OS:FEELING ALIVE(part 1)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue:
Everything was normal like everyday for raghav singhaniya.dead silence everywhere physically and in his heart. He shutdown himself after that decision of her.he woke up and went for jog.Suddenly his heart started to raise and was beating very fastly.at first he thought it was due to his health problem or so.but after taking an u turn to th park area ,a soothing laughter was heard by him.unknowingly he follwed that melody, mean while he noticed that his heart started to
raise again.In his words he was made alive again.
At somewhere,somepart of his mind was telling him that it was her.he started fighting with himself that whether he would go or not and finally he startedrunning in that direction,suddenly he felt that his breath was stopped there he saw her,surrounded with the kids,makin them laugh she looked like an ANGEL.But he turned back and went away from there.after returning home,he started throwing things in anger,seeing his friend in this much anger he also for 1 sec felt that he was seeing a different raghav.Recovered from shock,he kept his hand on his shoulder gently.Sensing someone presence he left from there,without turning back.but sammy was confused that unable to guess the reason for his friend's anger.
Later,he came to his room , kept his both hands on his head and started questioning himself " how dare she to come infront of my eyes again?"."why she came after dis damn six months?".Isn't she is the one took that decision to go away from me after knowing my feelings for me?"why? why dammit?" he thought while making his left hand fist in anger.

what happened before six months?
PART 1

After returning from jungle to home,raghav and kalpana didn't utter a word to each other.kalpi said everything to her aayi.But thier thoughts were clouded with love,which they didn't recognise yet!.next day,after alot of thinking she went to office,her heart doesn't want raghav to accept her resignation,with little hesitation she went to raghav's cabin,as already expected by raghav that kalpana will come to offer her resignation again was waiting for her.kalpana entered his cabin and said gud mrng sir!.thought he was expecting her,without lifting his head from the file , pretending that he was busy said gud mrng miss jadhav! what about progress of the project report?.kalpi was confused and looking surprisingly at him.

raghav:raghav not getting any response lifted his head and he felt like smiling watching her exprns.bringing her back to reality asked again miss jadhav i asked you something.can't u hear me?

kalpi: said sir that was almost at wrap up.

raghav: good!now u can go back to your work and one more thing throw the letter into bin.

kalpi:that's it.she understood what he meant.thanq sir with a cute smile and asked him sir are u fine?

raghav:iam fine.

Sammy while passing,he saw kalpi and came to her.

sammy: hey kalpana,what are you studying very seriously?

kalpi: sir,project file,mr.singhania said this should be completed before evening.

sammy: i hope u r fine.

kalpi:iam fine sir.why?

sammy: no i just asked generally aur waise bhi u r looking little low.i think u haven't ur lunch?

kalpi: u r right sir,i didn't take my lunch.there was alot work yet to be finished.

sammy: kaam hamesha aise rehthi hai.for this u don't need to sacrifice ur lunch.
go and have it now.

kalpi: with a slight smile yes sir i will have it.

sammy: okay,bye.

After returning from her cabin he showed thumbs up to raghav indicating that
he had done work which was given to him by his friend cum boss.Actually,when raghav
was going out for lunch he observe that kalpana was fully engrossed in her work.
He thought that definitely she will skip her lunch,so,he asked sammy to remind her.

In the evening,when kalpi was on her way to house she saw someting unexpected.her examiner with neetu kapoor!

kalpi:what was she doing here with him?the way they were conversing with each other seems
he was asking something from her.what he want from her?oho kalpi u were over thinking
may be they were talking generally about pakhi or something.she walked off.

kalpi:aayi iam damn hungry,get me something to eat.

kamala:coming beta,i made chapathi with aloo curry for you.is everything fine in office
kalpi,u look very tired?

kalpi:iam fine aayi,it's because of work load.nothing else.

kamala:kalpi,is raghav baba fine?how was his health?

kalpi:Hearing his name,her heart started beating rapidly,with a little stammering in her words she said he is fine.she don't know why just a mere mention of his name creates an excitement in her.

kamala:U know kalpi,paakhi was very worried for both of you.she was scared when u both
were not reachable to phone.

kalpi:i can imagine aayi.what about her?is she fine?how was her foot pain?'

kamala:she is much better than before.

kalpi:okay aayi,i have to do my work.

kamala:okay,beta.

On the otherhand,in raghav's apartment sammy was thinking

sammy: why raghav said to me to make kalpi eat her lunch?why can't he do that himself?
It's because that he is her boss or is she so special for him?

Meanwhile,raghav came to sammy and asked him some file.not getting any response,

raghav:sammy,r u okay.why u look so disturbed?

sammy:nothing iam okay.what do you want?

raghav:upcoming project file.raghav turned back to leave again he turned back and asked
sammy is something bothering you?

sammy:ha raghav.it's you who was bothering me.

raghav:confused me?why?what happened?

sammy:it's not a big thing,i don't understand why u asked me to make kalpi eat her lunch?
it's just a matter of a word,why can't you do that yourself?is kalpi so special
for you?

raghav:WHAT!!.are u out of your mind?what a stupid question is this?

sammy:iam alright raghav.it was you who are not in control.saying this he left from there.

raghav:(in mind) may be u r right sammy.

