n all are worried gauri called kamla and vithall...

Kamla: raghav beta ..aap theek toh hain na ..or kalpi...kahan hai wo??????????

Vithal: raghav mujhe tension ho rhi hai.btao kahan hai wo...

Raghav: some time ago we are sitiing in the park sudenly some boys came and took kalpi with them...when I tried to stop them they beat me hardly...and.raghav strats crying...

Sami : calm down raghav ...I will call the police ...they handle this case...nothing will be happen to kalpi...

Kamla and vithal worried ...

Kamla: dun know .how is our kalpi...how they are behaving with her...vithal our kalpi is alright na...

Vithal: kamla dun worry our kalpi is a brave girl .nothing will happen to her...

In a closed room...

Kalpi has mae to sit on the chair..she is tied with ropes ...cotton has been put in her mouth...

Kalpi gained conciousness and shocked to see that person...the person is smilling sternly...kalpi is trying to throw the cotton of her mouth.and she put that out...

Kalpi: you ... why u come again in my..i hae already faced many problems just bcoz of u...i want u to again enter in my life please get away...

Paerson: this Is not done kalpana ...m doing all this only for u.i want to c u happy...but with me...

Kalpi: oh shut up...I love raghav not u damnit...and I know he will surely come to save me...we love each other...

Person: raghav raghav raghav !!!!! what the hell he is...if he doesn't goes from ur life..i'll get him out of ur life like a stone...i'll kill him...

Kalpi: just stop it abhey...tum aisa kuch nhi karoge...

Abhey: u know I can do this...n he is already in hospital now...

Kalpi: what !!! what happened to him.what you do wit him ..tell me abhey how's he now...

Abhey: dun worry kalpi ...i know he is ur life.and I dun kill ur life in such an eassy manner...that would be some serious process..

Abhey stars laughing...

Kalpi is in tears...

[precap: pakhi and abhey are sitiing in cafetaria...rafhav sees both talking and laughing...raghav comes inside and come to both...

Raghav :pakhi u know all are tensed about kalpi and u r talking to this person.,,,,,,and who is he??

Pakhi and abhey shcked to see raghav there...they stands up]

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
HARDLY GOT TYM TO UPDATE IT...
enjoy and dun forget to leave comments... :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Superb update... I am ready to wait as long as u want... I love the way the story is progressing di..Superb👏
Edited by Chinu_Rose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Its fabulous dear
N yes thanks for d pm but plz dis time update soon as after having d update I cant wait anymore
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Nice update
Pls update soon eager to knw hw raghav saves kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
guys i'll try best to update this soon...
n thanxx fr liking...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow beautiful update😊
continue soon..

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