At night time,raghav's house was bell was ringing...

sammy:who will be at this hour,let's see.sammy opened the door.KALPANA...

kalpi:sir,i forgot to give mr.singhaniya's medicines and this is for him.she gave medicines and a box to sammy.

sammy:what's in it?

kalpi:sir's fav food.my mother send for him.k bye

sammy:how can u go alone at this hour?

kalpi:i came alone and i can go alone sir.thank you.she turned to leave,something striked i his mind

sammy:kalpana wait!iam going out.so,give this to him yourself.bye

kalpi:but sir,before she complete her sentence sammy left slightly smiling.
she went to his room and about to knock but found it open she entered silently,
and shocked to see the state of room.everything was scattered and untidy.she sighed and started cleaning his room scolding mr.singhania in her audible voice.after she was done
she kept medicines and box on the table near bed lamp and left off to her house.

Later,raghav entered into his room and surprised to see everything was set right.
Just then sammy entered

raghav:when did u learn to keep everything properly sammy.

sammy:i didn't get u.

raghav:oh u cleaned my room and made all tidy.

sammy:no i will never do that becoz even i don't know how to maintain tidyness.

raghav:then who did this?

sammy:may be kalpana.

raghav:what! r u crazy!miss.jadhav.why will she do this and how?

sammy:now i got it.u didn't meet her.just few minutes back she came to give ur
medicines and ur fav food.

raghav:then where is she?questioned sammy while looking here and there for her.

sammy:may be she left.

raghav:what the hell!how can u allow her to go alone at this time.

sammy:she said that she came alone and she can go alone.

raghav:u r mad.saying this he threw the file he is studying and ran grabbing his car keys.

Sammy(in mind):No iam not.It's u who were crazy about her.

raghav(himself):this girl will drive me crazy one day.i don't understand how everytime
she manages to be so stuborn?.how dare she?he was driving very fastly
and there he saw her.he stopped the car at a measurable distance from her.
she was walking very leisurely,humming a song.oh she is singing happily,leaving me worried for her he thought.without giving second thought he came to her and turned her forcibly to face him.kalpi was scared and was about to shout,then she saw him and said sir,you...

raghav:shut up!just shut up! how dare you?why r u so stubborn?why u r making everything
difficult for me?is it safe to go alone at this hour?is it necessary to come alone at this
hour for that damn medicines?he asked her with so much anger in his eyes in one go

kalpana:sir,u need those medicines because it was strictly prescribed by the doctor
to take at regular time intervals.yesterday i forgot to give it to you.that's
why came.

raghav:understanding the situation,he left her arms and said "I said that i don't have the
habit of cared by someone.

kalpana:with the same anger said sir iam not the someone in your so called list.IAM...

For both of them everything stopped even their heart beats and silence everywhere
they were trying to read each other eyes and then they were disturbed by loud horn.
kalpi left from there and raghav didn't move an inch from there

raghav(in mind):yes,kalpana u r not normal to me like everyone.sorry!he went back to his house.

Sleep was far away from them.kalpana was tossing and turning on bed thinking that how
can she utter something like that?

kalpana(in mind):why i said like that?why i wanted him to feel me special?why my heart senses pain
in his eyes,everytime i see.with these unanswered qns she dozzed off.

Next morning as usual,she started for office taking her mother's blessings
but she feels a bit awkward to face him again.so she was hell bent to avoid him.
making herself calm,she entered into office.

paakhi(smiling):kalpi!hai how r u?

kalpi:hey!u r back to work?how was your pain?r u okay?

paakhi:so many qns at a time,too bad.anyway,iam abolutely fine.let's go

both went to their places and started their work.After sometime,raghav called both of them to his cabin.Not finding any other way kalpi went to his cabin.

kalpi&pakkhi:sir.

raghav:giving them a bunch of papers,Understand the report very carefully and i want
best presentation with accurate calculations by evening.

kalpi:okay sir.

raghav:miss kapoor any doubts?

paakhi:who was drooling on him,came back to reality and said sir, please repeat the
last lines.

raghav(sighed):u can go now,these are my last lines.Everything was in your mail,just go
through it.

paakhi:yes sir.

At lunch time,kalpi came to raghav's cabin to remind him about medicines.

kalpi:sir,u have to take ur medicine now.

raghav:what's wrong with you miss.jadhav?what u want to prove that i don't know how to
take of myself?

kalpi silently offered medicines with glass of water and stood before him.

raghav was about to say something,kalpi said

kalpi:chup bilkul chup.stop this drama and have it.

raghav without any word gulped his medicines.in fact,he liked her dominative care for him.

kalpi:sir,is it necessary to make a scene everytime?saying this she left from his cabin.
meanwhile,paakhi was watching raghav from her cabin being in her dream world.

kalpi came to her to ask for file,but not getting any reaction from her she follwed
her sight and felt a little pain in her.

kalpi:paakhi!she shook her.paakhi why r u looking at sir like that?

paakhi:he looks handsome and u know what i miss him.

kalpi(confused):why u miss him?he was right before us?what do you want to say exactly?

paakhi:i think iam in love with him.

kalpi felt a tug in her heart and tears started from her eyes...


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nandinidavid96 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice !!
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome👏👏
I loved it, very beautiful
RagNa are amazing again😳
But Pakhi gosssh leave them alone😡
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohh wow 1st part just awesome... raghav follow kalpis order without argue little sad about last scene that pakhi plz update next part soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear..do continue and update soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's truly a great piece of work! my fav part was when kalpi says: chup! bilkul chup!..and order to take the meds and raghav liking her dominant behaviour follows her instructions...sooo sweet! I want to see that in the serial!!
i can't believe there's more!!! pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itz nyc...
Plz do continue soon... :)
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Itz awesum...
Plz do continue soon... :)
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its awesome loved the nokjhok

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